The Great Serpent

by lex

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Mystery Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Strong Lead
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The mighty serpent that almost achieve peak and transform his self to become the mighty dragon died from betrayal and besiege of human peak cultivator. Just before the great serpent breathed it's last breath, He vowed silently "iam the little serpent if given a chance to reincarnate, ill never ever do something stupid again, who ever betrayed me ill fucking kill his whole clan, ill make that who want to betrayed me shudder from scared of the consequences". When he almost end his vow, something miraculous happen. a small portion of his soul sucked into a black hole.. where is this? Fuck iam not have a body!!, wtf iam a soull!!!!!.

Year after year the little serpent soul wandering in universe, he saw many thing, The fall and the rise of an Empire, Planet that did not have mana but their people can destroy planet with what they call technology, Planet that have no life but have many resources, and many more. When one day he saw a planet that was bigger than he had ever seen, something happen, his soul suck to the planet. who knows what will happen to our liitle serpent!!. If he will repeat his mistake again???. So let just enjoy our little serpent journey. Tyty

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This is my first novel and English is not my first language, so if there are some problem with my grammar or type. I am sory for that. And If you have suggestion, you can just PM me * tyty

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* Cover is not my creation, i just take it from somewhere..(^;^)

* Some character, kingdom or Clan Name may come from other novel, Manga or anime, if i can not think a better name. If you have a better idea just Pm me!!.

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Hmm..too bad...need more chapter if need to rating your novel tongue-out. You need to rewrite chapter 1, cause there are many you need too fix, especially the Grammar.