Until Death? (Refleshed Version)

by Andur

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Reincarnation School Life Slice of Life Strong Lead Villainous Lead
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Ever been a god? Well, I was!

Until I died.... and got judged by the other gods! Apparently, they didn't like the whole "My Faith is the only true one!" idea.

Oh, and for the record: The Apocalypse wasn't intentional, ok? In my defense, I want it to be known that my enemies threw the first stone and the whole 'Offer the other cheek' just isn't my thing.

Seems like, for punishment, I get sent onto a vacation! Or so I hope?

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Author's Comment:

It's here, a rewrite? Yes! I would like to think that this version will have better grammar, better jokes, hopefully, everything better. Since it was my first work and started solely to improve my English, the grammar always caused me headaches when I looked at it.

Well, and there are the plotholes which appeared with the whole multiverse thing that came with my other works... Let's just say that the first one was never written with the idea of turning it into a series.

So let's get a shovel and fill-up the plot so that hapless readers won't fall into those pitch-black pits. They might break a knee! Or worse, vanish forever. 

And now the disclaimer everyone knows:

I was asked about reading my work on other sites. The answer is simple: Currently, I am not active in any other networks than royalroadl.com. Only here, I correct mistakes and errors. If you read it anywhere else and have to pay for it or have to deal with an annoying amount of advertisement, You Are Being Betrayed. You would do good if you make other people in that network aware of it. This is a free project of mine for the purpose of having fun. And if people try to make money with it you shouldn't bother visiting their website. The only one whom I actually allowed to have my work on his website is Armaell who invested the time to compile them into pdf. (http://armaell-library.net/author/andur) 

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kracken1009
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The start of everything

Well Until Death? was one of the first stories that got me hooked on web writers and how i joined Royal Roads in the first place. For it to be rewritten brings a smile for all the interaction between everyone in the story.

Helixical
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Same guy, different story

If he keeps this up, he'll eventually the Shakespear of slightly autistic men with their slightly overbearing wives. 

That sounds negative, but it's really not. He's in the top 1% of people writing web serials. 

Pietje1324
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One fic to rule them all

Let me first preface this with saying Andur is great at what he does, I don't think his stories are of bad quality in most ways.

I just feel like no one, at least no one in this short list of reviews, mentioned that there is an element to this fics that can be a deal breaker for many, they're highly formulaic.

If this is your first Andur fic to read, that doesn't matter much, but it bears mentioning because it makes his stories overall feel very similar and the multiverse he created only enforces this as part of each cast is basically a parallel version of the others. If you don't mind this, enjoy, I am sure you will.

I know for a fact that I am not the only one that does mind though and I therefore feel like it bears mentioning.

Heartbreak 117
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Let the noobs take the high ranks man!

The original was a blast! I got hook into RRL because of Andur and his very first Until Death!

More in-depth review will be done after more chaps are released. Gotta say, with his current skill level, I wonder how well this will turns out.

Manan1106
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Welcome Back to Godhood!

Man I hope there's a quicker release rate! I do love all your books and have PDFs/ebooks for almost all of 'em! Here's hoping Until Death? And Transcendence get a great rewrite!

 

Look forward to your work!

F-rank Human
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I mean it's Andur after all...

Not much to say. Quality (both story- and grammar- wise) is as high as ever, a good amount of gore, a good amount of humour, a good amount of romance, all mixed together in a way that doesn't turn the story into a crazy mesh. Also, the characters that don't feel flat and interactions are not boring. So far so good.

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It's one of the best.

Just gonna put this out here first. Im a "just a little" of a fan boy when it comes to Andur's work. I may or may not have read all his stuff at least twice.

The fact remains that with a mix of original fleshed out characters, a expansive multiverse, and just whole lot of awsome that gets better every book. Until Death was the start. And now we get it again, and refleshed is the best way to put it, more detail and new views. This is (at the time of writhing this) my favorite thing in the midst of coming out. Keep up the amazing work and hope you keep enjoy writing for a long time to come.

Ya boi,

Nyye

Astrael
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Very good refleshing of the original. I stumbled over Andurs stories a few days ago, and I really like his universe and stories!

You should read this if:

You are interested in a connected story of a multiverse

You like stories with an ending

You think that a good researched sience base is a must!

Zabzablord
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You know how it is going to go...

But you still read it anyway.

There is something soothing about any novel Andur graciously posts on here. A homey feeling you just cannot really find anywhere else. Sure, once you read one, you read them all but frankly, that's not the point.

You are not here for the usual plot of separated souls fated to reincarnate apart only to reunite again. Hell, I'm not sure you are even here for the plot specific to the novel (even if personnaly, I find them quite enjoyable, with twist and turns that don't come out of left field while still being surprising enough).

No, you are here because reading about Angron and Celes is just like meeting two old friends again after a while. You are excited to read about their last shenanigans because you are honestly attached to them. While at first, the exercise of using only the same two characters over and over again for each story flew right above and past me, I admit now that it has one huge effect on the reader. Sure you know what to expect but that is precisely why you came.

Keep them comin' Andur.

royaldarknes
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oh boy, here we go killing the "higher rank" again

 good to see a good rewrite, if you have read the old version before or not, you should check this again, since it will be better and fill any plot hole of the old version now, wonder how his "old friend" will meet him here ?