Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Harem Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead
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A slime randomly falls into existence. Sapient and born with the ability to recreate parts of the things it feasts upon, the highly confused drop of primordial soup decides that the only real thing it can do is become the being at the top of the food chain. A task of longevity in the leaves of the omni-verse.

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Dawod Dawod
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Just finished reading up to the latest chapter (Safe leaf 6)
And I really am liking the way you introduced a system for the mc to gain in power without it feeling too rushed or undeserved. Your world building and lore is very captivating and enjoyable to read and think about, and the characters seem fleshed out and feel real and relateable.
All in all, I'm really enjoying it so far and can't wait to read more!

Quyn
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 Really good beginning. interesting point of view, reading from a slimes perspective.

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Sliming up the food chain

The story follows the adventures of a unique slime as he learns what it is to be alive. It's a fun read with relatively frequent updates. The cast of crew is memorable but small at the moment. The perspective of the slime is refreshing and captivating. It shows all of the curiosity, bravery, and ignorance of a newborn slime, and the author does a good job conveying this.

The writing style is solid and easy to read with solid descriptions. The worldbuilding is fairly shallow at the moment, but is not the focus of the story yet, and leaves room for expansion in future chapters. The story so far is focused mostly on growth and survival so far, but not in the grindy style of typical litrpgs. There is also a secondary focus on relationships and smut that builds on the relationships.

Translate7
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This story has potential. It focuses on a slime who was born with sapience. The world building is pretty good, good grammar. The main character is written well most of the time. A slime with no knowledge of the world acts like a beast. Except of course when he sees humanoid girls and then can only picture them naked. Shocking, I know. The author needs to either make the slime a human for this focus to make sense or better yet drop it entirely. The story is well written and has great potential yet this slime falls in lust with a human at first glance? 

flamebos123
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I like the story but there's one thing wrong with it. It's tagged as litrpg but I'm on the 8th chapter but still no sign of the litrpg where's it at.