I would do anything for love...

by Tsaimath

Original COMPLETED Romance Sci-fi Short Story Anti-Hero Lead Magic

When genius is married to madness, when there is nothing to lose but everything to gain, can destiny be changed? 

A short story in a planned universe, maybe I'll do more with it. 

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Could've been better, but still good

Reviewed at: Every birth has it's challenges

Meh, that's my initial response to this little one-shot. It's not really great, kinda good, and not exactly bad. The story is pretty Meh, and I think this could be attributed to the fact that the author didn't really use the fact that this story was a short one shot to their advantage. This just feels like a scene taken out of a full sized story, it doesn't really feel like it's using it's size in a good way. As an example, short-stories usually have twist endings, because that helps them stay in the audiences mind longer, despite the short size. I'm not saying this would work for your story, just using it as an example