Goblin Progenitor

by Goblin_Kun

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Harem LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content

Jon was finishing up another horrible date, one among many, thinking about how alone he felt now more than ever. 

When suddenly fate shined its bright headlights of Resurrection onto him.

Lighting up a path to never feeling alone again! 

In a goblin horde!? 

As the mythical Goblin Progenitor!

 

I would like to apologize in advance for the first few chapters - as they are not super coherent in grammar or past present tenses. I try to improve as I go, the further chapters I feel are a lot better. I will keep striving to improve the story and fix things when the chance presents itself

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Goblin Progenitor - Death ago
2. Birth ago
3. Connecting ago
4. Realization ago
5. Round one - Fight! ago
6. Choice ago
7. Seperation ago
8. Alone ago
9. Relocation ago
10. Training ago
11. Sun Soakers ago
Waking up from a nightmare ago
Mother ago
Let me see your war face. ago
Grinding ago
Hunting ago
Reward ago
Round Two! Fight! ago
Daylight ago
Scouting ago
Assault ago
Progenitor Activate ago
The strong rule the weak ago
Who is the Boss ago
Battle! ago
Fate ago
I am the Boss ago
Parental 101 ago
Back to work. ago
Wrecked ago
Deception ago
Retrouvaille ago
Fire ago
Scorched Earth pt 1. ago
Scorched Earth Pt. 2 ago
Scorched Earth Pt.3 ago
Scorched Earth Part. 4 ago
38. Scorched Earth Pt. 5 ago
39. Scorched Earth pt. 6 ago
40. Trapped ago
41. Safe ago
42. It is getting worse! ago
43. Happy place ago
44. Exploit ? ago
45. Firekeeper ago
46. The Old Ways ago
47. Promise ago
48. Free Will ago
49. Fixing whats broken ago
Free your mind ago
51. Getting rid of Burdens ago
52. Onward! ago
53. Revenge ago
54. Forgiveness ago
55. Medivac ago
56. 2nd Generation ago
57. Family Planning ago
58. Rise of the Drake Clan ago
59. Causality ago
60. Into the sunset ago
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molenir
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I understand that not everyone likes the same types of stories, so I can understand some of the reviews here.  But others are just completely unreasonable.  Seriously, some of these reviews here are incredible.  Did you read the same story I did?

So, its the story of a guy reincarnated into a goblin.  Who has a system.  So far, similar to many other stories.  He quickly becomes rather OP.  The setup with Truck-kun is obviously done for humor.  Then the story basically becomes slice-of-life with powerups.  Overall though pretty interesting and fun, as the MC tries to fight his evil goblin nature.

There are some obvious problems with characterization.  I mean a girl who had her mother murdered, is not going to jump into bed with one of the monsters that helped murder her.  Regardless of how nice he treats her.  Other issues like with Sala, and others not exactly acting like Goblins, even if he has "treated" them.

One thing I do appreciate, is that despite the sex, we don't need to read about the groping and the thrusting.  The story thankfully fades to black.  Also, the story does have some minor issues with grammar.  Mostly just misspellings and occasional weird words.  Nothing to really take away from the story though.

Overall this is a pretty good story.  Give it a chance, particularly if you like Re:Monster, or slice-of-life stories in general.

Aesoir
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read with a grain of salt

This is a beginner story. So it has many of the flaws that come with it. Personally I made it to chapter 3, and frankly it needs work.

Grammar: is not too bad. Most likely written by a native speaker, or at least checked through grammarly.

Style: poor. Specifically because he switches from 1st person to 3rd person between chapter 1 and 2. Then is very clumsy with the 3rd person perspective ( labeling each character every time they say something or have an interaction, using [jon] instead of descriptive naming, example:"screw you" Jon screamed as he jumped at the goblin) etc.

Story: mediocre? standard initial reincarnation with use of a system to bypass language barrier issues (I personally cant stand this trope, it cheapens character development). SPOILER: Initial interactions between MC and mother are unrealistic (a raped woman who views a monster with slightly non monstrous features would still be repulsed, regardless of eye color. It would require a lot of trust building.).

Character: couldn't get far enough into the story, but considering that there was very little development pre-reincarnation, there's not much there. (This is an often missed opportunity to really develop a characters baseline before the change, this isnt a deal breaker, but it's actually harder to establish later on).

Overall: it's a beginner story, read it with a grain of salt.

Contradiction
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Not good (as of scorched earth pt. 3)

I like evolution stories. I like monster stories. So I thought I'd love this story. I was wrong.

Combine weeaboo with skill whores and you get this garbage. 

Weeaboo nonsense = truck-kun, being bonked on the head repeatedly, beta m.c. that blushes at the thought of sex, seeing a woman in danger and deciding he has to save her ( even though she tried to light him on fire repeatedly, and he himself realizes he's nowhere near ready to change the status quo.) It seems like the author goes out of his way to create enemies people will hate so  the m.c. can have a moral high ground too.

Skill whore= just touching people and absorbing their skill. No need to figure out how to use it, just spam it over and over to upgrade its level.

Other characters ( sala ) acting like bashful teenager rather than the bloodthirsty murder-hobo she is.

It's just not a good story. I think this is an authors first work, so don't set your expectation to high.

Arte
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Decently done goblin reincarnation

Pretty standard beginning to a reincarnation story. The big thing that stands out to me is that the main character actually stays a goblin (so far anyway) instead of immediately jumping from goblin to [insert loosely but not really related monster variant here] within a few chapters. I also like the stat and trait system so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses over time.

Stephen Lewis
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Ch60

I enjoyed the style and story nothing earthshattering but it was a simple fun read

I guess my only issue( not really an issue dont know how else to describe it) is I guess the mc cares to much I dont know I have been on asshole villian mc kick for awhile so that could have colored/squed my perception 

Decent read I dont remember any atrocious errors that made me want to pull my eyes out

Tldr worth a try 

Christopher Robinson
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The story is pretty good and has great potential. Keep it up I'm looking forward to what's next.

Alexandre Jose
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I liked the story, I would like to know the frequency of releases because I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Pez
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Read through chapter 40.  The bloodline abilities are pretty interesting and fun, making this different than a lot of the other LitRPG's I've read.

 

What bogs this down is the poor editing, and the painfully typical Japanese light novel behavior of the characters.  The 'blushing', the "I don't like you but I like you' behavior, the 'omg there are boobs on me' thoughts.

The MC belongs to a race of rapists.  He gets more powerful through breeding.  Yet he doesn't take partake.  This is not a bad thing, since the MC is a 'white knight'.  But with the premise so rooted in such evil acts (rape and slavery), the 'slice of life' feel of the story just seems off.  

This has a "Reincarnated as a Slime" and "Re:Monster" feel to it, leaning more to the Slime side for the MC.

Jcmb
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Moar nobziz plz jk

liked it alot! tnx! keep it up! looking forward for more!

ps amused by revie... ehm... commenters saying stuff like 'read 3 chapters - its bad'... if I were to rate chapter 1 it might be around 2-4/10 while chapter 60 would be around 8-9/10, roughly... and well ofc in many matters it still depends alot on taste - on which point: tnx for tryna build a complex system! I don't think I've ever seen in anywhere, at least that has to do with fantasy or the like... and of such quality(or maybe at least potential quality~) maybe even anywhere else - hehe, I myself was starting getting stressed as to where I'd allocate those evolution points as if I was actually the one there lmao

Zero_01
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My only critisism is that there is not enought chapters.................more drugs................................more