The Crimson Mage

by candicame

Original HIATUS Adventure Drama Fantasy Female Lead Grimdark Magic Non-Human lead Strategy Supernatural
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Orenda is a ten-year-old orphan who was raised in a colony of the far-reaching Urilian empire.  She's the only fire elf she's ever met, and believes herself to be the long-lost princess of the fire elf kingdom, which is said to have fallen in a single day and night under Urillian control two centuries before our story picks up.  When her magical powers begin to manifest, Orenda must navigate the world as it is now to discover the secrets of her past and chart her future.

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Table of Contents
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Chapter 20 ago
Chapter 21 ago
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Chapter 23 & 24 ago
Chapter 25 ago
Chapter 26 ago
Chapter 27 ago
Chapter 28 ago
Chapter 29 ago
Chapter 30 ago
Chapter 31 ago
Chapter 32 ago
Chapter 33 ago
Chapter 34 ago
Chapter 35 ago
Chapter 36 ago
Chapter 37 ago
Chapter 38 ago
Chapter 39 ago
Chapter 40 ago
Chapter 41 ago
Chapter 42 ago
Chapter 43 ago
Chapter 44 - The End ago
Chapter 45 - Book 2 Chapter 1 ago
Chapter 46 - Book 2 Chapter 2 ago
Chapter 47 - Book 2 Chapter 3 ago
Chapter 48 - Book 2 Chapter 4 ago
Chapter 49 - Book 2 Chapter 5 ago
Chapter 50 - Book 2 Chapter 6 ago
Chapter 51 - Book 2 Chapter 7 ago
Chapter 52 - Book 2 Chapter 8 ago
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Chapter 55 - Book 2 Chapter 11 ago
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Chapter 59 - Book 2 Chapter 15 ago
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Chapter 74 - Book 2 Chapter 30 ago
Chapter 75 - Book 2 Chapter 31 ago
Chapter 76 - Book 2 Chapter 32 ago
Chapter 77 - Book 2 Chapter 33 ago
Chapter 78 - Book 2 Chapter 34 ago
Chapter 79 - Book 2 Chapter 35 - The End ago
Chapter 80 - Book 2 Epilogue OR Book 3 Chapter 1? ago
Chapter 81 - Book 3 Chapter 1 ago
Chapter 82 - Book 3 Chapter 2 ago
Chapter 83 - Book 3 Chapter 3 ago
Chapter 84 - Book 3 Chapter 4 ago
Chapter 85 - Book 5 Chapter 5 ago
Chapter 86 - Book 3 Chapter 6 ago
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Chapter 88 - Book 3 Chapter 8 ago
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Chapter 135 - Book 3 - Epilogue ago
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Pandacroc
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This is absolutley excellent. I'm only at chapter 8 right now but i have to say this is very well written. What made me write this review is how well the essence of an intelligent kid has been captured. Normally when intelligent children are included in stories they're just mini adults but orenda is really believable as a character.

slatsau
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Complex characters, fascinating world.

This is one of the best portrayals of someone writing an intelligent child I have seen in a long time. She is nieve but smart. In her conversations with other children and adults, you see her apparent age come through well. Highly recommend giving this a read.

kotekj
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Extremely well done

This is a fantastic novel, head and shoulders above what's the norm on this site. Very well written, with great characterization. I hope to see this author continue their work.