Don't label me!

by Tsaimath

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Male Lead Secret Identity
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Traumatising content

In a world full of awe-inspiring superpowers, incredible marvels and horrifying brutality, Alexandria King wants to walk her own path. Just like many teenagers, she seeks independence, excitement and love. Not necessarily in that order. Sadly, her struggle is a little harder than most, as her father is one of the wealthiest man alive and feels that she is just right to cement an alliance to another, rich dynasty.

Will she be able to escape the trappings of society and gain the freedom she seeks or will she remain trapped within?

Spontanous [participant in the NaNoWriMo Royal Road challenge]. - Book1 was finished as part of NaNoWriMo with 52.316 words on 25.11.2018

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Ragearo
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One of the best stories on here I've read. The characters are each unique and enjoyable to witness. Even the antagonists are not one dimensional, which is quite a feat.

My favorite part is that there are really no noticable plotholes or inconsistancies. One major problem with fiction is moving the plot while the characters stay in-character and nothing super illogical happens - this is done beautifully here. Alex never breaks character to do something stupid; her cautious calculating and intellectual manner is never sacrificed for the sake of drama or making a fight easier. Any weaknesses or setbacks she has do not feel contrived.

This reads much like a popular published series - the book itself is standalone as all loose ends are relatively tied up. Nothing else could be written and I would still be satisfied with having read a finished piece, while at the same time if new material came out I would gladly read it.

wdc543
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I find this was a highly enjoyable read( I read to chapter 11 at the time of this review). I hope dearly that the Author writes this story long past NaNoWriMo.

Good for you Tsaimath for writing a interesting story.

thernn
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Really fun read. Likely one of my new favorites. Hoping this turns into a long series!