The Strongest Skill 2: Eating My Way To Top

by Kinu456

Original HIATUS Action Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead School Life Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

[Ding* you have eaten a Goblin King’s Core]

[AGI +5][STR +5]

[Gained unique trait: Shout]

In a changed world where mythical monsters and fantastical beings live side by side with modern human society, Shiiki Yuu, an average schoolboy, usually bullied by others, undergoes a life-changing experience when he accidentally swallows a shiny candy-like object that just happens to be a...

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My second book under the same name.

This book is entirely different from the first book, although the powers of the MC remained somewhat same. The story, the characters, and the plotline everything about it is different from the first book.

It is not a sequel!!

Hopefully, this book would satisfy the readers and wouldn’t turn out to be as mediocre as my previous one.

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FalleN
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This is one of those stories that gets overlooked which in this situation it should be hugely frowned upon.
Solid story, waiting for more.

Dragon G'lant
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I found this more disgusting than the 1st novel.

All you did was copy a real author's work (Beserk of Gluttony) change the setting and characters and make shit up while not sticking to your own rules nor did you explain ANY skill except shout. You dropped MC's stats the very chapter after they were raised, you have no level system and the MC's personality did a 180 just because he could lift 4 and 1/2 kilograms instead of 2 and suddenly becomes a faster sprinter than Usaine Bolt (Fastest human sprinter in the world) when MC's base top speed was 40km/h. Then there's the screwed up economy. 1000$ for the sticky underwear of one of the smallest of small fry and 100$ for their cores which are a greater rarity than their underwear. MC was to get 5% from being a guide which would have equalled around $500-600 when the MC barely earns $150 per week total from 2 part time jobs. Then appraising items and loot all day give him $10-20? Frankly Kinu, this story is a greater pile of shit than your original Strongest Skill novel. While you have dedication to writing, I wouldn't call any of this even worth looking at. It takes 6-7 chapters JUST to get to the main part the synopsis talks about. You do realise a synopsis loosely describes the event that kicks the story off... in the 1st chapter. You also say this isn't a sequel to the 1st novel yet it's practically the same just a lot more trashier. If I could have rated this lower than 0.5 stars I would have. Don't continue this story until you learn how to actually write ANYTHING let alone a novel.

Free_Time
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I really like novels that have this kind of story, i always search a novel that have a similar story but what  i found either already completed/hiatus or not as good as this. it's too bad that this novel already HIATUS when i found this

please continue, i'm waiting for revival

Inbetweenaction
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The instant nudles of novels

Quite similar to the other work of the author  

 

The work is not original  if you are looking for a unique and engaging story or am interesting new take on an old subject,  This is not it.

 

It is  However, a decent time waster. Its not great, but it is not bad. 

jackfrost13
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still in early stage.got lots of potential tho.but please author,dont fucks this up.

like putting in harem,changing the mc drive.the mc goal i clear af now.just dont fuck this up