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Fortress City has Super Villains, who have evil lairs, and in them they make super weapons. But when a bioweapon is granted super powers of its own, will Fortress City be able to handle the Super Minion?

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Ch1 Taste Test ago
Ch2 More Than You Can Chew ago
Ch3 Bait Fishing ago
Ch4 Out Of The Frying Pan ago
Ch5 What's On The Menu? ago
Ch6 Travel Rations ago
Ch7 Let's Do Lunch ago
Ch8 Rat Meat ago
Side Dish #1 ago
Ch9 Will Work For Food ago
Ch10 Cafeteria Cuisine ago
Ch11 Bitter Pill ago
Ch12 First Come, First Served ago
Ch13 Preheat The Oven To 10,000 Degrees ago
Ch14 Egg Scramble ago
Ch15 Crunchy Critters ago
Side Dish #2 ago
Ch16 They Are Made Of Meat ago
Ch17 All Part of a Balanced Breakfast ago
Ch18 Tips For Delivery ago
Ch19 Fly In My Soup ago
Ch20 Snack Run ago
Ch21 Leftovers ago
Ch22 Jailhouse Rock Candy ago
Ch23 Home Cooking ago
Ch24 Good to the Last Bite ago
Side Dish #3 ago
Ingredients (Glossary) ago
Ch25 Kitchen Prep ago
Ch26 Dining Etiquette ago
Ch27 Salad Fork ago
Ch28 Double Danger Dinner Date ago
Ch29 Brewing ago
Side Dish #4 ago
Ch30 Food Courting ago
Ch31 Refried ago
Ch32 Dinner Bell ago
Ch33 Hangry ago
Ch34 Greasy Grimy Gopher Guts ago
Ch35 Picnic ago
Ch36 Smart Sushi ago
Ch37 Monster Mashed Potatoes ago
Sidedish #5 ago
Ch38 Chew ago
Ch39 Beefy Boy ago
Ch40 Cake ago
Ch? Rubber Chicken ago
Ch41 Smells Fishy ago
Ch42 Sweet, Salty, Sour ago
Ch43 I Can't Believe It's Not Tofu ago
Ch44 Slices of Life ago
Ch45 Bloodsuckers ago
Ch46 Food Chain ago
Ch47 Meatball With A Chance Of Lightning ago
Ch48 Food Chain 2: Eclectic Bologna ago
Sidedish #6 Impact ago
Ch49 Aftertaste ago
Sidedish #7 Food For Thought ago
Ch50 Spilt Milk ago

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Delcer
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Superminion is such a unique and fun story. Genuinely hilarious, but also not cracky. It pulls you in, makes you care about the characters, and makes you smile.

Deity-sama
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Great Overall Just long update schedule

Reviewed at: Ch50 Spilt Milk

This is by far my favorite super hero story but the updates are so slow Not to mention that quarantine worsens it further. Other than the update date schedule 10/10

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ThePhantomMan
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A great story brought down by it's schedule

Reviewed at: Ch41 Smells Fishy

This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It has wonderful characters, an interesting world that seems to follow the iceberg rule, and has interesting ideas and powers throughout.

The only problem is the upload schedule. I know that the story is free and therefore people think it's frouned upon to judge the author for the upload schedule, but at the time this review is written it has been  a month and a half since the last chapter, a chapter that raised a lot of questions.

Other than that, the story is great, the author has a good sense of style and they manage to have dialogue flow nicely in a way thats comedic when it wants to be. 

Overall it's great until you reach the most recent chapter. If the author ever gets a consistent scheduel (even if the chapters are spaced out more than normal) then i'd give it 4 stars

Daniel Hani
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The story shifts in style going from the perspective of a foreign creature in a world which it doesn't know much about. Somewhat like the saying a big fish in small pond or living inside of a well. The characters are well sought out and unique; However, there are missing words here and there with typos and grammar errors it's not unreadable but you are bound to stop and try to make out what a sentence means when its missing a word. The progression of the story thus far is nice there isn't the mc is op no one is his match setting he is just "above average" thus far. The style of writing is nice it smoothly shifts from first perspective to 3rd person perspective without losing the reader all in all a solid 3.5/5 its a fun read but it needs improvements in some areas. 

StrayKat
Overall

Nice light-hearted fun

Reviewed at: Ch50 Spilt Milk

This story features a superhero society (with friendly supervillans) from the perspective from an ignorant newborn bio-weapon. The story has a light tone as the main character tries to survive in such a society and it intrigues us with interesting ideas of how would a society featuring superpowers would function.

askeri
Overall

Awesome, professional writing. Definitely worth multiple rereads. Not too shabby or overwhelming on the technical details. Interesting combination of traditional superheros, post apocolyptical wasteland, mutants, and more in a unique mix. Kind of biopunk? That kind is hard to find, especially in a not grusome way. I would even say this is better then Worm, Pact, and Twig because of the simplicity and straighforwardness. 

Pratik Waghmare
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It's fun and entertaining

Reviewed at: Ch50 Spilt Milk

(On ch 50)

This novel shows the slow advancement of a rather wanna human, and it doesn't show the adrupt intelligence of the MC in any situation, he is not overpowered and that's great considering majority of novels, and I recommend it to all readers, I  am enjoying it upto now.