[Short] behind your smile | 你的笑容 (COMPLETED ✓)

[Short] behind your smile | 你的笑容 (COMPLETED ✓)

by Amae

COMPLETED: 01/02/2019

"The loneliest people are the kindest."
"The most damaged people are the wisest."
"The saddest people smile the brightest."

All because they do not wish to see anyone else suffer the way they do.

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TheHoblit
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The whole story is only 24 pages, so  I can't say much without spoiling things, but if you have 10 minutes to sit down and read it, it is a heartwarming story about two friends sticking together that is surely worth your time!

MelodieRivers
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Simple, short, beautiful slice-of-life story. The true meaning behind friendship. 

Everything was paced as it should, the inner monologues were well-placed and flowed well.

Definitively worth your time! 

MineCounter
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A beautiful short story to inspire someone.Even though it was a bit too short, I really enjoyed it. I must compliment the author for writing sucha brilliant piece.

 

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A baka

King_crafter
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 I was searching around for something to read and I found this. I felt that it was heartwarming and a tiny bit sad. If you read then I hope you enjoy!