Original HIATUS Action Fantasy Mystery Psychological Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Male Lead Supernatural
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In an unfamiliar world full of monsters, demons, deities and secrets buried for the better, a game is being played. 160 "Players", each one a soul of someone who died on Earth, will kill each other for a second chance at life. 

No one but the strongest deserves to live again and Frey Alcott, the 47th Player, does not plan on staying dead for long.

(Discontinued; please read the rewrite version which can be found from the author's fiction list.)

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HairyHermit
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I'm hooked.

This review is based on the 4 currently available chapters, but the story looks promising. The authors writing style makes it easy to read and get into the story. 

As I'm not sure how he's going to continue building the MC personality and world I can't comment on that yet, but I will definitely follow this story closely.

Jacksonion Democracy
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Great Story, the MC is smart but still struggles sometimes between his survival and morality, he makes smart decisions (or tries to), although sometimes his humanity gets the better of him, will be interesting to see what happens next. 

redron1028
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GOOD JOB AUTHOR!

Being the first book i have ever been reviewed here @ royal road, I somehow got impressed regarding on the effort you have given onto the introductory chapter. All is very well managed though for some cases I found something, though could be just overlooked, but might turn your book into a flawless piece here @ royal road. 

The way the first letter should to be capitalized after the unquote mark, that is.

THIS IS AN INTERESTING GENRE YOU HAVE COME UP TO, KUDOS, I WILL BE READING MORE!

IsTiredAndNeedsToPoop
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A better read than I thought it would be. Damn I wish there was more.