RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Adventure Contemporary Drama Historical Female Lead School Life Slice of Life Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or, does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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puna
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Among the best stories in here, very good read, the flow of the story is very good. 

WildB
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Read. you wil learn whats good -.-

I really enjoyed this "what if" story it's a fun read with as far as i could tell, no grammatical errors (only have high school english tough, scandinavian) Characters and growth is so far, excellent. but ehh kinda a story you would like to read all at once. not delayed by atm 12 days.. mr/ms or it, please release more chapters -.- 
had to look up some of the words but ehh learning new words from a good story is just another yay =) 

Sotehr
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I can only hope that someday, if I tried to write, it would be as good as this burgeoning novel. Please keep up the good work!

The Ark Builder
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Legit good RE story to real life

The title says it all. I am kinda dissapointed that she doesn't remember any fast money making ways, such as apple or tesla, or bitcoin. But going the american dream route is good as well (the from nothing to top). I am glad you made this, I never knew I needed this but now I can't live without it. Go forth with your ideas.

bugstomper
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The story is up to seven chapters as I write this. I've devoured them all in one night after a recommendtion in Reddit /r/rational and have added the RSS feed to my alerts. My rating of only 4.5/5 has to do with my hopes for where the story will go and grow as it proceeds. The author stated how they felt that this is no Wandering Inn or MoL. That's true, but in some ways the author has a harder job with this story. It is a slice of life, taking place in our real world of 1998 with no magic or fantasy or super-science to make the story larger than life. I like how the story avoids the trope of the time travelling protagonist who brings all the knowledge of future science and technology and stocks to invest in and bets to place. To the reviewers who had mentioned that anyone would have known to invest in Apple - This is a thirteen year old girl with no money and who never had money in her previous life. In another ten or fifteen years, will she know which of the companies whose name she remembers as successful are about to rise just as she finally has the ability to invest in them? I think the story does an amazing job of portraying which future knowledge she can actually use, to what degree it doesn't help her, and the difficulty that a socially awkward 60 year old woman has trying to drop in to the life of a 13 year old girl who will clearly not even be the 13 year old girl that she remembers being.

 

I am looking forward to see where this story goes.

The_Baker
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good writing and pacing

👍 great job, great pacing and character is original, mc is not some pompous know it all that quickly becomes op, but rather an original MC.

Hrothgar
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I’m enjoying your work very much so far. I love how fleshed out the characters are and am excited to see where they will go in the future. Tabitha really seems like someone who will achieve great sucess. I’m rooting for her cousins to end up as outstanding adults too!

Adam C.
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Read this book! 😍

This is a fantastic story. I was a little reticent to read it at first due to the slice of life genre and the title but I'm very glad I gave it a try.

Now I'm just utterly frustrated that the release date is so slow, please type as fast as Tabby. 😭

 

Thanks for the story! 😆

R1ncewind
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Not sure how anyone could give this excellent story 0.5 stars.. Really like what you have written so far. Have recently been reading a couple of different doover stories like a fresh start as well as some isot stories over on ah.com and am considering trying to write one of my own.

 

Great job! Looking forward to read more of this.

John1206
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The best contemporary stuff on this site

An amazing to read story, with compelling characters which also have a lot of growth. My only gripe with it is, that the mc sometimes seems a little „too perfect“.