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He enjoyed the city's splendor from the balcony of the palace. It was dazzling, worthy of the Gods' envy- if they even exist. 
He felt something soft and warm embrace him from behind. Arms wrapped around his belly. 
"What are you thinking about?" she asked while sniffing his back. 
"Would you believe me if I said that I was thinking about you?" he turned around and feasted his eyes upon her pretty face. 
"I wouldn't" she shook her head and grinned. 
"Why?"
"Because I've fallen for your sweet words many times before and I will not fall into your trap again" 
He whispered to her ears, "What if I say that I'll give you the world?"
"Cliché" she smirked
"What if I say, that I'll give my life for you?"
"Too tragic" she laughed
"What if I say that" he rubbed his nose against hers "I will love you with all my heart"
She smiled "Then I'll have no choice but to fall for your sweet words again"


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Hello readers. Hopefully this tells you what the novel is all about. 
- Romance (Early romance and no harem)
- Power Couple
- War, Politics, Kingdom building (because of this, the main demographics of this novel are male readers. But female readers can also read this because I will make sure that the romance will not degrade over time)
- Medieval setting
- A touch of gore and violence (not so much)

Release rate - one chapter/day
Map of Western Castonia -https://imgur.com/5ZsaoCg
Map of Eastern Castonia- https://imgur.com/kST4PiA
More maps to come as the story progresses. 

Note: The cover is of course not mine

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
A Dream and a Letter ago
Knightsend ago
Lucia ago
Farewell ago
Nirvana ago
Freya ago
Arrival ago
First Encounter ago
Under the Moonlight ago
The Tulosan Invasion ago
The War Room ago
The Cost of the Alliance ago
A Reason to Go ago
Cooperation ago
Lucia's Realization ago
Don't Kill the Messenger ago
Sending Help ago
A Pragmatic Person ago
Rooster Prince in Danger ago
Sally Forth ago
Mad Men of Knightsend ago
A Knight's Conscience ago
The Oath ago
Redemption ago
Decisions ago
Interrogation ago
Erik's Request ago
Battle in the Forest 1 ago
Battle in the Forest 2 ago
Good News ago
Luther ago
Fake Loyalty ago
The Stupid and the Talentless ago
Saboteurs ago
Escape ago
Burnt Food ago
The Calm Before the Storm ago
A Reason to Fight ago
Prelude to the Battle of Knightsend ago
Battle of Knightsend 1 ago
Battle of Knightsend 2 ago
Trapped ago
A Monster's Cage ago
Aftermath ago
Effects of Victory ago
A New Scheme ago
The Spy ago
The Assassin ago
Disturbance in the Palace ago
The Tunnel ago
A Forced Alliance ago
A Bad News ago
A Race ago
Erik's Resolve ago
Hunted ago
The Cold Night ago
The Village ago
The Bonfire ago
Run Away ago
Refugees ago
Responsibility ago
Courage ago
A New Day ago
Change ago
The Two Lions ago
Blood in the Water 1 ago
Blood in the Water 2 ago
Loyalty ago
The Knight and the Maiden ago
Warmth in a Cold Night ago
Agreement ago
Salt and Steel ago
Battle of Greenwater 1 ago
Battle of Greenwater 2 ago
Last Meal ago
The Pelican ago
Hellfire ago
Reunion ago
War Plans ago
Lesson ago
Old Scars ago
Powerless ago
The Hostage ago
Meeting in Secret ago
Partings ago
Lessons From the King ago
Supply Caravans ago
Into the Flame ago
Gossips ago
Purging the Traitors ago
Freedom's Bitter Irony ago
The Choice ago
Treacherous Heart ago
Visitor ago
Spectator ago
Rescue Plan ago
Night of Confusion ago
Friend ago
Horns of War ago
Sappers ago
Underground Battle ago
Assault ago
War Stories ago
Mercenaries ago
Fall ago
Mockery ago
Break ago
The Night Before ago
Into the West We Go ago
Looming Dark Cloud ago
Prelude to the Battle of the Plains ago
Battle of the Plains 1 ago
Battle of the Plains 2 ago
Inferior ago
A Rue Too Late ago
Side Story 1 ago
Leopold ago
Stalemate ago
The Good Allies ago
Little Men With Little Marks ago
Arthur ago
All Hail the Queen ago
Leopold's Decision ago
Father ago
Castonia ago
King ago
Man Against Chivalry ago
Rickard ago
Exhausted ago
Going Home ago
A Promise ago
Commitment And Happiness ago
Side Story 2 ago
Resentment ago
Enemies From Within ago
Eastern Problems ago
Seeds of Conflict ago
Noble's Revolt ago
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Redacre
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I feel the need to read a new chapter daily!

A well written novel.

I haven't seen any mistakes, or i just auto correct them in my head.

but i would recommend this novel to people want a enjoyable read.

 

elerar
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This novel is excelent

Let me start off by introducing myself and my interests in this website. I am a 21 year old mechanical engineering student looking for interesting novels regarding magic or scifi. Most importantly however I search for stories with an enticing setting and characters that feel real. This is where this story excells. The kingom with all of its politics, people and intrigue feel real, the chemestry between the couple is realistic and their interactions human. However the MC seems somewhat flawless, while I think the characters in this novel are much more rounded than in most novels found on this site I would encourage the author to play into Timothy's weaknesses more than he already has. With this I do not mean that Timothy is a mary sue or that he ought to be made funerable to everything however during the battles I noticed that all his plans worked flawlessly and that the enemy commander was very eager to walk into his traps. While I understand that this orriginates from the commanders personality it does not allow for Timothy to react to unforseen setbacks. Seeing that Timothy has an excelent intelect I think it would be good for his plans to sometimes only succed partially.

Anyone has insecurities and flaws and by profiding a character with these flaws your novel will become better as there will actually be a chance that the MC struggles or that he might even fail. Never the less I wish to applaud you with your writting so far, no sidecharacter has ever felt as a tool to just push the story allong. Each of them have had good reasons and motivation behind their actions. 

To conclude: I recommend this novel to everyone on this site

Zadar
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Good Kingdom building

Overall this story is very good.

There are minor critic points like better explaining how some information are acquired by the characters but the story is always believable.

The combat descriptions are good but not perfect. My main critic point is that in some cases large troop contingents seems to lack 'volume'. Meaning too many troops in enclosed spaces. Or very sneaky and maneuverable cavalary. With this the combat is good but not ultra realistic. Some strategic decisions could be better explained. There are cases which lack strategic options that should be available to the commanders. They dont act idiotic but they should have more options that they can't use for some reasons.

sonizma
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one of the best kingdom building story

that cover attract me to this novel and the story make me like this not bad reasoning story.also gud use of spacing make this story easier to read.gud stories to read.

evilshadowelf
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This is one of the best novels I have read so far. whether I look at the grammar, pacing, characters, or plot it is all top notch.

It even has a few of those chill inducing lines that I love so much.

Gets a five from me.

chay
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the story so far seems good.

the only flaw would be the grammar, still above average, it could be better.

 

the error are mosly about tense you're using the past tense however you sometimes forget about it (can should be replaced by could, even if it's correct the 's is more used as is than was).

the story is reallly good however the more i read the more the grammatical flaw break my immersion in the story.

some edit would be great, just to correct those annoying flaw on this gem

 

i'll update the review as i read the story

i just saw the lack of new chapters i hope the story isn't dropped