Fortress City has Super Villains, who have evil lairs, and in them they make super weapons. But when a bioweapon is granted super powers of its own, will Fortress City be able to handle the Super Minion?
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I enjoyed every moment of tofu oddness and is addicted to the misadventures of his life
I like it a lot, thanks, it keeps my interests all the way and a logical structure of evolution without the usual clichés.
The world itself is a shade of grey between heroes and vilains.
The mc id himself quite funni in is clumsiness and yet he is a charming person whose character and innocence can be appreciated.
I can only recommend reding it, the mc become more and more interesting and the secondary characters also mabage to make you want to enjoy them.
Ps. Sory for my bad english, I speak French and I have written with a translator.
The MC's way of viewing the world is so incredibly interesting (and hilarious) that even the most minute details of the intricate world are fascinating. Great action, hilarious comedic beats and just a tinge of darkness that comes with a literally amoral protagonist.
Style: The story follows MC's point of view...Nothing new but what new is that MC is not human. And because he is not human, we get to see some different perspective, the other side of the curtain... A cold calculating mind still learning about the new world he finds himself in and that's what makes it interesting.
Story: Story is a fresh of breath air. A trendsetter for sure. Some ideas like odd summer are intriguing to say the least which in turn increase the ambience of the story.
Grammar: I don't pay much attention to every detail when I'm reading so many a gaps are filled automatically by my brain. There are no glaring flaws in the sentencing or grammar to break your flaw. That doesn't mean it does not have any , many of them (gleefully) pointed out by fellow amateur proofreaders ( grammar Nazis)..... uhm
Character: The characters are shown through the eyes of the MC. They are fleshed out enough to not look fake. Each of them have appropriate reasons to do what they do. Have their own quirks and personalities which sets it apart from many a stories posted on this site. And how many times do we get a glimpse of the villainous side....Right?
I had a lot of misgivings before actually reading this story. I normally don't like superhero stories, the few I read were mediocre at best. So I didn't start with the best of feelings into this story. However, it's actually a really great fiction. The world is interesting, the mc is actually cool and fleshed out and the story arc so far is very entertaining.
I would love if there were more chapters coming out, 2 chapters a week are not great news for my addiction.
A really well written take on the superhero genre, I can’t say I’ve read better on this site, it’s not to fast and the build up is really satisfying when something does happen because he isn’t becoming an invincible killing machine of the apocalypse within 1 chapter, a lot of indie authors takes on this genre and who am I kidding even seasoned writers have a really hard time with the pacing in this kind of novel, thing always happen to fast and we end up with half a book of pointless jumping around and then he just gets super strong and his personality does a 180 for the last like 20% of the book, I really love your concept and how you started us at something of a true beginning for your character, I really hope you end up finishing this novel and we see you popping it on Amazon one day!
The prose is great, I love the word choices and the descriptions. The characters aren't completely fleshed out yet, but that's partly because the mc doesn't really understand people. In this case it's really well done and leaves room to grow.
The worldbuilding is interesting, there are a few details that have been dropped in that raise all sorts of questions.
I really like it so far. :)
Nice work, author!
i really can't be bothered to give an advanced review so i'll keep this simple.
this novel makes me feel
if you like feeling any of those three things when you read then i recommend this novel.
it also has what id describe as silly action which is fun.
OK last bit, basically the MC is a naive and innocent(?) bio-weapon and the novel is basically him stumbling through a world of super heroes and villains so if that'd interest you maybe try reading it.
If Boxxy were created in not a fantasy game world, but futuristic world.... it’s like reading Everyone Loves Large Chests (except the puns)
I love this novel, and I hope it will get higher in the rankings! Go Tofu!
I'm picky. It's a thing. My coworkers know of it, my mother dispaired of it. I prefer the good stuff.
This? Isn't the good stuff. It's some of the best stuff.
I'm going to avoid giving spoilers, but here's a brief summary of my feelings.
A realistic, believeable main character who is decidedly NOT HUMAN who is realistic and relatable while being very not-human? Awesome. A MC who is all of that, who interacts with non-MCs who are believable, likeable, and realatable; no matter which side they're on? In a realistic Super-Hero world with lots of world building; which world building makes you long to know more, and desperately hope the MC will find out the answers to the questions that arise? And when you usually find the answer relatively soon instead of 200 chapters later? Holy Langhorn!
If that doesn't sway you. Then consider this, this is my opinion of the Quality, but not the Tone. Because those two are different things.
It's better than Wildblow's Worm. And I'm a fan of the Author's works. And this brilliant story that I wish I could spend money on? It's better, and is at at-least as good as the best Worm fanfics.
Goggelsbear is a genius, and I really hope they get published. And I very much pray they get an audiobook. I would love to spend an entire week or two listening to the story in the multiple books the publishers would probably insist on.