Until Death? (Refleshed Version)

Well Until Death? was one of the first stories that got me hooked on web writers and how i joined Royal Roads in the first place. For it to be rewritten brings a smile for all the interaction between everyone in the story.

Let me first preface this with saying Andur is great at what he does, I don't think his stories are of bad quality in most ways.

I just feel like no one, at least no one in this short list of reviews, mentioned that there is an element to this fics that can be a deal breaker for many, they're highly formulaic.

If this is your first Andur fic to read, that doesn't matter much, but it bears mentioning because it makes his stories overall feel very similar and the multiverse he created only enforces this as part of each cast is basically a parallel version of the others. If you don't mind this, enjoy, I am sure you will.

I know for a fact that I am not the only one that does mind though and I therefore feel like it bears mentioning.

If he keeps this up, he'll eventually the Shakespear of slightly autistic men with their slightly overbearing wives. 

That sounds negative, but it's really not. He's in the top 1% of people writing web serials. 

But you still read it anyway.

There is something soothing about any novel Andur graciously posts on here. A homey feeling you just cannot really find anywhere else. Sure, once you read one, you read them all but frankly, that's not the point.

You are not here for the usual plot of separated souls fated to reincarnate apart only to reunite again. Hell, I'm not sure you are even here for the plot specific to the novel (even if personnaly, I find them quite enjoyable, with twist and turns that don't come out of left field while still being surprising enough).

No, you are here because reading about Angron and Celes is just like meeting two old friends again after a while. You are excited to read about their last shenanigans because you are honestly attached to them. While at first, the exercise of using only the same two characters over and over again for each story flew right above and past me, I admit now that it has one huge effect on the reader. Sure you know what to expect but that is precisely why you came.

Keep them comin' Andur.

Until Death was one of the first fictions I read on Royal Road. I enjoy how he added more to this. Especially the Cats.

Man I hope there's a quicker release rate! I do love all your books and have PDFs/ebooks for almost all of 'em! Here's hoping Until Death? And Transcendence get a great rewrite!

Look forward to your work!

Totally worth the read, progresses nicely and doesn't leave you feeling like anything is missed or skipped over. Sometimes can be a bit fast paced but I mean thats just the way Andur does his thing! If you like insanely powerful beings coming together and doing their thing this is the perfect novel for you!

This book is really good!

"Until Death" is the first history that I read in Royal Road, thereafter I couldn't stop to read the Andur's creations.

Although I don't have a really nice English, it was enough to understand what I read. So, when I started to read English books, "Until Death" is the first one that I finished, because among the ones that I chose to read, is the only that I liked enough.

After discover and read all of Andur's books, when investigated whether there was anything new for reading among the Andur's fictions, I see "Until Death? (Refleshed Version)" and WOW!! Then I read it in 2 or 3 days hahahaha.

After all the only thing I can say is:

THIS BOOK IS REALLY ENJOYABLE!

(And sorry about my writing mistakes)

 good to see a good rewrite, if you have read the old version before or not, you should check this again, since it will be better and fill any plot hole of the old version now, wonder how his "old friend" will meet him here ?

The original was a blast! I got hook into RRL because of Andur and his very first Until Death!

More in-depth review will be done after more chaps are released. Gotta say, with his current skill level, I wonder how well this will turns out.