Mother of Learning
Zorian is a teenage mage of humble birth and slightly above-average skill, attending his third year of education at Cyoria's magical academy. He is a driven and irritable young man, consumed by a desire to ensure his own future and free himself of the influence of his family, whom he resents for favoring his brothers over him. Consequently, he has no time for pointless distractions or paying attention to other people's problems. As it happens, time is something he is about to get plenty of. On the eve of the Cyoria's annual summer festival, he is killed and brought back to the beginning of the month, just before he was about to take a train to Cyoria. Suddenly trapped in a time loop with no clear end or exit, Zorian will have to look both within and without to unravel the mystery before him. And he does have to unravel it, for the time loop hadn't been made for his sake and dangers lurk everywhere... Repetition is the mother of learning, but Zorian will have to first make sure he survives to try again - in a world of magic, even a time traveler isn't safe from those who wish him ill.
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The story was originally posted on fictionpress, back in 2011. When I reached chapter 91, I started uploading the story to RoyalRoad, one chapter per day. The story will continue to be updated on fictionpress as well as here, and can be reached by clicking on this link if somebody is interested, though at this point there is nothing there that isn't also on RoyalRoad.
The cover you see on the side has been made by a fellow RoyalRoad user Sydorow. Thank you for your time and art skills.
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i don't knoww where to start.
it's excellent so just go read it if you like the description .
So good. World, characters, & plot are all great
A 15 year old student is trapped in a time loop. Every 30 days (often less from his perspective) it resets. Things get crazy.
Why this has not been published I don’t understand.
This story is, overall, pretty damned good. I love the worldbuilding, the magic system, the characterizations of both major and minor characters, the disparate races and cultures. What lost a star was the lack of credible threats to the MC. Anything the MC does, no matter how crazy, doesn't really matter in the end. He's in a time loop from the get-go, so everything is erased and reset every month. That leaves no room for honest consequences for failure, and this is a problem in the latter third of the story when more and more crazy and dangerous stuff is attempted.
High risk, high reward is fine, but when the risk is nonexistent it leaves me as a reader bored. The one time it seemed there was a longer-term consequence, it was gone a chapter later. I had hoped the time loop would end by 2/3 through and the rest would have real consequences, but that didn't happen and I really started getting sick of the story after that.
Also, the author loses track of how much time it takes to do the things the MC does, to the point that he starts doing not just one or two, but literally dozens of things in a month that EACH took three to four weeks in the past, with no explanation of how it got faster. That's a minor point, but again very noticeable toward the later parts of the story.
Finally, the story gets generally worse as it goes along. The first 40-50 chapters are damned good. The next 30-40 the author transitions to telling us what the characters are doing rather than showing. Some chapters read like fully fleshed-out "to-do" lists in past tense rather than storytelling. And in the last 20-30 chapters the spelling, grammar, and word usage get worse as well. I originally rated this story 4 stars, but dropped it by one since the story really does get worse as it goes on, not so much in what happens but rather in how it's relayed on the page.
Still, this is definitely worth reading, and if the down sides I mentioned don't bother you it might be worth five stars to you. The writing really is quite good early on.
I have seen the other reviews but I'm not willing to put however much time is required in before the mc stops being such an angsty. edgy, spineless looser, it's typical fantasy SI bate and having read it, it makes sense why this story is so popular. It's blatent self fufilment with nothing interesting going on to make me want to slog through more. The complete lack of charecter descriptions is disapointing as well, it shouldn't even take that long but it's completly missing. The biggest dissapointment is how feely the author hands out the idiot ball to make the story work.
5 starts for grammar.That is the reason why I spend so much time at this. Had to read like half of this novel to realize that there is no story at all beside whole time loop. Twists are boring and predictable. Mc as a person closed in timeloop doesn't seems to mind. The only "reactions" we see are those between him and his sister and those are shallow and not real at all. There is no character build and progres. The only reason I gave it a 2 star no less as overall score is becouse it could be longer.
Well the storie was great the world building and the character devlopemeent as well ! It was a crazy ride from the start to the end, though there is on little thing that has buzzed me at the end because there was one spell that could have solved a few moral problem the Mc get at the end that is introduced at the beginning with a little bit of tweeking i believed spoiler alert don't read if you did not finished the storie !
The cause of the storie, the soul melding spell that the necromencer use at the the very start would have resolved the problem when going back in the real world after all the problem with that spell was the mixing of 2 different soul a little bit like the dark magic in tsukuyote saga ... am i wrong ???
This novel is terrible. It relies on a groundhog day like gimmick. The characters are flat, not terribly nuanced, and don't transform themselves much over the course of the story. Furthermore, the plot has no surprises.
The entire novel falls flat.