The Hero's Supplier

by Cold_Sun

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Mystery LitRPG Magic Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Secret Identity Strategy

Rick made new rules for himself every few days. But there was only one rule that he truly always followed- Don’t stretch your legs more than the size of your blanket. The way to success was by not drawing unwanted attention.

But when the Inter-planar wars began, Rick had no other choice than to survive, and for that, he had to give up his laid-back lifestyle.

"Still not gonna be a hero!” Rick vowed.

Superhuman strength, agility, ability to use magic, telepathy, all sorts of talents emerged.

As heroes began to emerge among the population, Rick decided to take up the mantle of being the man in the shadows.

 

 

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Disclaimer: Although I try my level best to avoid, There definitely are grammatical errors in the chapters, if anyone points them out I will be really happy to make the corrections.

I am trying to post chapters as regularly as possible and sometimes miss out on editing it completely.
I hope you enjoy the story.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
Chapter 1: City Central Library ago
Chapter 2: The Master’s Artifacts ago
Chapter 3: Skill Check ago
Chapter 4: Optimal Training Method ago
Chapter 5: Dungeon Shopping ago
Chapter 6: Beast Encyclopedia ago
Chapter 7: Troll Hunt ago
Chapter 8: Communication Rune Stone ago
Chapter 9: Setting Shop ago
Chapter 10 : Blacklisted ago
Chapter 11 : Learning Spells ago
Chapter 12 : Success at Last! ago
Chapter 13: First Solo Kill ago
Chapter 14: The Egg ago
Chapter 15: Barter Plans ago
Chapter 16: Creation Spirits ago
Chapter 17: Green-Wood Clan ago
Chapter 18: The Protectors ago
Chapter 19: Time to Become a Fire Mage ago
Chapter 20: Fire Spell Hot Hands ago
Chapter 21: Best Ironing Spell ago
Chapter 22: Mommy ago
Chapter 23: Meeting the Kings Again ago
Chapter 24: Firebird ago
Chapter 25: Entering the Private Study ago
Chapter 26: Golem Army ago
Chapter 27: Carving Knife ago
Chapter 28: Fortuitous Encounter ago
Chapter 29: Dale's Disciple ago
Chapter 30: Two versus One ago
Chapter 31: Golem-Core Self Destruct ago
Chapter 32: Rescue and Retreat ago
Chapter 33: Healing ago
Chapter 34: Demonic Languages ago
Chapter 35: Golem Mask ago
Chapter 36: Water Golem ago
Chapter 37: Treachery ago
Chapter 38: Entering the Bank ago
Chapter 39: Getting Repeat Customers ago
Chapter 40: Storage Ring ago
Chapter 41: Flame Fiend ago
Chapter 42: Patching God's System ago
Chapter 43: Reunions ago
Chapter 44: World Map ago
Chapter 45: Bidding Wars ago
Chapter 46: Business Partners ago
Chapter 47: New World ago
Chapter 48: Dale vs. Rick ago
Chapter 49: Elemental Warrior ago
Chapter 50: Tranquil Heart ago
Chapter 51: Immolate ago
Chapter 52: House Security ago
Chapter 53: Planar Tribulation ago
Chapter 54: Pseudo Planar Mage ago
Chapter 55: Ianuae Magicae ago
Announcement ago
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shin chan
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A story with a good plot and great potential

I will recommend it to everyone who want a new take apocalyptic story, to ppl who are tired of just mc grinding and getting random power increasing  lucky encounters

First of all your idea is great but in your story I feel like you are not keeping to it. In your synopsis you told of an mc who wants to remain in shadows but in the story we see a kid who was able to bs through then later gave info randomly to a guy and then even to the entire market

The mc I thought of while reading the synopsis and even during the initial chapter was someone who was a fast thinker and we'll to be a lawyer he was smart but what you portray is a naive kid 

Although there is not much character development but still it works if you just focus on the getting stronger and even the atmosphere or live of ppl in this new world like what's the politics  or even how the mc uses his ability to sell or even change things through the "shadows "

I really liked your style of writing and was easy on the eyes(I.e. no grammatical errors that can be found if you are not looking for them)

Andross Guile
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Needs a lot of rewriting but shows potential

It started out very well but the story started deteriorating and at chapter 9 it went full on Wuxia with people basically thinking,"Weakling! He cannot be strong enough etc etc." And the MC shows he's better than anyone except for the reader of course expected.

Descriptions of things instead of showing what it does. You don't need to explain what a tool can do when you use the tool! The description of the grimoire isn't needed. First of all anyone who's picked up a fantasy book knows what one is. Secondly, your MC might be "smart" but he acts like a moron.

Quality before quantity.

sir chicken
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I would call it it chinese styled

 Story is extremely similar to many chinese novels.

Not in the story department, but in the way words and sentences are structured, which I dislike hence 2.5 stars. Otherwise the story is ok, not exelent but definetly not bad.

Lliono
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It's a nice story structured like a wuxia. As other reviewers have stated, the synopsis is not really indicative of what the story is about, but if you like wuxia you should give it a try.

Nasorren
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Main character is not the hero

Slow start. 

I would recommend everyone to give a go. The MC is not the strongest and the system is also unique. There are elements of summoning as well. And now there is a chicken pet. 

There are grammatical errors here and there, but it does not really bother the overall flow. 

 

Aspartame
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Chapter 2 was how far I got, before going "Oh, he's given everything, and earns nothing." This is terrible. Why would anyone want this?

PlasmaticPi
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The overall style of the writing is slightly below average and nothing original. The basic story is nothing original, with several parts extremely similar to half a dozen different stories on here alone, with the main difference being they are far less thought out and much more badly written. The grammar starts off ok and then takes a dive bomb a few chapters in. And the characters are completely bland and barely described at all. Overall, it is a shoddy piece of junk that needs to be completely rewritten with major changes made to it and with a dedicated editor looking over it in order to be any good.

catalinnr
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Could have been great but degenerated too fast.

The first chapter was the best and the only good chapter of this story. 

Potential? NO. Plotholes start at ch 30. At least the author knows this is just a draft and is willing to improve.

Execution past chapter 2: shit to shittier.

Edit:I think i understand now, after reading past ch 19. The author sucks at making realistic interactions between his sister and any other person beside his subordonates,making him feel like he has multiple personality disorder or smth similar.

Filler prologue from ch 4 to 19. The story become bearable after ch 20 and enjoyable after 24. Dropped for good after readin ch 32. Neah man, i forgive bad grammar and bad character developement but not forced plotholes. 

Don't waste your time here untill some serious edits are done

Eder Lvanon
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  • Good novel 

If you like system novel and crazy luck

Adpted mc and world of magic is the novel for you

It not give somthing new ,but it have nice style and good story