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In the war-torn land of Cyraveil, four heroes strove to overthrow an empire. By cold steel and elemental sorcery, they brought peace to a warring land on the brink of destruction. As the flames died, the realm needed strong leadership, and who better than the champions who had saved the kingdom? But when the people sought out their saviors... they vanished.

Matt, Blake, Jen, and Carl: the four mysterious companions, who together had deposed an insane ruler and saved countless lives, were gone—spirited back in a whirlwind of magic to a sleepy suburb in Mellbridge, Oregon, never to return. The friends found themselves home in the real world, exactly as they'd been the night they were taken, as if no time had passed... except only three came back.

  

 


 

Hi there! This was my entry for National Novel Writing Month, because why only write one series at a time? The more the merrier! (meanwhile, my keyboard bursts into flames...)

I'm also the writer of The Last Science, an ongoing low-fantasy/speculative sci-fi series. If you're familiar with that, you know what to expect here: lots of character-focused drama and dialogue, not a whole lot of traditional action. However, I'm writing a bit differently than usual here, and in a very different structure, so there should be some surprises for returning readers. I hope you enjoy it!

 [Discord] — for those of you who want to hang out and chat.

 

Cover art (fullsize): Path of Revelation, by taenaron (Tobias Roetsch), modified by Etzoli. Normally I like to do my own cover art from scratch, but I was in a rush for the contest. Might be replaced down the line if I get time.

[participant in the NaNoWriMo Royal Road challenge]

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Fasdaff
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A Hard-Hitting Twist on Dark Fantasy

Epilogue is a story with a unique and thought-provoking premise that should catch the attention of anyone with an interest in dark fantasy and similar stories. More importantly, Epilogue carries through with brisk and engaging style which maintains a steady pace of suspense that keeps you turning pages until it's over. It does a fantastic job of exploring its premise by showing its three characters struggle with the same circumstances in very different ways, and the very distinct points of view of each character help to keep the story varied and fresh from chapter to chapter.

Epilogue feels like a much shorter story than its length suggests; it is definitely not a lengthy drama with a drawn-out plot. The story moves very efficiently from plot point to point and wraps up while still retaining all of the momentum it built up over its chapters. For that reason you shouldn't be fooled by the drama/fantasy tags into expecting an epic fantasy story with long plot arcs and gradual character development. It's decidedly concise packs a serious punch and every page is worth the read.

theyank
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I'm glad I picked this up

Warning: Review contains spoilers

Great style. POVs, while written in first person, were each distinctive, though they started to blend together towards the end. No major issues, though.

Story: Great story, pretty good for the most part. Some areas could have been forshadowed better, such as the domestic, but it was really quite good without any overused tropes. I did mention a plot hole in one of the comments, but its nothing too major.

Grammar: A few typos here and there, nothing a proof read wouldn't fix.

Characters: This is where the piece really shines. Each character has their own motivation, their flaws and strengths, their backstories. The backstories were given in bits and pieces and could have been coherent, but nothing that really broke immersion. In the end, there were no protagonists or antagonists, just real life people trying to readjust to the real world.

I don't normally read webnovels, least of all on RRL. But this is really a novel, not a webnovel, and I think its good enough to be seen on the bookshelves. You can count me in for any of your future works, Etzoli

desologiki
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I wasn't prepared before reading this novel

If there are seven word to decribe this work it is; it that this review cannot do justice. It clearly has the mark of a good writer. The author is someone that can correctly and effectively convey the world stage as well as the motives and descriptions of the individual characters with in the story, while leaving up to the imagination the of what can just lie around the corner. Love it or Hate it there are plenty to say about this novel.

Kvothe
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This novel is absolutely wonderful. The story is absolutely stunning, realistic and engaging throughout the whole length of the novel. It's an extremely character driven novel, with hints of the characters' past shown and told to us in in a masterful way. It was a great Epilogue. 

I loved it. 

The Ark Builder
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I hate this, you gotta read it though

  1. I hate everything about this novel. The stupid characters who make stupid decisions. The characters who just don't speak up about their problems and keep to themselves knowing it will cause more problems for them. The depressing mood throughout the whole story. Lack of a happy or even hinted at happy ending. Mostly the characters

The setting was cool, I like the returned trait. All in all 5/5 book that I utterly hate. Made me depressed and mad at all the characters. I would recommend this to everybody.

 

Even if I hate it, it doesn't mean it's bad. It's good actually. Having induced emotions from the reader is good. Its a good book about flawed people trying to cope in a situation unfamiliar to them.

