RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
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In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or, does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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Theyeti1234
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A true master piece,only problem is that there aren’t enough chapters and a daily schedule but that’s okay the characters feel real and the idea is a unique one we don’t have an op mc for once,We have an old lady who had a terrible childhood reliving it and she chose this time to correct her mistakes i like it.

 

Alex Storm
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Nth much to say .. i really like the story.. and want to hate it for the slow release speed.. but i know that isnt a reason of why i should give it a low review score... but i cant stop myself

AAAAAAAHHH

w.e.. take a 4.5/5 sorry for the 0.5 

 

Cant wait for more .. 

 

 

Edit.

Nvm. I like it a lot.. just hope for faster releases.. 5/5 stars

Gaiamccormick
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This is a great start to a story - inspiring, thought provoking, clear writing, and good character development. The only thing that I would change is the title! It is such a derogatory term that I passed it by many times before reading further. Keep up the great work! :)

Lincarer12
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YEET on so many levels my dude

'Tis but the best time travel storyi have read so far. Its complex. The relationships Tabitha has with people is so interesting. The Storyline, events, and the way you fill the gaps with information that is 100% relavent to the story is so professional. 

 

KEEP IT UP MY DUDE

Kikanolo
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Very Different From Most RR Stories

Reviewed at: 15: The Legacy of Shannon Delain.

RE: Trailer Trash is a redo story that has a lot of depth and is a solid read.

The premise of the story is that an old woman's mind gets set back to her thirteen year-old self, giving a chance to redo her life. Aside from the MRI mishap, there are no supernatural elements in the story.There are also no world-spanning stakes or epic scope. It is a slow-paced character focused story about a person who didn't live a very happy life, and takes full advantage of her second chance to do better. 

The MC is likable, kind, and driven, making following her as she improves her life very enjoyable. The improvements don't come easy, and we really see her work hard to avoid falling into the same patterns and mistakes she did previously. 

The supporting characters are also well-developed and experience growth.

The story is well-edited, the writing style smooth and easy to follow, and the story well-written, but this story's forte is definitely its cast of complex characters.

I would strongly recommend this story.

(As of Chapter 15)

Nomad1791
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Outrageously good so far

Haent don't a advanced review in a while so here we go . First off this is not my kind of story, I like blood and action not slice of life but damn if it isnt refreshingly well written and with characters that feel invested in not hollow at all. Still very early to give a solid critical review but world is there, characters have personality in spades, story is easily pictures and pace is great. I'll keep my eye on it hope author sticks to it and wish him luck . 👍

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Splizes
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There isn't much to go off of yet, but the first 7 chapters could be a case study in how to execute a "hook".

War_X_Lord
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Don't judge a book by its cover.

Usually when i'am searching for something to read on RRL i always skipped through this story after reading the synopsis thinking it would be like any other reincarnation story where the main character is suddenly super talented or remembers every detail of his past to the micro level (basically almost all reincarnation stories), i keep skipping this one around 20 times until today i decided to give it a chance out of pure boredom, and it turns out i judged a book by its cover, and i truly regret doing so. 

Ron Arnold
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I found your story well written and hard to put down.  I don't usually read very many books without, magic, or some kind of superpowers.  But you still have me hooked. Please finish your story.  I know it's hard to do, just keep trying.

P.S  I'm writing a story on RR and I can tell you, your grasp on writing is way better.  Good luck 

OneWhoWritesLies
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Perfect grammar, variegated vocabulary, good sentence structure. Always feels nice to read something without cringing at how badly it is written.

The story is interesting, I'm not really invested in the characters as there are not many chapters and the mc is either too hard on herself or being too arrogant. However, the psychology behind a few characters has still impressed me, especially the mother.

I do recommend this novel even tho it's not my usual cup of tea.