RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
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In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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Albin Karlstroem
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 Incredible story! You made me stop procrastinating and finally create an account just to rate this story.

UrobrouS
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A do-over story; so many try, so many fail.

 

This one is the story of a trailer trash elderly woman getting a second chance, clawing her way out of her old life by the skin of he teeth. the struggle is real; more than any other dragon-slaying quest.

 

Give it a try - I did so on a whim, and I regret scoffing at the title when I first saw it on the latest releases page a month ago.

DaemonSlayer
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Overall I've come to find your story to be quite orginal with the aspects of how the reincarnation is done. This and also the fact you are leaving out such things as super powers or the supernatural outside of the situation that started this story. The only problem I can see would be with some of the side characters not being as fleshed out as they coud potentially be. But this is more than likely due to the difficulty that comes from trying to express how it feels to live in such a poor standard of living and how it can affect the people around. But at the same time it shows it quite accuratelly, because life is as difficult as your starting point makes it. Here is a girl who had one of the worst possible starting points imaginable and yet look how far she's come. This comes around because of the life she has already lived, a life of regret and pain, a life she had accepted. Yet, when it comes time for her to relive this life she refuses, understanding that in truth she has not accepted this pain and want to ensure that she and the people around her don't have to go through this pain again. This is what I've gotten out of your 7 chapter you have written, I find your motivation and your efforts to write this have not been in vain. i truely believe that this story could go somewhere and I hope that you keep writing this, I do not know your situation with your life or how everything is going for you. But just remember that your readers are there for you.

Sincerly, Daemon

MayContainYuri
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I'm not good at reviewing but I think the fact that, as of right now, all the other reviews are positive with a 5 star rating should tell you enough. Read it. Really, it doesn't have many chapters yet but even just the few that are up are worth your time.

Definitely worth more of your time than my review at least, so go read it!

greenduck
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AMAZING MUST READ!!!!!

Amazing book, characters feel very real and all have their own personality, which is rare in web novels. And if your looking for A book that has characters that have true personality this is the book for you. Overall world development is good since it's based around real life Earth in recent time (it's hard to mess that up) and the local world decent had been fine for the small stress we've been exposed to. There plot is kind of loose but that's expected in the do-over genre this early in the novel. The Grammer is great however I'm gonna be honest and admit I'm unqualified to say if it's truly good other then my personal opinion, so in my uneducated opinion it's a very fluid read and I haven't encountered any messes up places where you get stuck on because of miss placed words or other mistakes you find on this site so the author has either amazing English skills or an awesome edditor. Umm... Yeah that's about all I've got so 5/5 good stuff keep up the great work and give me MOAR!!!

reil-rhiil
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Truly, honestly, from the bottom of my heart, I say to you.

This story is a treasure. 

The depth, the character, the sheer emotion and comprehension engraved into every chapter is awe inspiring.

There is no hero. There is only Tabitha.

And she is trying her best.

Omi Nya
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Best Kind of Trash

I thought of quickly skimming through the first few chapters. Here I am, on the last page of the story, and it is morning outside.


We are following Tabitha Moore, a woman well past her prime. An incident occurs that sends her mind back in her own body. Back to her childhood that she hated so much. Back into her accursed fat body. And back to her family, school and many other troublesome and painful things.


Is this a story of wish-fulfilling 'I'll do everything right and save the world' type? It's not an opposite type where everything goes wrong in many more ways, screwing the protagonist's life.


It's a realistic story of a woman reverting back into the girl and struggling with her life once more. And the struggle is not of the kind you'd expect, not 'oh I don't want to do it,' or 'another force shows and screws all the plans,' no.


But I suggest you read it yourself to find out.


The quality is way beyond RR. It belongs to a published book of an experienced author. Consistency, characters, plot, everything is beyond expectations. I'm surprised to find such a mature read here.


Hope, you'll be surprised, too.

 

PS: It actually made me do workouts again.

Sacredriver
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The story of Tabitha is one of second chances and 'what if', it's one of emotional roller-coaster from the start.

I can't think of anything that wouldn't spoil the story for prospective readers, all I have left to is that you'll inevitably fall in love with the protaganist of this series and some of the characters she interacts with.

Here is a prime example of how to write characters that feel and act like human beings, with all that it entails. 

Zachary Markson
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Got reccomended here from Topwebfiction, and though I'd give it a try; something different from what i usually read. I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the work and the character interactions. Some of the dialogue feels a bit stilted, but I think that I can safely chalk that up to the author still trying to get a handle on the individual characters. There are clearly some direction that they are trying to go with this, so as the series progress, I reserve the right to come back and upgrade this to a 5 star review

Ayos81
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Good Writing and Storytelling

The character is established with flaws and tasks to accomplish which aren't impossible to overcome but make for a good enough of a goal to keep the MC goal-oriented and give a sense of progression. Character interactions are well expressed and somewhat realistic. LitRPG elements like stat sheets etc. are not included and I'm glad for it. Overall a good find and a great read, highly recommend.