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What would you wish for if you have one?

Power?

Wealth?

Immortality?

Yet he wished for something different.

In his entire life, he was mocked, humiliated, and backstabbed. But not this time.

He’s was born a human, But they say his worse than the devil.

His personality is twisted as it can be. One moment he beheaded someone next his smiling with blood all over him.

Why I am telling you this?

What is this all about?

Hahaha, you’ve done well to listen to me up until this point.

Let me tell you a story of a boy named Reiki.

Like any other name, it’s plain and simple but to others this name was special. To some, he was their Lover, Enemy, and Savior.

This is not a story about him being a saint and helping the entire world achieve world peace nor a story about him being a devil killing everything in sight like you he was only human.

But you don’t want to hear the story like this no let me start over.

One day Reiki killed his best friend for selling him out and on this day he tried to commit suicide.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 01: Remade ago
Chapter 02: Lucky Slots? ago
Chapter 03: School ago
Chapter 04: 6 Days and Notebook ago
Chapter 05: Day to Day Info. ago
Chapter 06: 12 Blessings ago
Chapter 07: Ancient Tomb ago
Chapter 08: Meet Q. ago
Chapter 09: Tampered Fate ago
Chapter 10: To... Akihabara? ago
Chapter 11: Artifact ago
Chapter 12: Lining Up ago
Chapter 13: Threat ago
Chapter 14: Probing ago
Chapter 15: Hollow ago
Chapter 16: Reality Check ago
Chapter 17: What are Gods? ago
Chapter 18: Debt ago
Chapter 19: Family Tree ago
Chapter 20: Guild Card ago
Chapter 21: Three Generations ago
Chapter 22: Quick Assessment ago
Chapter 23: Cause And Effect ago
Chapter 24: Borrowed Time ago
Chapter 25: HUNGRY!!! ago
Chapter 26: Q's Hunt ago
Chapter 27: Monsters Collide ago
Chapter 28: Show Of Temper ago
Chapter 29: Back To Square One ago
Chapter 30: Business ago
Chapter 31: Who Are You? ago
Chapter 32: The Ratio ago
Chapter 33: Subtle Change ago
Chapter 34: Asami ago
Chapter 35: Rank ago
Chapter 36: Home ago
Chapter 37: Relations ago
Chapter 38: Pointing Fingers ago
Chapter 39: To School ago
Chapter 40: Trash Academy ago
Chapter 41: Confidence ago
Chapter 42: Run ago
Chapter 43: First Encounter ago
Chapter 44: The Amthir's ago
Chapter 45: Scholarship ago
Chapter 46: Age ago
Chapter 47: Culture ago
Chapter 48: Shops ago
Chapter 49: Tofu ago
Chapter 50: Floor Plan ago
Chapter 51: Elora ago
Chapter 52: Coin Toss ago
Chapter 53: Dreams ago
Chapter 54: Questions ago
Chapter 55: Minor Detail ago
Chapter 56: Lunch ago
Chapter 57: Cat and Mouse ago
Chapter 58: BiriBiri ago
Chapter 59: Transfusion ago
Chapter 60: Inscription ago
Chapter 61: Principle ago
Chapter 62: Huh ago
Chapter 63: Drawback Theory ago
Chapter 64: Dinner ago
Chapter 65: Parfait ago
Chapter 66: Leviathan ago
Chapter 67: Haru Netsu ago
Chapter 68: Simple ago
Chapter 69: IOU ago
Chapter 70: Castle ago
Chapter 72: Enora Qinleth ago
Chapter 72: Exchange ago
Chapter 73: Let's Eat ago
Chapter 74: Teatime ago
Chapter 75: Growth Period ago
Chapter 76: Haruka ago
Chapter 77: Library ago
Chapter 78: White Bolt ago
Chapter 79: Lucky Guess ago
Chapter 80: Talks ago
Chapter 81: Deal ago
Chapter 82: Fight ago
Chapter 83: Fairytale ago
Chapter 84: Myths ago
Chapter 85: Revisions ago
Chapter 86: Genetic Code ago
Chapter 87: Questions ago
Chapter 88: 5 Minutes ago
Chapter 89: Dead Bloodline ago
Chapter 90: Alterations ago
Chapter 91: Households ago
Chapter 92: Formations ago
Chapter 93: Imitation ago
Chapter 94: Factions ago
Chapter 95: Library Card ago
Chapter 96: Three Days ago
Chapter 97: Herbology ago
Chapter 98: Accomplishment ago
Chapter 99: Insult ago
Chapter 100: Cold Forest ago
Chapter 101: Ice Heart ago
Chapter 102: Opinion ago
Chapter 103: Quivers ago
Chapter 104: Search ago
Chapter 105: Sweets ago
Chapter 106: Mind ago
Chapter 107: Order up ago
Chapter 108: Tasks ago
Chapter 109: Quota ago
Chapter 110: Familiar ago
Chapter 111: Accurate ago
Chapter 112: Repaired ago
Chapter 113: Meet Cherry ago
Chapter 114: Breakfast ago
Chapter 115: Pickup ago
Chapter 116: The Bet ago
Chapter 117: Farewell ago
Chapter 118: Cleanse ago
Chapter 119: A Bribe ago
Chapter 120: Onesie ago
Chapter 121: Massage ago
Chapter 122: A long day ago
Chapter 123: Sphere ago
Chapter 124: Scarf ago
Chapter 125: The Strong ago
Chapter 126: Reality ago
Chapter 127: Knock Knock ago
Chapter 128: Phone ago
Chapter 129: Weights ago
Chapter 130: The Guest ago
Chapter 131: Stolen Goods ago
Chapter 132: Attitude ago
Chapter 133: Creation ago
Chapter 134: Pancake ago
Chapter 135: Inverse Eyes ago
Chapter 136: Spell Puppet ago
Chapter 137: Tag ago
Chapter 138: Start up ago
Chapter 139: Business Proposal ago
Chapter 140: Messenger ago
Chapter 141: Request ago
Chapter 142: Ahma ago
Chapter 143: Sick Leave ago
Chapter 144: Visitors ago
Chapter 145: The Boss ago
Chapter 146: Invalid ago
Chapter 147: We're Back ago
Chapter 148: Little Brothers ago
Chapter 149: Talisman ago

