RE: Trailer Trash

by FortySixtyFour

Original ONGOING Comedy Contemporary Psychological Satire Female Lead Martial Arts Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

In the year 2045, an MRI mishap transmits Tabitha Moore's mind back into her body in the past. Now it's 1998, she's thirteen years old, and she has to confront her long, miserable lifetime of failures—and once again being trailer trash—all over again.

...Or does she?

/// A re-do story, everyone's guilty pleasure. Updates every month.

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Elaikases
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the story takes a small change and lets it ripple. 

Realistic, driven, hopeful and moving. 

So very, very good. 

HamsterDesTodes
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*sniffle*

10/10 Would use up some tissues during chapter 6 again

CremeCrimson
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Excellent grammar and mechanics, haven't seen a typo. The characters feel like real people and not just plot devices to harry the main character.

 

the story is pretty bog-standard, but the reader can't help but feel like they ought to pump their fist in the air for Tabitha's success. A zero to hero story minus the blood-letting. 

 

A good read to pass some time. 

HoloSol
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Tabitha really grows as a character

Writing this review as of chapter 19. Tabitha’s character does get better as the story goes on. In the beginning, I feel like she was a bit uppity, but there’s a reason for this. I really enjoy the developing relationship she has with her parents.

My only complaint is the upload speed 😭 Story is great though, and definitely worth the read!

Replica1
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Wish fulfillment do over story albeit with no superpowers... Yet the mc doesnt remember anything to invest in??? Come on especially with the time frame Apple is an easy ride to money, google, yahoo, basically invest in most any internet based company that made it big... 

Cestarian
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It's a decent story and I gave it a fair set of ratings for that...

 

But in it's current state it's not worth a read. It's not particularly fast paced, 13 chapters in and we are still barely at the beginning.

 

Couple this with the monthly chapter schedule and now we have a story that might be worth reading in 5-10 years, but not yet, not today. So I am dropping it till then.

Astro-Mage
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Fat shaming attempt at self help.

I find the whole concept of this novel insulting. The MC begins by hating herself and by writing a book about how she is the "hated goblin" because she is fat and everyone hates her. The instant she is no longer fat everyone likes her and wants to be her friend. Her mom steriotypically hates her for ruining her body. The writing is well done, but fat shaming should not a book make.

BoxxysBiggestFan
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Great writing, bland plot.

The writing is great and captivating. I only wish the protagonist would aim higher than being kind of popular in high school, even if it makes sense in the story.

I want more.