DCO- Dungeon Core Online

Story starts as a very nice dungeon building story with many nice unique ideas. A very nice and enjoyable read.

Until it suddenly is no longer about dungeon building but about conspiracies, the MC being completely and utterly at someone else's mercy and it being a totally different genre (for people liking that genre it might be nice, no idea. I do not like (and if it started as that kind of genre just would not have read or rated it) and I defnitely do not like the inconsistency of genre of suddenly ending in that genre after so many chapters...).

An admittedly overused plot hook buoyed by a good sense of writing and characterization. The over reliance on the plot happening outside the game hampers the overall feel, but can be blissfully ignored in favor of the more interesting interactions between the two main characters.

 

A few grammar and spelling errors here and there that could have been caught by An additional proofreader, but it doesn't detract from being able to understand what the author was trying to get across.

Got to say was not expecting to laugh so much but exploding sheep just hit me really hard for some reason. Great story so far and a have no qualms recommending it to others.

Heya. 

Style: Its good but nothing exceptional.

Story: Its a fairly common theme. With fairly common Concept. But its funny and entertaining enough.

Grammar: Im not a native speaker and didnt see any errors so yeah..

Character: Well how to say this.. The MC is a standard Nerd and the other characters are like a clone of real people.. but hey, it works.

I would recommend it

Keep up the good work 

 

With an unassuming synopsis, i was really suprised.

What greated me is a nice dungeon building novel, a lot of good joke and pletorat of reference.

What i was afraid at first is the point where usally the autor tend to make joke just to do it, which isn't the case there. There're all nicely spaced short and give a good chuckle if you get the reference.

I also liked the fact mobs dont realy have sentience to the point where the MC have to manually train them making it lengthy and unbearable.

The system is inovative, and strict to be liked. How many time i couldn't help but sight at some Characters weaning the systems to get what they wanted.

The pixie helper is nice, thought some time the interacting between them feels cringy in my opinion. She help with indication, and short explanation ( we don't need lengthy talk about why what who ).

The Story isnt realy center on the MC and is building, the 3rd party POV on the adventurer trying to crawl the dungeon make it non repetitive and keep the dungeon building fresh.

As it now chapter 77. I hope you will continue your best and this quality a nice exemple of what i think is best for a comedy dungeon building.

Little Ice.

More or less as above. The characters are a little boorish with no character seeming to defy their traits at any time (dumb bullies, semi-roleplay knights), most of the interest seems to come from betting and progress. Most conflict is a character doing something unexpected, the bullies and now a cheat achievement. Discussions with the author and the editor have proved fruitful for new ideas, but as it stands the writing is somewhat slow; though it has picked up pace with the recent occurrence. Overall a good read with some awkwardness and lack of forethought, but hopefully with some pace and combat improvements; and perhaps some dummy adventurers (eg hireable NPCs), some solo characters and variation on parties (5/6 a party? Why never 2--4 or 10 or so?); a raid (likely to happen soon) and so on; plus a look at the outside world; there might be more improvements. Not going to say that I would be capable of writing a better story. I would be unlikely to. It's that the changes could introduce more conflict and more forethought that it becomes possible.

I found this book at 10 chapters and put off leaving a review until I was confident in the way it was heading. This style of dungeon core is unique and has an endless number of possibilities. Id write more but I would gush a bit. I strongly recommend this book but know that nothing is perfect.

I made a previous review about this at about ch 8 or so and I'm making this at 52 and all I have to say is wow. It's just amazing what you've done here with all the different mechanics and I love the feedback he gets. One of the best things ever is having an epic boss intro and adventurers just shitting themselves. I legit evil laughed at the secret boss. 5 stars my friend. You done good.

 This dungeon VR game has hilarious developers and amazing potential for growth. It might be interesting to see how the physical and immersed worlds influence each other, but even if the story never turns to focus on that it'll be an amazing read because of the fairy, dangers of new technology, well-populated dungeon, and most of all the references and puns. GL HF, Glyax.

I hate when a story is centered around a week willed main character that has an  abusive companion. The pixie isn’t funny to me she’s a b and shouldn’t be in the story. Most dungeon story’s end up this way when they have a girl companion. The mc loses all  semblance of control over there choices.