BigBadPeperoni
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I found this novel after it won NaNoWriMo and decided to give it a chance, and I did not regret that decission. This stroy is extremely good and should be published due to the sheer quality of the work despite being a quick read.

 

Style: The author has an amazing style which keeps the readed enthralled in the story telling and world builing present. It is extremely proffesional, more so than many novels I have read from renounded authors and the writter should feel very proud of this style.

 

Grammar: I have nothing to say about the grammar of this story other than it apears to be proffesionaly Proff read and edited with no obvious gramatical or spelling based mistakes that I noticed.

 

Story: The Author has managed to revitalise an extremly over done trope of 'Sent to a different universe with a fantasy setting'. It includes a seamless use of muliple POV which does not seem repeaditive and highights the character diven components of the story. The only reason that this did not recieve 5 stars is because I personally did not enjoy the thread forum posts which are used to try to express the frustration of Carl due to the lack of information but it was honestly boring to me, but that is a personal preffence. Still amazing work and a tone of prase should be directed towards the Author due to their amzaing use POV to tell a spectacular story with unpredictable twists.

 

Characters: Honestly the best part of the story with the multiple but even POV that the story it told from. This is done in a way to highlight inner conflicts and shows amazing character development. The personalitites feel real with realistic and understandable flaws. The author does an amzing job showing the changes in the reasoning with realisitc and logical thought patterns. Well done, you have my utmost respect for the planning and tallent that is required to make such belivable and three dimentonal characters. Again, well done.

 

Overall, this is a refressing take on an over used trope with intense character driven plot that is both highly realistic and entertaining. To any that have not yet had the oppourtunity to experience the trip the novel takes you on, I would highly recoment this as one of the best I have read on this site, period. 5/5 

Razanil
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The story is pure Gold errr Adamantine.

Reviewed at: Epilogue

What happens after you got transported to another world and then you got transported back? No comedy. Just real stuff. If you're fan of this kind of genre, do yourself a favor and read this.

Jokmagic
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Epilogue is one of those special stories that drop you into a story right at the end and answer the question of "What Happens Next?" The writing style of the internal monologues and almost diary like writing of each of the three characters is what makes the story. There is no Grand adventure there is no epic fight scene, this series is all about the three characters and their lives after this Narnia esque adventure that they just had and what happens when they have to integrate back into normal society. For one, he does his absolute best to a defdeg,  an it seems like it's working for him. For another he's completely out of place and falls into a dark spiral. And then there's the one that's caught in the middle who tries her best to integrate but due to issues, she is left feeling broken and is therefore not able to integrate back and society. Some of my favorite parts tells of Jen's time at a friend's house for dinner. It shows something that she didn't notice before she left but now with all the things thathappened  to her in this adventure she had she's able to pick up the subtle clues and notice something that is severely wrong. overall what makes the store is the characters and how they interact with the world and their stories after the fact. I  recommend this story as a must-read for anyone who is always wondering what happens after the adventure. 

KoboldPatrol
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Not an easy story to read but intense emotions

RRL is full of stories telling us about people from earth becoming heroes in a fantasy world. Rarely do those people return and never do we hear about how that turns out for them. 'Epilogue' starts where those stories have ended and shows how difficult it is to fit back into your ordinary life after having lived stressful but glorious adventures for the last years. Especially if you didn't want to return.

Style: The story is told in third-person style from an internal view, each chapter rotates between the three protagonists and there are short parts following the police and their missing person case about the fourth dimension-traveller. This shows us the events from multiple points of view, leading to additional nuances in the storytelling.

Story: The whole plot takes place back in our world. What happened in the other world is barely told, just a bit here and there. Bit by bit the reader learns what the characters had to do to survive and none of them is without scars. The things we learn are very deep with complex entanglements and brutal revelations.

Grammar: Good, very few errors.

Characters: The story concentrates on the inner turmoil and the difficulties the protagonists have fitting in after all they have won and lost. Each of them tries to cope in a different way which leads to different problems and they hurt from all those internal contradictions. Those and their relationship to each other are far from simple and this is described in an excellent way. Very rarely is a story this focused on the characters' development.

If you are looking for an easy read to pass the time, you should look elsewhere. This story hits you hard and makes you yearn for closure from these serious experiences.

NoDragons
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Single Mean Review (Think About This Every Time You Write)

Reviewed at: Chapter 2 — Carl

This is a good story. Keep it up.

 

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