RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Adventure Contemporary Drama Historical Female Lead School Life Slice of Life Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or, does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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EverShadow
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This is a shorter review, but the short of it is this is a great story. I like the characters, and it's a very engaging plot so far. A couple strange things that I don't totally get, like what her parents do and why she can't remember what year 9/11 happened, but overall I like it a lot.

However, it still is in the early phase where the character is experiencing rapid growth. Those are enjoyable the majority of the time no matter what, so it remains to be seen if this one can keep the momentum going.

Edit: It has. Good work.

Moontan
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It is so good, I read every chapter multiple times while i wait for the next chapter

FenraeDraconis
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Really good,

The characters feel real, the plot is there as more of a slice of life. I couldn't stop reading it once I started.

This story is really good; it's not cliched or overpowered but about determination and grit. The concept it expresses has more merit than just magically back in time...

Give it a shot. Though dear author

PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!! FEED MY BRAIN!

alexanderyou
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This has some of, if not the best characterization and world building of any do-over story I've ever read. Definitely recommend giving it a go if you're at all interested in this genre, or even if you aren't since the characters are just that good.

Black_Thorn
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The review titel says it all. The only downside is the time it takes the author to write the next chapter but good writing takes time I guess. 

Ayos81
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Good Writing and Storytelling

The character is established with flaws and tasks to accomplish which aren't impossible to overcome but make for a good enough of a goal to keep the MC goal-oriented and give a sense of progression. Character interactions are well expressed and somewhat realistic. LitRPG elements like stat sheets etc. are not included and I'm glad for it. Overall a good find and a great read, highly recommend.

Zachary Markson
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Got reccomended here from Topwebfiction, and though I'd give it a try; something different from what i usually read. I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the work and the character interactions. Some of the dialogue feels a bit stilted, but I think that I can safely chalk that up to the author still trying to get a handle on the individual characters. There are clearly some direction that they are trying to go with this, so as the series progress, I reserve the right to come back and upgrade this to a 5 star review

Sacredriver
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The story of Tabitha is one of second chances and 'what if', it's one of emotional roller-coaster from the start.

I can't think of anything that wouldn't spoil the story for prospective readers, all I have left to is that you'll inevitably fall in love with the protaganist of this series and some of the characters she interacts with.

Here is a prime example of how to write characters that feel and act like human beings, with all that it entails. 

reil-rhiil
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Truly, honestly, from the bottom of my heart, I say to you.

This story is a treasure. 

The depth, the character, the sheer emotion and comprehension engraved into every chapter is awe inspiring.

There is no hero. There is only Tabitha.

And she is trying her best.

Codered008
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This is a fantastic story, and a very uplifting one as well. I want to hold on this one and share it with next generation so they can gain valuable insight on the decisions we make and how it can affect us decades later. Please keep writing!