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A [Hive], the body of a creature that lures in prey like [Humans], monsters and animals in order to grow. Devouring their [Magic Power] which resides in every living body.

Within the [Hive] exist many creatures to guard it and kill the lured in prey. But not all of these creatures are mindless monsters. A 'breeder' is born to help the [Hive] with converting the [Magic Power] and creating monsters and soon starts to wonder about the world it is living in. A quest to satisfy its curiosity begins.

- Warning: This is my first story and english isn't my native language. There might be grammatical errors and badly chosen sentences. -

- Sadly still on HIATUS due to work and living expenses and such stupid stuff.. -

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 001 - Birth ago
Chapter 002 - Color ago
Chapter 003 - Time and Consciousness ago
Chapter 004 - Ignorance ago
Chapter 005 - Inside the Settlement ago
Chapter 006 - Minerals ago
Chapter 007 - Variation ago
Chapter 008 - Resolve ago
Chapter 009 - Movements ago
Chapter 010 - Wisp ago
Chapter 011 - Blazing Hellhound ago
Chapter 012 - Under Siege ago
Chapter 013 - Foundations ago
Chapter 014 - False Mercy ago
Chapter 015 - Lection One: Always Stay Vigilant ago
Chapter 016 - A Loyal Minion ago
Chapter 017 - Lily ago
Chapter 018 - Orcs ago
Chapter 019 - Staying Alive ago
Chapter 020 - Lily - Point Of View ago
Chapter 021 - Change ago
Chapter 022 - Long Live The [Queen] ago
Chapter 023 - Under The Moonlight ago
Chapter 024 - Revelation ago
Chapter 025 - Idrils Legacy ago
Chapter 026 - Will Of The Hive ago
Chapter 027 - Back In The Village ago
Chapter 028 - Moving On ago
Chapter 029 - Slavery ago
Chapter 030 - Arrangements ago
Chapter 031 - Step By Step ago
Chapter 032 - Next Step ago
Chapter 033 - Traveling ago
Chapter 034 - Scheming Of The Church ago
Chapter 035 - The Feeling Of Despair ago
Chapter 036 - The End Of A Hive ago
Chapter 037 - Future Plans ago
Chapter 038 - Beginning Of A Long Day ago
Chapter 039 - Reserve Of The Shadows ago
Chapter 040 - Midday Shadow ago
Chapter 041 - Lightless Afternoon ago
Chapter 042 - Setting Sun ago
Chapter 043 - To Advance ago
News - (not a chapter, just news, sorry) ago
Chapter 043.5 – Feeling Lost (Mina) ago
Volume 2, Chapter 044 – Saving A Village, Losing A Village ago
Volume 2, Chapter 045 – A New Beginning ago
Rough Summary Till C045 ago
Volume 2, Chapter 046 – Becoming A Diplomat ago
Volume 2, Chapter 047 – Being A Friendly Diplomat ago
Volume 2, Chapter 048 – Showing Dominance ago
Volume 2, Chapter 049 – Control ago
Volume 2, Chapter 050 – Survival Of The Fittest (Danar) ago

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Creative and original. Something to be proud of.

Great read, somehow Skalsar has me rooting for the Breeder, hoping to see it dupe the humans into feeding it, while seeming inoffensive.


Has me hanging on the edge of my seat to see what happens next!

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This has something to it!

What an interesting word, I didn't expect a story like this or for it to go such a route, I want more! Keep it up and more people should really review and rate you!

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'Lair' really shows a whole new perspective and has that certain vibe that leaves readers hooked to this lightnovel, even if my review is wrong and people say otherwise, I'll make sure to double-check for updates


Keep up the great work since this story brought a whole new way of plot besides starting it with reincarnations and Virtual Reality MMORPGs and a whole lot of Sci-fi mix-ins

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this is a new take on the idea of MC being the monster and it'sit's written really well. Please update often :-)

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Sadly, the author pretty much dropped the novel in the middle. It's strange, as he could've easily brought it to a decent ending with one or two more epilog chapters  as the first arc was pretty much over. 


Anyway, the chapters he did write were good. The first chapters by far the best, as they tell you the story of a dungeon monster that likes it's Lord. It becomes pretty predictable later on, but still fun to read! 


Grammer was pretty good as well, there were some errors like live instead of life but they don't detract from the story at all. 


Several of the characters seem interesting. I would've loved to get to know more about them, but alas, the story  seems to be  dropped. 


On another site I would like to rate it a 4 star, but on royal road that seems to be taken as an insult, so I will rate it with the inflated 5 star rating everyone seems to want. 

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So interesting I'm staying up instead of sleeping.

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Interesting progression in writing style as the "dialogue" and observations from the MC go from simplistic to complex and in depth as the MC grows.

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Original and immersing

The style of the story is unique if I dare say. The story is fresh and change of what you may be used to read on RRL. The furhter you dive in the story, the more immersing and addicting it is!


A great read, I invite you to try it out ! :)

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The story is interesting, the characters are funny, and overall this is thoroughly enjoyable.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

Although there are a couple of spelling errors.

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Refreshingly Great Story from the opposit POV!

It’s great for everyone who likes authentic, innovative stories without the generic harem crap.

Keep up da good work!