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Bad grammar, plot and character quality

Reviewed at: Chapter 17: What are Gods?

Re: World => This is a rewrite?? With this quality??
- The grammar are really bad. Almost google translate quality...
- The character and story building are contradictory and full of holes. Some earlier chapter emphasize one thing, 2 chapter later the MC behaves contrary to that.
Example:
 In chapter 1 he would do everything for his sister and he says it to her too... Then after that, he just go and starts traveling and adventuring without saying anything to them... Not even a thought... If I love my sister and happy to meet her again after a few years, I would not leave without a thought of them after just some small talk or a morning greeting... It's like, I'm reuniting with my family after a decade and after walking into the house and saw them I just decide to go and travel to another continent for who know how long...
- The plot are so thoughtless, like a 10 year old kid thought of it, too many glaring holes in it and weaknesses.
- Could not read after 5 chapter because of bad plot and character quality and also bad grammar...
- No thoughts on normal interactions.
Example:
You can just menhandle a princess while her guard are whatching and not even getting a stern look... Also a princess can be kidnapped by low level bandits when she has a shadow guard of much higher level and training. 

kspn
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I tried to enjoy this, the concept is interesting.

However the lack of proper grammer is a killer, I couldn't get past chapter 7 it was so bad.

There were a couple of blocks of text that were the length of 4-5 normal paragraphs, but were a single sentance, no punctuation at all.

I hope that the author is able to improve but I am unable tyo continue reading the story.

Fnord43
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Revenge...of the run on sentences

Reviewed at: Chapter 20: Guild Card

The story is difficult to get to. Each sentence lasts longer than a paragraph in some other works, and could be reformed into it's own paragraph. This story has all the most basic tropes of power/revenge fantasy. The narration style and scene description suffer all the worst flaws of poorly translated light novels.

vikingpunk
Overall

I'm liking the story a lot but there is a lot of missing punctuation.

NoUnicornNo
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Skipping all the general bullshit posturing- this series isn't perfect and Thank God for that. Royal Road exists for improvement. It isn't a professional platform. It's like expecting Deviantart to be Artstation. The development of the MC over the course of the writing is fantastic and there are multiple threads waiting to be pulled on by the author for a fantastic twist. The sheer potential is staggering. And it's a wild read. I'm sure as hell do not earn my living writing however in my opinion Hikkikomori is rockin it.