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The Crimson Mage
by candicame
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Orenda is a ten-year-old orphan who was raised in a colony of the far-reaching Urilian empire. She's the only fire elf she's ever met, and believes herself to be the long-lost princess of the fire elf kingdom, which is said to have fallen in a single day and night under Urillian control two centuries before our story picks up. When her magical powers begin to manifest, Orenda must navigate the world as it is now to discover the secrets of her past and chart her future.
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This is absolutley excellent. I'm only at chapter 8 right now but i have to say this is very well written. What made me write this review is how well the essence of an intelligent kid has been captured. Normally when intelligent children are included in stories they're just mini adults but orenda is really believable as a character.
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Complex characters, fascinating world.
This is one of the best portrayals of someone writing an intelligent child I have seen in a long time. She is nieve but smart. In her conversations with other children and adults, you see her apparent age come through well. Highly recommend giving this a read.