RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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doombot
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I read books for a living, and I got to say, wow. This is fantastically written, well paced, and presents a human, believable face to a protagonist in a situation we all wish we could be in.

Adam Carheden
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Excellent fantasy, but not in the D&D sense

Reviewed at: 7: The goblin artist.

It's incredibly refreshing to have a story not set in a video game. I still call it fantasy because I at least have though many times about how I might do things differently if a had the chance.

I keep coming back to this one. It's not a suspenseful page turner you can't out down, but every time I do I eventually think, "huh, I wonder if Tabby ever made it" and read the next chapter.

I gave it a 4 instead of a 5 because I thought her night-and-day transformation over the summer was a bit unrealistic, even with a lifetime of experience to motivate her, and I really want this story to be realistic (save the whole time travel thing, of course). If Tabby breezes through life the second time, I'm afraid that will just amplify my regrets whenever I think "if only I had just...". I want her to find that fate and chance and such have their way despite her foresight to remind me that I need not be perfect and to instead roll with the punches. But perhaps I just haven't read far enough.

SanicStrafe
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Insanely Good Story. Actually motivated me to work out

Reviewed at: 16: Trip to Louisville.

The title says it all. This story motivated me to actually start getting my life back on track in terms of my physical health. Thanks author for the wonderful story and I impatiently await the next chapter.

Berj
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Amazing read. The characters are interesting and it felt good to read the history. I'm a fan of 'going back to past histories', but this one deserves an special mention.

I'm not really a fan of Romance novels and hope the tags stay true, and the novel doesn't delve into a teenager romance history instead of the daily struggles of Tabby.

Bored monster
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We basically see a trailer trash who did not do anything significant in her life change after an accident gives her a redo of her life. This story is real, it's emotional and captures the essence of the characters while showing her daily struggles. 

I loved the story and I want more.

Black_Thorn
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The review titel says it all. The only downside is the time it takes the author to write the next chapter but good writing takes time I guess. 

alexanderyou
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This has some of, if not the best characterization and world building of any do-over story I've ever read. Definitely recommend giving it a go if you're at all interested in this genre, or even if you aren't since the characters are just that good.

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Really good,

The characters feel real, the plot is there as more of a slice of life. I couldn't stop reading it once I started.

This story is really good; it's not cliched or overpowered but about determination and grit. The concept it expresses has more merit than just magically back in time...

Give it a shot. Though dear author

PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!! FEED MY BRAIN!

Moontan
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It is so good, I read every chapter multiple times while i wait for the next chapter

GeoOlive
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Very well done story, easily as good as many I've bought from Amazon, including those from publishing houses. The author should consider contacting an agent, in my opinion. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.