Executioner

by pipedream

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy GameLit Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Villainous Lead
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How far can you go for a wish? A wish that can grant anything, including godhood. Can you give your life? Your neighbors? How about most of the sentient life on another planet?

/// As someone who often skips prologues on rr I suggest you at least skim the last paragraph of mine to avoid any confusion///

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Writer here! I'm writing for myself so I won't really accommodate requests but comments critiques and suggestions are welcome. My mc will NOT be an anti-hero. It may not be apparent early but the mc will be ruthless. I will not give my mc a random girl for him to keep as a pet. SHE. WILL. DIE. I just wanted to make clear that the mc IS will gradually become a villain. ENJOY!

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I enjoy the concept greatly and it has an interesting character style that I wish I saw more of. As I want to be as helpful as possible I will give the author a suggestion that I hope proves helpful. You could include a type of blood magic that you could see in a series such as Project Chrysalis. If you do please try to include most to all elements including sacrifice, boosts to stats, and the chimeraism.