Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Secret Identity Strategy Summoned Hero
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Transported into another world with his classmates Henry is separated. Finding himself awaken in the body of cadet Lucid Gracile. He is thrown into an unknown modern world filled with magic and powerful monsters named hyres. Lucid must learn how to wield magic from the bottom up in hopes to travel the dangerous land to search for fellow friends and classmates while battling the deep fear of losing ‘Henry’ as he lives through Lucid.

Will he find his friends before its too late?

Goal is about 2 Chapters a week releasing on Wednesday and Saturday. Support Lucid on Patreon and join the discord!

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Kojibear
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I consume a lot of Lit and I must say that this is a promising start with an MC who has so far made logical desisions which is refreshing. World building has been descent and Action has not been over the top with an OP MC. I for one look forward to reading more.

PrimalShadow
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I feel like this story could use an editor, or at least a pass through grammarly.

Eliza Mathers
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I'm always a little worried when someone posts all their work at once since often they drop the series, luckily the author seems to be keeping a steady flow. As for the writing it suffers from some grammatical issues, but not too bad, they seem to be getting less and less as the story goes on.

As for the story the main character the internal dialogue is pretty interesting and I'm loving the banter between his computer thing and himself. Characters that pop up where fun and the clear goal of the protagonist makes me want to continue. 

I wish there was a bigger main cast. It is still early and there are some promising characters that could be added. 

What I like the most is the world building aspect its very nice.  Hoping it doesn't get dropped/abandoned espeically since I became a patron. 

Newbage
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Great world building, character, and plot

Well rounded main character. Complex and interesting world building. Intriging and mold breaking plot.

What I like best about this story is that unlike other transmigration or reincarnation stories, the MC'S background, living situation, and personal relationships on earth were fleshed out, thoughtful and very believable. They formed a consistent basis for his personality, and actually informs his decision making and behavior after the transmigration. Unlike most stories in a genre where the MC'S backstory is barely an after afterthought, and their personality is basically a Mary sue, self-insert, blank slate, this MC feels like a real person. A likeable and sympathetic one at that.

There are some notable grammatical hiccups, but it is clear from the text that the author has a firm grasp of language and style. The mistakes are clearly just typos and are few and far enough between to no adversely affect enjoyment unless one is a English student or otherwise high strung about grammar.

I highly recommend this story