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Fortress City has Super Villains, who have evil lairs, and in them they make super weapons. But when a bioweapon is granted super powers of its own, will Fortress City be able to handle the Super Minion?

 

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Originally written for NaNoWriMo 2018 Royal Road challenge.

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Manic_design
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Non-human and shapeshifting Wooooo!!

 Always had a fascination with non human protagonist, and it being a shifter to booth. My type of flavour.

titulusfeles
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Definitely a must read on Royal Road.  Even if you aren't a fan of sci-fi or some other tag on the story at least give it a shot I'm sure it'll enthrall you with it's minute yet valuable details, amazing world building and interesting cast of characters.

It is very well written, the only gripe I have is that there aren't enough chapters to feed my addiction. Then again, I can't really blame the author because the chapters are quite long and (I know I've said this already but...) incredibly well written. 

Pale imitation
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Don’t judge a book by its cover art or title

From the shitty face doodles for cover art, I thought this was going to be another crayon eating story about superheros. Boy was I wrong. Well deserved front page ranking with excellent flow. The foreshadowing for the school was amazing, I could not have imagined how that would workout until I read it.

I would not be suprised if the author is a pro. The plot and the writing is better then most movies. I can imagine the rights to this story being picked up by Hollywood.

Kumen
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Chapter 22 Jailhouse Rock Candy is the funniest thing I've read this year.  Super Mision is a great story, very well writen and very, very funny.

sdeligar
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It starts a little slow at the beginning but it's totally worth the wait. The main character may not always be the most interesting but the supporting cast is great. Ch 22 was especially amusing and largely responsible for making me decide it was time to give this series an advanced review.

Earthsea
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Had to give it for Chapter 22

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I laughed

Drexal15
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Good, interesting and mostly original story.

So far this story has been quite good! The protagonist “Tofu” has developed quite logically and is enjoyable to see in action. His powerset of “basically Blacklight but less fantastical”  is really great for interesting storytelling and makes for some cool/interesting scenes.

Having him be the minion of an evil organization also works well as a concept. It’s a rare concept to see pulled off well, yet something this story manages.

As a more personal preference I’m extremly glad the MC hasn’t been sexualized or made into some overly gender fluid creepy thing. He/It’s a biologically war-machine and freaking acts like it! 

Overall I’m really interested in seeing where this goes. 

I can certainly see a few resemblances to Worm with some of the naming terminologies. Which would normally be bleh for me, but thankfully this story isn’t grimdark nonsense.

Miles D
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GREAT STORY - ONCE YOU GET OUT INTO THE CITY

I find this both exciting and intriguing, it offers enough to make me think without really stretching my credulity too much. 
I found the first few chapters a bit slow, but still having enough action to hold my interest hard enough to really get into the meat of the story. 
I started reading this morning and at 21.30 I caught up - this speed is rare unless I am enjoying a story.

Miles

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On chapter 24 now and it's been pretty great. The start was a little confusing. I still don't quite understand some of the stuff that was happening, but it was fun. I like the odd perspective, but I'm worried it will soon totally die out. I'd like to see some misunderstandings work back in to keep the alien feel. Anyway I'll be waiting for more.

Koriel
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This story is so good, tofu is the best, everything is the best.  So Good.  Wish I found this story a year from now so I'd be able to binge it.