The Mastery System

by twigthe1st

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation

This is the story of Sam Underwood, a teenage boy from New Jersey. Through a series of strange events, he arrives in a different world with different rules. Sam must not only survive but also thrive as he takes on unique challenges. Join Sam as he learns and grows using the Mastery System.

#Author Note

First novel. Would appreciate the support!

Feedback and constructive criticism welcome.

Release schedule: Once a week.

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Techman
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Excellent start, interesting world building

Excellent grammar, likeable characters, interesting world building. The litrpg system is integrated into the world better than most of the studies on here. 

Only 7 chapters in, so the plot is just starting, but it shows promise. Overall, I highly recommend and look forward to future chapters.

Van234
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Liked the mastery system. A lot of details not clear yet, but looks promising.

As for the plot, the not enough written to say if it is good or bad. For now it good to read, so give it a try.

tempest86
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Its interesting so far. But the biggest issue is that it is very infodump heavy.

Hopefully that will change a bit as things move forward.