Super Soldier not Super Hero

by Duck_No_Duck

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Female Lead Magic Martial Arts Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Traumatising content

Follow Emily as she awakens to become a Super Soldier through her training and first tour of duty.

Reader beware I am a stream of consciousness writer and this is my first story. This is a rough draft and that means that the grammar is going to be ...spotty.  I will go back and edit chapters at a later date.

Cover Photo by Piotr Wilk on Unsplash  Looking for a better photo though and not a random one from the internet.

 Updating at least two chapters a week Monday and Friday.

 

Looking for someone who can edit and proofread my story. If you are interested please PM me. 

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Roey2009
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Apart from a few grammar mistakes and odd choice words, no complaints.

Fresh and novel novel.

I like it.

molenir
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Really good story so far.    Army Supers.  Military fiction blended with superheros.  Looking forward to seeing how it goes.

It does have quite a few grammar issues, but they are mostly minor.  The wrong word used here or there.  Give it a shot.

lancew
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 A fun superhero adventure with a MC thats upbeat, and while not perfect is certainly competent at what shes chosen to do. Good story.