The Reborn Runesmith

by thjodrek

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation School Life Slice of Life

We have all read stories about the reincarnated or portaled earthling going to the fantasy world and gaining a cheat and super abilities. This isn't one of those. The hero or villian here is just a smart guy who only gets to choose a few things like what he is and then given the ability to have mana. He doesn't even get to choose what kind of mana he gets it could be fire,water,air, etc. 

This world is different than ours. Gunpowder, medicines, and other things will probably not work or be availible. Who is to say that the beings of this new world will even have the same internal anatomy. These are all things our MC will have to discover. Just like our world you can be born with great genetics but if you are a lazy and undriven person nothing will come of it.

 

This is my first attempt to write. There WILL be mistakes. I am a mathmatician not an english major so be prepared for questionable grammer and spellings. One of these days if I enjoy doing this I will get me an editor who did english instead of math and science.

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Robert Dread
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This srory is off to a great start with a different set up, new world as reward, and an unusal protagonist.

Jknott
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Thats a unique start to a reincarnation novel i approve. But you could use some editing, your word placement and sentence structure needs improving.

99Bigbear
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A potentially good read.

Aside from the occasional spelling and grammar errors, the story has great potential.  Grammarly is good at fixing such errors so plug it into your web browser and let it run.  Its already fixed up to 12 errors in this post alone.

MrRakjo
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So yeah this first 9 chapter are pretty entertaining and i would very much like to see more

Withdrawncar
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Do not and I repeat DO NOT stop or remake or stop this, I really appreciate and enjoy this story! Keep it up and I hope to see this grow into a bigger world buildingĀ  novel .