I don't want to be the Hive Queen

by ValetheHowl

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Gender Bender Magic Non-Human lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Marcus is a young man that had a very bad day at work. 
First, he had a horrible customer during his shift. Then he got fired by his boss. And after that, he got shot to death during a robbery. 
And to top it all of, he awakened with the body of a weak and strange creature in a fantasy world full of deadly monsters. 

And that's just Monday!

Now Marcus will have to find a way to survive as a Vex Queen, but to do so his bravery and determination are not enough. He needs to build a hive that will protect him, as it won't be just monsters that he'll have to face... 


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The release schedule for this novel should be one chapter per week.

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*UPDATE*

As of the latest chapter (13), the author has not only used quotation marks for dialog, but has gone back and edited the previous chapters and swapped the dashes for quotation marks. Old review is below.

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No major problems with the story or the characterizations as of Chapter 11, At Turtle's Pace. -2 Stars for using dashes in place of quotation marks when writing dialog, even if there is only one person talking. It isn't like the author isn't using any, quotation marks either. Early on, there's a quote from the main character's father, and the author uses quotation marks there.

Author, change the dashes to quotes and that'll add a star and a half, maybe two, depending on how the story goes.

Barnbunny
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Has some potential same old reincarnation story with a interesting idea hopefully the author can make the hive queen concept be more then just a sidelined idea the MC has to deal with and more a fouces point that drives the story. We will just have to wait and see where the author gose with it hopefully he expands on the concept and turns it into a good story.

Hyeon
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 i like the concept so far it is something i haven't seen like this before, im interested in seeing more, there is alot of potential :) please keep it up

Tacroy
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Good story, weird punctuation

This is a fairly standard isekai, with some interesting twists. The main problem I have with it is that the author seems to think that a single dash is appropriate punctuation to indicate that someone's talking, which is weird as hell.

Nim Skoll
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Overall this is a book that can only be truly reviewed when the kingdom building comes into play and it hasn’t quite reached that point at chapter 16 so this review will just be based on the survival as a monster story-type. The MC is pretty well thought out and realistic when it comes to the confusion of mental gender versus body gender. He/she shows small growth with what I’ve read but even that is something unusual. I must say even with such few chapters I will likely read much further so long as it isn’t complete sh*t later on. 

This has been a review by the elusive Nim. Please give this book a shot. And Author-san notice meeeeeeee

Aso Kurd
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good story hopefully you won't drop the story