Black God of Lightning.

by Lazareth

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead

Lucas is an orphan who worked hard to achieve good grades. But before he could realize his dream, he died... However, a God "invites" him to another world where magic is used and gives him a system!

Can Lucas reclaim his former dreams but in another world?

Can Lucas become the strongest despite being different from the rest of the population?

Adventure: Check
System: Check                                                                                                                                                                             

Follow: Check
Favourite: Check
Am I shameless: Check 


Join Lucas on his road to becoming the Black God of Lightning!

 

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. A hard goodbye ago
2. Love at first sight? ago
3. Ignorance is bliss ago
4. Newtons first law dammit! ago
5. " I'm in some intermediatory place between Heaven, Hell and Earth? ago
6. Three blessings and a unique skill! ago
7. A skin defect ? ago
8. A tribute to fallen dreams ago
9. Lucas Lightningstorm's base stats. ago
10. Rules of this world ago
11. Combat ago
12. System level 2! ago
13. Scheming? ago
14. New Spell! ago
15. Evolution ago
16. Treasure ago
17. "It was only a glimpse." ago
18. The scheme unfolds ago
19. Apple of longevity ago
20. Lucas makes his move ago
21-22. "I couldn't have taken her to a less secluded, less rapey place" ago
23. The forest of Talem ago
24. A tongue sharper than a demon dagger ago
25. 2 choices ago
26. Training (1) ago
27. Training (2) ago
28. Training (3) ago
29. Training (4) ago
30. Training (5) ago
31. Training (6) ago
32. Training (7) ago
33. Training(8) ago
34. Systems level 3's perks. ago
35. The black cave ago
36. Anime in real life ago
37. The final beer ago
38. Goodbye ago
39. " Get out of my way!" ago
40. The letter ago
41. The Grand hall ago
42. Test 1 ago
43. Modern day society ? ago
44. The truth ago
45. Test 2 ago
46. The dorm ago
47. The Training Area ago
48. Profit or loss ago
49. Quest? ago
50. Test 3 (1) ago
51. Test 3 (2) ago
52. Test 3 (3) ago
53. Test 3 (4) ago
54. Test 3 (5) ago
55. Test 3 (6) ago
56. Test 3 (7) ago
57.Test 3 (8) ago
58. Test 3 (9) ago
59. Test 3 (10) ago
60, Test 3 (11) ago
61. The Grand Ceremony ago
62. The bet ago
63. Late? ago
64. First day ago
65. Another bet? ago
66. Perseverance ago
67. Skip test A ago
68. Skip Test B ago
69. The demon dagger returns. ago
This novel has been dropped ago
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Lord Luc
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 Some things you might want to change (I only read the first chapter thus no star review).

-Do not start a sentence with the same word/phrase that the previous sentence started with. There are some exceptions usually allowed such as speeches.

-You do not need to explicitly type "he/she said" every time someone says something. Just make sure the readers know who is talking. Ex: Jake glanced over at Elaine. "Thanks but no thanks."

Good luck with your novel