The Queen's Hound

by ace arriande

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Other Tags: Monster Evolution

The thief was confident that it would be another heist like any other. Steal the mark, get paid, retire, gamble away any money not spent at brothels, and come out of retirement. Again. That was how it was supposed to go. Only, the woman he was stealing from was a noble vampire, and he wasn't expecting to get killed and reincarnated as a puppy. Now, left in the underground dungeon floors of the city's tower, the infamous thief must adapt to his four-legged and fluffier life and quickly if he doesn't want to get turned into a snack by monsters several times his size.

To make matters even more difficult for him, he finds himself bound by a curse to not only hunt and devour the strong but to evolve and become his killer's cerberus. Though, none of these struggles are as difficult as the itch behind his ear that just won't go away.

 


Cover artwork done by ErosPanda, and the full-sized image can be viewed here!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
[Vol. 1 pt. 1] A Failed Job and a New Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 2] Bones are Love; Bones are Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 3] Bones are Love; Bones are Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 4] Bones are Love; Bones are Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 5] Bones are Love; Bones are Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 6] Bones are Love; Bones are Life ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 7] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 8] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 9] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 10] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 11] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 12] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 13] Eating Greens ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 14] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 15] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 16] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 17] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 18] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 19] The Pup and the Rat ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 20] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 21] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 22] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 23] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 24] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 25] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 26] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 27] Rubs, Scratches, and Evolutions ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 28] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 29] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 30] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 31] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 32] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 33] Self-Preservation ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 34] Training, Sticks, and Skills ago
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zmikez
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No complaints on Grammar. The characters are slowly being fleshed out. The style and story are just so entertaining. The elf is a little weird but if it can be explained by a racial characteristic I guess it can get a pass, depends on how it plays out.

 

(up to ch. 45)

ultragunner
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Amazing. Truly King Pup deserves more followers along his journey to Bonetopia.

 Just a warning though. The story is definately mature in rating. Dont let King Pup fool you into thinking this is cutesy story.

Grammar is pretty good (though you left darkvision on the early chapters before he got the skill)

 

Plot is amazing. Simple and engaging, yet leaves open much possibilities and teases of a world as wide and colorful as Threadbare (best similar fic here I can think of)

 

Characterwise, King Pup is best pup. Other characters pending.

Mightything
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I really like the story and was mad into it. It had become one of my favorites on RR. But i dont like where you are taking it. I was so close to donating to. But i kind of feel as if its a trap. Id be throwing you cash just for a bunch of filler chapters? Then it take so long for you to drop a chapter. I keep expecting something great to happen. It doesnt even look like hes gonna evolve anytime soon. When not lng ago. He just needed 50 kills an a couple of wands. Stop dragging it out please. I dont want to become completely disinterested. 

 

Other than that i highly appreciate your writing and the story. Its just so good you cant be jiggling tidbits of excitement in a persons face then letting them down. And then expecting them to stay interested.

DksDarkstrider
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Another great story by Ace.

As this reviews title suggests, the  grammar is great as usual as is the characters thus far. An interesting take on a story, a great MC whose name is excellent (King Pup) and a chocolate eating, dog loving vampire indicates a great story worth every read and an interesting future for our MC.

Do yourself a favour and read this story. Worth every minute.

Royal_13
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Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Jaksterzoo
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Not trying to give a bad score. Here is my opinion on the novel as a whole. 

The grammar is good, the main character is interesting enough to have almost anyone start reading, and the storyline is understandable. Also, no major plot holes that I have seen. The only thing I dislike (and why this novel got a 3 1/2) is due to the randomness. A vampire that seems to always 'love' chocolate when the MC said the same thing. That's alright, but it felt 1/2 of the whole conversation was only about her diet and chocolate. Not only that but sometimes the MC makes a rational decision and doesn't have it thoroughly explained, but then he makes a decision and the author went over why he made the decision (repetitive information too) for almost half of the chapter. Basically, the narrator is telling us he always runs from fights unless he is 100% sure he can win without injury but throughout the whole novel there is little to prove this point. The only time he ever really ran was when it was 'your going to die if you fight' type of thing or when he was seriously outclassed. When he did realize that maybe he couldn't fight something, that is when he should have ran if we go about him being a good theif class. All theifs (good ones) usually have backup plans but a very strong and smart one backed himself into holes several times and just didn't act like a thief at all. 'I lived as a thief for over 10 years but was a pup for less than a month, so I'll act only like a pup' doesn't cut it. Basically, the story deviates from expectation and the character is hard to get a read on due to contrasting information. Everything else is okay though.

Nightowl
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Hoot(©v©)✓  Story need more Owls!     Hoot ©v©)  Besides that good story funny, witty, with an interesting plot for a re: story. Hoot(©v©) 

Calavente
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The Puppy that will Rule them all

It's a well told story about a guy that reincarnated in his same fantasy world... inside a demon-beast-puppy 

so there are sassy remarks, great feats of valor, eye-oggling of damsels in distress (or not so much in distress)... but currently a lack of any real sexy scenes... the puppy not yet able to become human enough to be allowed to do that.

I always come happily to the new chapters, knowing I'll get exposed to growth, fights, bones, puppy eyes, cleavage, dungeons, magic and sassy comments :)

SosadhScath
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Well written and thoroughly enjoyable

Got led here by the "a dog" review.

The character is personable, amusing, and generally excellent.

elementalme
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I've read 20 chapters ahead and can say I truly enjoy it to the point I'm constantly bugging the author for more pupper. laughing