Little Baron & Big General

by Evil Ginger

A baron in name only, inheriting the title and responsibilities thanks to a tragedy.

A general in name only, with no army to lead and command.

These two somehow are forced to meet. Will she clean her family's name? Will he finally redeem himself of his mistake?

What will the two of them accomplish?

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*notice from the author*

A very short story, and one that was sitting in my USB for nearly a year and a half, at this point, maybe longer. I wasn't adding anything more to it, so might as well just release it. Learn from the experience, you know? Leave any criticism behind, while I may not be a professional nor plan on becoming one, I still am unfortunately a perfectionist.

Oh, and tell me what you liked. So I know what I did well. Can't be thinking all I ever make is terrible stuff, right?

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Evil Ginger

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