True Monsters

by Martin2300

Original ONGOING Action Drama Fantasy Horror LitRPG Multiple Lead Characters Supernatural
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Many strings of fate come together

 

The hunters have existed in some form as long as the vampires. The current state of the order is a reflection of the current state of the vampire’s we face. A grim reflection brought about by needs. This land is as it always is in crisis When men have to be more monstrous than the beasts who is the true monster.

 

When the kingdoms could no longer afford a standing army and the guilds started to encroach on the nobility's power the free mercenary companies began who is better a man who fights for coin or a monster that fights for blood.

 

The mages submitted to the authority of the king and accepted his royal charter-ship with all that it entailed and so the inquisition passed them over for now.

 

 

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - Gathering ago
True Monsters - Chapter 2 - Oh Rats ago
True Monsters – chapter 3 - Even More Rats ago
True Monsters – Chapter 4 – No More Rats ago
True Monsters – Chapter 5 – Miner Troubles ago
True Monsters – Chapter 6 – Bug Hunt ago
True Monsters – Chapter 7 – Setting Traps ago
True Monsters – Chapter 8 - Forestry and Fishing ago
True Monsters – Chapter 9 – What Lies Buried. ago
True Monsters – Chapter 10 – Scavengers ago
True Monsters – Chapter 11 – What Should Be Buried ago
True Monsters – Chapter 12 – Cull ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 13 – Taken For A Ride ago
True Monsters – Act 2 vine garden - Chapter 14 – Oh Deer ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 15 – Brotherhood Of The Black Hand ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 16 – Archanists and Plots. ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 17 – Archanist Eradication ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 18 – The Hunt For Islington ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 19 – Bones Bleached White ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 20 – Into The Lair ago
True Monsters – Act 2 Vine Garden - Chapter 21 – Lose End. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 22 – Into Forge-hold. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 23 – Confessor Calvin. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 24 – Ghoul Lord. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 25 – Stone Skull Trolls and Tribulations. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 26 – Plots and Pitfalls. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 27 – Snakes and Ladders 1. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 28 – Snakes and Ladders 2. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 29 – Snakes and Ladders 3. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 30 – Bats and Bones. ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 31 – Lexicons Bain ago
True Monsters – Act 3 Forge Hold - Chapter 32 – Necromancers End. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good Ford - Chapter 33 – Into the wider world. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good Ford - Chapter 34 – Tin Dragon. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good ford - Chapter 35 – Bigger Bugs. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good Ford - Chapter 36 – Rogue Mage. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good Ford - Chapter 37 – Blood Thorn Wood. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good Ford - Chapter 38 – Shrines and Grimoires. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good ford - Chapter 39 – Razors Edge. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good ford - Chapter 40 – Razors End. ago
True Monsters – Act 4 Good ford - Chapter 41 – Lose ends. ago
Epilogue ago
stats at the end of the first book ago
True Monsters Book 2 – Act 1 Northport – Chapter 1 – Road to the Harbour City ago
True Monsters Book 2 – Act 1 Northport – Chapter 2 Recovering Part 1 ago
True Monsters Book 2 – Act 1 Northport – Chapter 3 Recovering Part 2 ago
True Monsters Book 2 – Act 1 Northport – Chapter 4 Recovering Part 3 ago
True Monsters Book 2 – Act 1 Northport – Chapter 5 Confrontation ago
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bob the bandit wells
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The author seems to have gone to the effort of reformatting their first 5 chapters. They seem to have improved a bit. It seems that this author is using this as a practice to get his ideas out. The characters are a bit bland. If the author continues we may get some character development on generic mage archer fighter and homebrew hybrid guy.

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too give new readers insight

This review was made in part to counteract the random 5 star review aswell as to state that thier are issues with this story. this review was written as of chapter 5.  Date: 06/01/2019 DD/MM/YY

grammar:

its poor, it seems like the author got an idea for a story and started to write it down without bothering to proof read thier story or it could be possible that english isn't thier first language, a large amount of the issues is sudden changes in topic or descriptions or just no commas or full stops seperating seperate clauses within the text, this causes some serious confusion when reading and i've had to reread through a line of text 3-4 times on occasian to try and make out what the sentence is meant to say, the story is presented in large slabs of text that are sperated by rules which aren't obvious to me. the poor grammar really hurts the description of the world, which, despite the issues does sound alright but i just can't get a good picture of the world in my head.

Everything else:

unfortunately, the poor grammar has ruined most of the other portions of the story, as, if you can't convey the story properly then no matter how good the story might be you can't call it a good story.

this is my personal opinion, if you enjoy the story despite the grammatical issues then continue reading. my advice to the author would be to read over what he's written and edit it heavily, cause it seems like you haven't read over it at all, if english isn't your first language then you're forgiven slightly but you still need to edit your work.

thank you for reading

limwanya
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Litrpg that doesn't suck

 It looks promising. It's hard these days finding a properly written litrpg novel so.. Bookmarked and rated