Finley- The Lost Prince

by HavenCustos

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Contemporary Fantasy Female Lead Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters School Life Secret Identity Slice of Life Strong Lead Supernatural

Book one of the Universes Series.

Even if I told you that I was probably one of the most privileged existences in more than one world.

Even if I told you that I could grant any wish you could think of, or eliminate any negative aspect in your life.

Would you believe me?

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Good Commenter (III)
Word Smith (V)
I Am Ascending (IV)
Group Leader (III)
Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: You mean me? ago
Chapter 2: William ago
Chapter 3: The Prince is found ago
Chapter 4: I know an odd guy. ago
Chapter 5(a): The Winged lady ago
Chapter 5(b): The Other World ago
Chapter 6(a): Esmeralda ago
Chapter 6(b): The Man in the Mirror ago
Chapter 7: The Video ago
Chapter 8: Negotiation ago
Chapter 9: One day. ago
Chapter 10(a): At school ago
Chapter 10(b): Getting emotional ago
Chapter 11: At work ago
Chapter 12: The Lesson ago
Diary Entry: Heritage of Fairies magic ago
Chapter 13(a): The Ex ago
Chapter 13(b): The stranger in my house. ago
Chapter 14 (a): Throwing my Weight around. ago
Chapter 14(b): The Reckoning ago
Chapter 15: Elder sister ago
Chapter 16(a): He's not so harmless ago
Chapter 16(b): The Reckoning (2) ago
Chapter 17: Flying ago
Chapter 18: A peasant and a princess. ago
Chapter 19: Theodulus ago
Chapter 20: A Guest is coming! ago
Chapter 21: An Ally ago
Chapter 22: The Prince and The General ago
Chapter 23 (a): The General and The Prince ago
Chapter 23 (b): The General and The Prince ago
Chapter 24: Just pick an archetype and stick to it! ago
Chapter 25: Jake and Alice (Part 1) ago
Chapter 26: The General's Apology (Part A) ago
Chapter 26: The General's Apology (Part B) ago
Chapter 27: Jake and Alice (Part 2) ago
Chapter 28: The General's Apology (Part C) ago
Chapter 29: Jake and Alice are through ago
Diary Entry: Rest (Fairies) ago
Diary Entry: Brief explanation on the history of the world ago
Diary entry: The Impact of Royalty (Fairies) ago
Diary entry: Genealogy of the royal family (Fairies) ago
Diary entry: Magic ago
Diary Entry: Aide ago
Chapter 30: The Generals Apology (Part D) ago
Chapter 31: Can you come home with me? ago
Chapter 32: Caught up in the moment ago
Chapter 33: The Sealing ago
Chapter 34: The Sealing Worked ago
Chapter 35: Comradeship ago
Chapter 36: Going out ago
Chapter 37: The Course ago
Chapter 38: Finley, Cai and Aies ago
Chapter 39: Finley, Cai and Aies (Part B) ago
Chapter 40: Acker ago
Chapter 41: Is this what a poor government-dependent student lives like? ago
Chapter 42: I'm not a hero ago
Chapter 43: What do we do? ago
Chapter 44: A nagging memory ago
Chapter 45: A blood feud ago
Chapter 46: The Little Tyrant ago
Chapter 47: The Confrontation ago
Chapter 48: I did like her ago
Chapter 49: A Little Monster ago
Chapter 50: Confirmed ago
Chapter 51: What if you were a bad person? ago
Chapter 52: Tacky ideas ago
Chapter 53: Watch out! ago
Chapter 54: Overprotective ago
Chapter 55: Using your own resources isn't cheating. ago
Chapter 56: a Regalis and an Olcay ago
Chapter 57: Beast vs Bug ago
Chapter 58: The Three ago
Chapter 59: The Inter-species ball ago
Chapter 60: Jaya returns ago
Chapter 61: Annoying ago
Diary entry: Contamination ago
Chapter 62: A Lost Cause ago
Chapter 63: Rubella ago
Chapter 64: Deadweight ago
Chapter 65: Only one shot ago
Update on life ago
Chapter 66: Have you ever. even once. considered thinking before you spoke? ago
Chapter 67: Your highness... are you an idiot? ago

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A good story for those looking for it's kind.

As of chapter 20, I would say this is a good story. A good style, grammar could use some edits, and the author is doing a decent job to flesh out the character's and build the world. Now my only issue would be that the story seems a tad bit too slice of life for my tastes, like a Disney princess/high school  story, not a bad thing but not what I'm looking for at the moment. All said ,it's a good story if action and mad fights aren't your speed or your looking to take a break from all that,then you would probably enjoy this. Best of luck to the author.