RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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Nomad1791
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Outrageously good so far

Haent don't a advanced review in a while so here we go . First off this is not my kind of story, I like blood and action not slice of life but damn if it isnt refreshingly well written and with characters that feel invested in not hollow at all. Still very early to give a solid critical review but world is there, characters have personality in spades, story is easily pictures and pace is great. I'll keep my eye on it hope author sticks to it and wish him luck . 👍

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puna
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Among the best stories in here, very good read, the flow of the story is very good. 

EverShadow
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This is a shorter review, but the short of it is this is a great story. I like the characters, and it's a very engaging plot so far. A couple strange things that I don't totally get, like what her parents do and why she can't remember what year 9/11 happened, but overall I like it a lot.

However, it still is in the early phase where the character is experiencing rapid growth. Those are enjoyable the majority of the time no matter what, so it remains to be seen if this one can keep the momentum going.

R1ncewind
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Not sure how anyone could give this excellent story 0.5 stars.. Really like what you have written so far. Have recently been reading a couple of different doover stories like a fresh start as well as some isot stories over on ah.com and am considering trying to write one of my own.

 

Great job! Looking forward to read more of this.

Theyeti1234
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A true master piece,only problem is that there aren’t enough chapters and a daily schedule but that’s okay the characters feel real and the idea is a unique one we don’t have an op mc for once,We have an old lady who had a terrible childhood reliving it and she chose this time to correct her mistakes i like it.

 

RikkuHime
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Do-over stories are my guilty pleasure, but a lot of them fall into similar traps.

The MC's goal is either too grandiose and suffers from having too large a scope, or it's merely a self-insert fic that reads as an overly contrived 'fix-everything shitty about my life' wank-fest. 

So far this story hasn't fallen into either of the traps, but there are only 7 chapters at the time of this review.

All the characters in the story have distinct personality and tone, minus the father who reads as someone to show how the MC's home life wasn't absolute terrible.

A major plus is that the MC doesn't come off as someone who knows all the answers, but is struggling through her second time as she is trying to come to terms with herself. She has more depth than a standard self-insert.

Hectic1
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I'm really enjoying this story so far. It feels like it has a lot of heart and it speaks to something we all yearn for I.e. a way to redo our lives and fix some part mistakes. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Keep up the good work!

ChronoGandit
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I this story is turning out to be a warm and uplifting tale. And I want more. Believe in yourself Goblina.

Ackman
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Read 7 chapters and want more

A great start with attention to details that bring life to a story. The story seems to be thought out and as of chapter 7 progresses nicely while developing the characters in the story. With both character development and the way the story progresses, it just sucks you in and again as of chapter 7 leaves you wanting more! 

I’ll continue reading each chapter as they come out and I hope they are not to few and far between.

 

 

 

Chaos_Seed
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Fantastic and Original Idea

I absolutely love this novel so far, seven chapters in. The characters just come alive as you are reading, and I cannot help but feeling sorry for our MC as she hits each and every obstacle in her way. I thoroughly enjoy this author's writing style, and cannot wait for the future chapters to come! 

The story is well paced, as the Author doesn't push too fast, but also gets past the awkward years quickly, and the MC's character never goes off base. This isn't one of those novel's where the MC changes themself, and then their personality shifts with them. 

Their are little to no grammatical mistakes throughout this novel. As a writer myself, though with no works posted here, I absolutely despise reading a story that has a FANTASTIC story concept, but their writing ability makes me cringe every other sentence. 

To be honest, the only bad thing I could say about this story would be a wish for a new title. Other than that, this is fantastically written. 

As stated earlier I look forward to your future chapters, and will certainly favorite this story!