Alfarome: Volper

by RosPer

Original ONGOING Action Sci-fi Cyberpunk LitRPG Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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What can you do when you only have two years left under the sun? You can, for instance, keep to yourself and lose all contact with reality. You can spend all this remaining time feeling sorry for yourself and crying… But I decided to act in a completely different way: if you have just a few years left to live, then why not enjoy yourself to the fullest? But how would I do that? It’s a piece of cake, since there is a virtual reality I can run to. And, as I’ve found out, there is a new project being launched pretty soon, about which only scarce info has been given by different sources.

 

"Are you fed up with elves, gnomes and other typical races from fantasy novels for teenagers? Sick and tired of reading about medieval battles and life in those dark times? Then, welcome to Alfarome! What’s in store for you here? It’s a brand new game, in the genre of post-apocalyptic cyberpunk, that tests your endurance! And what else can you hope for? That's top secret, because any information can bring you money and you could make loads of it in the game! "©

The only information available is on the official website of the game Alfarome.

Well, I’d love to go back to the old good days, when I was young and hale. Taking into account my past, this kind of virtual world will be just perfect for me!

 

The author would like to thank the translator and director of Liberty Language School Anton Raksha for translation and the teacher and TV presenter John King for proofreading the present book.  

Translate: Anton Raksha

Proof-reading: John King

Proof-reading: Damir Isovic

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Kir Droi
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Really a good read. Once I got into the story, and it really took off. Would recommend to others interested.

Paul Kite
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Great series! I recommend comrade)

 

The overall story gradually develops throughout the series, which is very competent, because if the author answered all the questions in the first part, it would not be so interesting to read further. The book behind the book opens the surrounding world overgrown with details, the characters of the characters are revealed and the intrigue is very famously twisted. GG is very positive, but far from enthusiastic youngster and wets heartily, without hitting a prolonged self-digging quickly solves the problems that arise, as befits a warrior. The author really has a decent syllable, so the reasoning and descriptions do not strain, but add the necessary details at the right time. It is also desirable to understand that this is a light entertaining read and the author does an excellent job with this task, not forgetting about difficult moments, which also pleases.

Owlish
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A decent part of a book.

Leaving a review after reading 20 chapters, which I bet is all that will appear on RR. The main and really only character is a bit strange, to some extent blundering through the game, to some extent knowing exactly what he wants and going directly for it. Grammar is great for RR, I'd guess it's been professionally edited. One scene near the beginning, in which the MC dreams of an incident in his life, struck me as very odd. Also, there's a scene in which the MC tortures 5 bandits to death/respawn, which might need more than the Gore tag.