Mother of Learning

by nobody103

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Magic

Zorian is a teenage mage of humble birth and slightly above-average skill, attending his third year of education at Cyoria's magical academy. He is a driven and irritable young man, consumed by a desire to ensure his own future and free himself of the influence of his family, whom he resents for favoring his brothers over him. Consequently, he has no time for pointless distractions or paying attention to other people's problems.

As it happens, time is something he is about to get plenty of. On the eve of the Cyoria's annual summer festival, he is killed and brought back to the beginning of the month, just before he was about to take a train to Cyoria. Suddenly trapped in a time loop with no clear end or exit, Zorian will have to look both within and without to unravel the mystery before him. And he does have to unravel it, for the time loop hadn't been made for his sake and dangers lurk everywhere...

Repetition is the mother of learning, but Zorian will have to first make sure he survives to try again - in a world of magic, even a time traveler isn't safe from those who wish him ill.

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Next Chapter Target Date: 5th of May, 2019

The story updates with a new chapter every 3-4 weeks. I aim for one chapter every 3 weeks, but real life sometimes interferes with that and I end up taking an extra week to finish things.

If anyone is interested, I have a story-related worldbuilding site that can be found here. I don't update it as often as I should, but there is a fair amount of content there already. It also contains a page with all the fanart, fan translations, audio books and the like - you can reach it directly by clicking this link.

I have a patreon account for those kind people that want to give me money. It also contains info for those who want to donate via paypal.

The story was originally posted on fictionpress, back in 2011. When I reached chapter 91, I started uploading the story to RoyalRoad, one chapter per day. The story will continue to be updated on fictionpress as well as here, and can be reached by clicking on this link if somebody is interested, though at this point there is nothing there that isn't also on RoyalRoad.

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The cover you see on the side has been made by a fellow RoyalRoad user Sydorow. Thank you for your time and art skills.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Good Morning Brother ago
2. Life’s Little Problems ago
3. The Bitter Truth ago
4. Stars Fell ago
5. Start Over ago
6. Concentrate and Try Again ago
7. Of Gaps And Pretending ago
8. Perspective ago
9. Cheaters ago
10. Overlooked Details ago
11. Limiters ago
12. Soul Web ago
13. Any Second Now ago
14. The Sister Effect ago
15. Busy Friday ago
16. We Need To Talk ago
17. Sympathy for the Spider ago
18. The Pact is Sealed ago
19. Tangled Webs ago
20. A Matter of Faith ago
21. Wheel of Fortune ago
22. Complications ago
23. Lighting the Fuse ago
24. Smoke and Mirrors ago
25. The Unexpected ago
26. Soulkill ago
27. Cast Adrift ago
28. Cauldron ago
29. The Hunters and the Hunted ago
30. A Game of Shops ago
31. Marked ago
32. Alternatives ago
33. Gateways ago
34. Unreasonable Things ago
35. Mistakes Have Been Made ago
36. A Battle of Minds ago
37. Slow Burn ago
38. Return to Cyoria ago
39. Suspicious Coincidences ago
40. Shifting Tracks ago
41. Myriad Clashing Motives ago
42. Sum of its Parts ago
43. Overwhelmed ago
44. A Show of Trust ago
45. Fine Structures ago
46. The Other Side ago
47. Politics ago
48. Well of Souls ago
49. Substitution ago
50. Containment ago
51. Out of Control ago
52. Things Fall Apart ago
53. Phantoms ago
54. The Gate Is Barred ago
55. Threshold ago
56. Obscure ago
57. Unwanted ago
58. Questions and Answers ago
59. One Step Forward ago
60. Into the Abyss ago
61. Anthills ago
62. Improperly Used ago
63. The March of Days ago
64. Distance ago
65. Dangerous Ground ago
66. Marred Perfection ago
67. Convergence ago
68. Green Hell ago
69. Ruin ago
70. Carried Away ago
71. Shadows of the Past ago
72. Crossroads ago
73. Plodding Ahead ago
74. The Return ago
75. Soul Stealer ago
76. Critical Blunder ago
77. Testing ago
78. Grinding Stone ago
79. Crime and Evading Punishment ago
80. Enemies ago
81. A Civil Conversation ago
82. Ancient Circles ago
83. Scorpion ago
84. Powerless ago
85. Critical Mass ago
86. A New World ago
87. Agents of the Crown ago
88. Mysterious Ways ago
89. Victory ago
90. Change of Plans ago
91. A Path Paid in Blood ago
92. The Scramble ago
93. Shelter in the Storm ago
94. Ghosts ago
95. Betrayer ago
96. Contract ago
97. Illusory ago
98. Beneath the Surface ago
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jam99chgo
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rubycona
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A delightful character progression

 I love time loop stories! This is probably my favorite time loop story of all time.

What I especially love is the development of characters, primarily Zorian's. He starts off just barely tolerable - the whiny, angsty teenager who's got a huge chip on his shoulder. Yeah, there's reasons for it, and I mean, he is a teenager. So, like I said, tolerable. But his growth! The core of him stays the same, the growth never feels abnormally fast, and he comes an incredibly long way.

It's not a masterpiece - there's some irritating grammar errors, and some notable pacing issues from time to time - but on the whole, it's one of my favorites out there.

(Also, I followed the story on its other platform, and was pleasantly surprised to find it on here!)

RootNeg1Reality
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I'm on chapter 96 now and I'm really enjoying it. The characters are really interesting and deep. It's inspired me and I think it's one of the best written stories on this sight. Good job and thank you.

sometimes
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First Review - This Deserves it

I've been following this story on fictionpress for a while now and despite the long delay between chapters im constantly checking for an update anyways. Just read it. Theres a reaason every release garners hundreds of comments on the r/rational subreddit while most releases struggle to achieve even 30. Seriously do yourself a favor and read this gem.

Denver Kane
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Simply amazing. I everything about this novel. 

 

The grammar is perfect, the characters are perfect, hell even the worst things about this novel is perfect...Because there aren't any!!

bmore13246
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My favourite story on Royal Roadl. The characters are well thought through, and each seems genuinely unique and complex. the author manages to avoid the classical tropes that many authors of webnovel fall into and which annoy me.

In line with the well thought through characters the magic system is likewise thought through and the depth of it only adds to the story!!!

 

thanks for writing this

amassie
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I don't really see how anyone could give this anything other than 5 stars.  This has some of the most well developed characters and story on the site, the world building is AMAZING, the pacing is a good balance between description, character development, and story developement.

Wintertime
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This isn't a perfect story, but it's pretty near damn close.

tomcatfever
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This is the best web fiction series right now

If you like rational fiction and D&D you're gonna love this. MC isn't over powered. Starts off a lvl 1 or 2 ish mage trainee. Is accidentally caught in mysterious timewarp. Levels up to lv 20+ mind mage.

Makes friends. Kills interesting bosses. Does boring shaping exercises. 

Has to save the world from ending or the powers-that-be will expunge his soul from reality.

Zorian is having a tough month at the magic academy.

Wolven
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Probably the best magic based web novel (especially cause it doesn't use litrpg elements as a crutch like a lot of magic based stories). It's just a great read with characters that are relatable and have understandable flaws that make them feel more real