A heart-warming story of how a human has been summoned by a demon lord to become her little brother.
[18+ side story available on Patreon]
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Halloween wasn't that great for me (different time zone and everything) cuz no one seems to care bout it this year (maybe cuz it's pretty cold for the poor mortals), it's really sad ;-;
But damn, this story doesn't only make my day greater, but my whole fucking week~! ♡
I really wanna read more, the art style fascinated me once again and come on, demon Onee-sans are awesome as fuck~!
This is the kind of romance that gives a defenition for the word "fluffy". It warms the heart in a literal sense and feels legitametely fluffy.
the inclusion of images to emphasize scenes and lines make it that much better, and far easier to feel the warmth of the characters' relationship.
Although I am totally biased towards Amae's works. it is not without reason, I recommend all of them.
The 18+ Scenes Are Fucking Lewd!
Before I start, I will let you all know that if you haven’t seen the 18+ chapters then you are missing out :p! You can get access by donating $7 at patreon and all the links will be available! Now then, let us begin!!!
First things first lets discuss the grammar...
After reading the story I felt like the diction (word choice) was what made this story shine the way that it did. Of course there were a few cringey lines, but they did not impact the story greatly, for example: “you looked like a king pupper.” This sentence made me turn purple, but it had absolutely no impact on the story after, so I have decided to ignore it. (It was kind of funny though) Back to the main point though, the sentence structure were made properly, and if there were any spelling errors, there definitely weren’t many... thus my grammar rating would be— 4.5 Stars
The story was very entertaining, and it kept me hostage till I had finished all of the available chapters; however, I couldn’t help but feel as if the story was being hastened to quickly... skipping months is way too much at the very start of the novel, I feel as if I should’ve had more time to fall in love with the match made in heaven, and be able to whitness more than what was provided for me... I did enjoy the sex scenes as well; though you have to be a patreon to see them, I feel like spending the nessecary amount of money needed was worth it. The only other thing I wish that you could improve in this story, is the rate at which it is written! One month is too fricking long!!! I feel like the reason why this story is being rushed is because of how much time it takes for the next chapter to be released. Thus I must rate this masterpiece with a measly— 3.5 Stars
I Absolutely Loved The Demon Lord And Human Couple, And How They Progressed In Their Relationship With Each Other— 5 Stars
THUS THE OVERALL SCORE FOR THIS STORY IS— 4 Stars!!!
you said this character is based off of ane naru mono. dosent this mean its a fan fic?