Until Death? (Refleshed Version)

Well Until Death? was one of the first stories that got me hooked on web writers and how i joined Royal Roads in the first place. For it to be rewritten brings a smile for all the interaction between everyone in the story.

If he keeps this up, he'll eventually the Shakespear of slightly autistic men with their slightly overbearing wives. 

That sounds negative, but it's really not. He's in the top 1% of people writing web serials. 

Let me first preface this with saying Andur is great at what he does, I don't think his stories are of bad quality in most ways.

I just feel like no one, at least no one in this short list of reviews, mentioned that there is an element to this fics that can be a deal breaker for many, they're highly formulaic.

If this is your first Andur fic to read, that doesn't matter much, but it bears mentioning because it makes his stories overall feel very similar and the multiverse he created only enforces this as part of each cast is basically a parallel version of the others. If you don't mind this, enjoy, I am sure you will.

I know for a fact that I am not the only one that does mind though and I therefore feel like it bears mentioning.

The original was a blast! I got hook into RRL because of Andur and his very first Until Death!

More in-depth review will be done after more chaps are released. Gotta say, with his current skill level, I wonder how well this will turns out.

Man I hope there's a quicker release rate! I do love all your books and have PDFs/ebooks for almost all of 'em! Here's hoping Until Death? And Transcendence get a great rewrite!

Look forward to your work!

Not much to say. Quality (both story- and grammar- wise) is as high as ever, a good amount of gore, a good amount of humour, a good amount of romance, all mixed together in a way that doesn't turn the story into a crazy mesh. Also, the characters that don't feel flat and interactions are not boring. So far so good.

Just gonna put this out here first. Im a "just a little" of a fan boy when it comes to Andur's work. I may or may not have read all his stuff at least twice.

The fact remains that with a mix of original fleshed out characters, a expansive multiverse, and just whole lot of awsome that gets better every book. Until Death was the start. And now we get it again, and refleshed is the best way to put it, more detail and new views. This is (at the time of writhing this) my favorite thing in the midst of coming out. Keep up the amazing work and hope you keep enjoy writing for a long time to come.

Ya boi,

Nyye

Very good refleshing of the original. I stumbled over Andurs stories a few days ago, and I really like his universe and stories!

You should read this if:

You are interested in a connected story of a multiverse

You like stories with an ending

You think that a good researched sience base is a must!

But you still read it anyway.

There is something soothing about any novel Andur graciously posts on here. A homey feeling you just cannot really find anywhere else. Sure, once you read one, you read them all but frankly, that's not the point.

You are not here for the usual plot of separated souls fated to reincarnate apart only to reunite again. Hell, I'm not sure you are even here for the plot specific to the novel (even if personnaly, I find them quite enjoyable, with twist and turns that don't come out of left field while still being surprising enough).

No, you are here because reading about Angron and Celes is just like meeting two old friends again after a while. You are excited to read about their last shenanigans because you are honestly attached to them. While at first, the exercise of using only the same two characters over and over again for each story flew right above and past me, I admit now that it has one huge effect on the reader. Sure you know what to expect but that is precisely why you came.

Keep them comin' Andur.

 good to see a good rewrite, if you have read the old version before or not, you should check this again, since it will be better and fill any plot hole of the old version now, wonder how his "old friend" will meet him here ?