Fortress City has Super Villains, who have evil lairs, and in them they make super weapons. But when a bioweapon is granted super powers of its own, will Fortress City be able to handle the Super Minion?
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This is one of the better fictions on the site. The MC is weird. It takes a chapter or two before you actually get to know him, and he's changing/improving over time.
The central premise is: how do you learn to pretend to be human, in a weird superheroes main world, when you're not even close to begin with.
I don't think I've seen this premise handled this well before.
My big complaint is that it doesn't update often enough for me to read more frequently.
Honestly, this story has everything that makes a fiction amazing. Unique and memorable characters with emotional depth/growth. An awesome plotline that stays consistent and does not lose steam partway through. Interesting narraration and world-building elements that make for a very entertaining read. In my opinion this story would make an incredible anime.
Absolute gold. The main character is hilarious, not too overpowered nor too weak, and the reactions of the people around the main character is reasonable and makes sense. 10/10 reccomended
Someone please start this author a patreon so we can throw money at him until he agrees to update more often.
The prose is great, I love the word choices and the descriptions. The characters aren't completely fleshed out yet, but that's partly because the mc doesn't really understand people. In this case it's really well done and leaves room to grow.
The worldbuilding is interesting, there are a few details that have been dropped in that raise all sorts of questions.
I really like it so far. :)
Nice work, author!
One of my favorite story in RR.
Best superhero story in RR. The story is interesting, the plot original. Character well written, enjoyable and hilarius. MC is not human physicaly and mentality so we get unique and hilarius perspective because MC ignorant about human.
Hope the best for author.
Highly recommended this story.
I have a soft spot for non-human protagonists, particularly those with a somewhat alien mind set. Add into that intriguing world building, interesting characters and just a fun overall flavor - I quite enjoy this series. Just discovered it and read through it in a few days. Couldn't put it down. Sadly now I have to wait for more and doesn't look like it gets updated frequently.
I enjoyed every moment of tofu oddness and is addicted to the misadventures of his life
I had a lot of misgivings before actually reading this story. I normally don't like superhero stories, the few I read were mediocre at best. So I didn't start with the best of feelings into this story. However, it's actually a really great fiction. The world is interesting, the mc is actually cool and fleshed out and the story arc so far is very entertaining.
I would love if there were more chapters coming out, 2 chapters a week are not great news for my addiction.
A really well written take on the superhero genre, I can’t say I’ve read better on this site, it’s not to fast and the build up is really satisfying when something does happen because he isn’t becoming an invincible killing machine of the apocalypse within 1 chapter, a lot of indie authors takes on this genre and who am I kidding even seasoned writers have a really hard time with the pacing in this kind of novel, thing always happen to fast and we end up with half a book of pointless jumping around and then he just gets super strong and his personality does a 180 for the last like 20% of the book, I really love your concept and how you started us at something of a true beginning for your character, I really hope you end up finishing this novel and we see you popping it on Amazon one day!