RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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sedael1
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Unique Take on the Time Loop Story

Most stories on this site quite fairly focus on writing grand fantastic stories that are more focused on advancing a plot rather than any form of deep characterization. re: Trailer Trash is not those other stories, instead it is a deep cut into a slice of life about a profoundly unhappy woman that is easily relatable and highly emotional. 5/5.

azarth
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Keep writing this please

Great story. Don't let the haters get you down. Good concept with above average writing. Keep up the great work.

Exit_Plan
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One of the best stories on RR, the characters are all well written and there isn't any of the suddenly becoming perfect trope. She works hard to get where she is and it is very admirable. Can't wait for more!

duhbigotaku
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Hit's close to home in a lot of ways that make me uncomfortable, but hopeful.

Nomad1791
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Outrageously good so far

Haent don't a advanced review in a while so here we go . First off this is not my kind of story, I like blood and action not slice of life but damn if it isnt refreshingly well written and with characters that feel invested in not hollow at all. Still very early to give a solid critical review but world is there, characters have personality in spades, story is easily pictures and pace is great. I'll keep my eye on it hope author sticks to it and wish him luck . 👍

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puna
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Among the best stories in here, very good read, the flow of the story is very good. 

R1ncewind
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Not sure how anyone could give this excellent story 0.5 stars.. Really like what you have written so far. Have recently been reading a couple of different doover stories like a fresh start as well as some isot stories over on ah.com and am considering trying to write one of my own.

 

Great job! Looking forward to read more of this.

Theyeti1234
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A true master piece,only problem is that there aren’t enough chapters and a daily schedule but that’s okay the characters feel real and the idea is a unique one we don’t have an op mc for once,We have an old lady who had a terrible childhood reliving it and she chose this time to correct her mistakes i like it.

 

RikkuHime
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Do-over stories are my guilty pleasure, but a lot of them fall into similar traps.

The MC's goal is either too grandiose and suffers from having too large a scope, or it's merely a self-insert fic that reads as an overly contrived 'fix-everything shitty about my life' wank-fest. 

So far this story hasn't fallen into either of the traps, but there are only 7 chapters at the time of this review.

All the characters in the story have distinct personality and tone, minus the father who reads as someone to show how the MC's home life wasn't absolute terrible.

A major plus is that the MC doesn't come off as someone who knows all the answers, but is struggling through her second time as she is trying to come to terms with herself. She has more depth than a standard self-insert.

Hectic1
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I'm really enjoying this story so far. It feels like it has a lot of heart and it speaks to something we all yearn for I.e. a way to redo our lives and fix some part mistakes. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Keep up the good work!