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Fortress City has Super Villains, who have evil lairs, and in them they make super weapons. But when a bioweapon is granted super powers of its own, will Fortress City be able to handle the Super Minion?

 

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Originally written for NaNoWriMo 2018 Royal Road challenge.

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Tywami
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I love the story, keep up the good work. Your main character's perspective and general knowledge is a fun and fresh pov compared to most stories and you've got some okay secondary characters, it's a really good story. Once again, I love the story, please don't go on a hiatus, like, ever

Bandicoot
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A slow start and then it takes off like a rocket

The perspective of the MC was strange at first but truly is an amazing character.  Looking at human customs from a perspective with out human knowledge is so interesting.  The moment when you understand what the mc was describing is so satisfying.

 

Also dessert is best.

 

Kap
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Reminds me of the Box

Ok so a fresh take on a hero world and our hero is a minion. A slightly sociopathic but loveably innocent Monster. If you can handle a protagonist whose closest definition of morals is returning the favor by any means short of suicide then I highly recommend this darling lackey.

Dark Intelligence
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Great LN - Just needs a few Mass Releases

This is my favorite monster LN. Well, it's in my top 3 at least! The only issue with it is, is that it only has a few chapters. Please setup a patreon so we can shove money down your throat to write more pages!!

Manic_design
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Non-human and shapeshifting Wooooo!!

 Always had a fascination with non human protagonist, and it being a shifter to booth. My type of flavour.

titulusfeles
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Definitely a must read on Royal Road.  Even if you aren't a fan of sci-fi or some other tag on the story at least give it a shot I'm sure it'll enthrall you with it's minute yet valuable details, amazing world building and interesting cast of characters.

It is very well written, the only gripe I have is that there aren't enough chapters to feed my addiction. Then again, I can't really blame the author because the chapters are quite long and (I know I've said this already but...) incredibly well written. 

Pale imitation
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Don’t judge a book by its cover art or title

From the shitty face doodles for cover art, I thought this was going to be another crayon eating story about superheros. Boy was I wrong. Well deserved front page ranking with excellent flow. The foreshadowing for the school was amazing, I could not have imagined how that would workout until I read it.

I would not be suprised if the author is a pro. The plot and the writing is better then most movies. I can imagine the rights to this story being picked up by Hollywood.

Kumen
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Chapter 22 Jailhouse Rock Candy is the funniest thing I've read this year.  Super Mision is a great story, very well writen and very, very funny.

sdeligar
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It starts a little slow at the beginning but it's totally worth the wait. The main character may not always be the most interesting but the supporting cast is great. Ch 22 was especially amusing and largely responsible for making me decide it was time to give this series an advanced review.

Earthsea
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Had to give it for Chapter 22

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