RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Adventure Contemporary Drama Historical Female Lead School Life Slice of Life Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or, does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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HoloSol
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Writing this review as of chapter 19. Tabitha’s character does get better as the story goes on. In the beginning, I feel like she was a bit uppity, but there’s a reason for this. I really enjoy the developing relationship she has with her parents.

My only complaint is the upload speed 😭 Story is great though, and definitely worth the read!

Cestarian
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It's a decent story and I gave it a fair set of ratings for that...

 

But in it's current state it's not worth a read. It's not particularly fast paced, 13 chapters in and we are still barely at the beginning.

 

Couple this with the monthly chapter schedule and now we have a story that might be worth reading in 5-10 years, but not yet, not today. So I am dropping it till then.

xcares
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Story could rock but it doesn't.
The MC is too much of a Mary Sue and the rest of the characters are there to follow the plot of her emancipation from her horrible family/poor background.

It was kinda childish and boring.
Let's see how long before this review is deleted.XD

Big I
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A time travel story that barely deals being a time traveler

Reviewed at: 1: An uncomfortable homecoming.

 https://youtu.be/-TGj227OVKY

The above link is a comedic take on the moral implications of time travel. I've read the first few chapters of this story, and it's not bad, but it completely disregards the implications a reasonable person would experience when travelling back to live in 1998. 

The main character appears to only be interested in changing her personal history, and even then only in a very specific way. There's no plans for "Back To The Future" style sports betting, or trying to be an early investor in successful companies, e.g. Amazon or Netflix or whatever. The character doesn't seem to be interested in trying to influence politics or society. No mention is made, at least in the first few chapters, of trying to prevent any tragedies or mass deaths.

In every other "redo your life story" I've read, the protagonist either tries to use their future knowledge to save the world, they live in a world that doesn't need saving, or they have only imperfect memory of the future. I think that's because having a protagonist that remembers the future but only focuses on their personal life has unfortunate implications. 

Gompman
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This is a super slow daily life kind of fiction about a 60 year old woman who travelled back into time till she was 13 years old. Her goal from the start is not beeing Trailer Thrash (Poor, fat, unpopular and living in a trailer park)

I did not much enjoy the pacing and the way she speaks and act, for me this is almost as boring as it gets, though the grammar is good so that's a bonus.

But I do not read news-articles just because it has good grammar, I read them for the news, the content. 

In this one, I did not enjoy the main storyline, but if you like slowpaced Litrpg with a time-travel twist, this might be your cup of tea.

 
Replica1
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Wish fulfillment do over story albeit with no superpowers... Yet the mc doesnt remember anything to invest in??? Come on especially with the time frame Apple is an easy ride to money, google, yahoo, basically invest in most any internet based company that made it big... 

BoxxysBiggestFan
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The writing is great and captivating. I only wish the protagonist would aim higher than being kind of popular in high school, even if it makes sense in the story.

I want more.

Astro-Mage
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Fat shaming attempt at self help.

I find the whole concept of this novel insulting. The MC begins by hating herself and by writing a book about how she is the "hated goblin" because she is fat and everyone hates her. The instant she is no longer fat everyone likes her and wants to be her friend. Her mom steriotypically hates her for ruining her body. The writing is well done, but fat shaming should not a book make.