Mother of Learning

by nobody103

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Magic

Zorian is a teenage mage of humble birth and slightly above-average skill, attending his third year of education at Cyoria's magical academy. He is a driven and irritable young man, consumed by a desire to ensure his own future and free himself of the influence of his family, whom he resents for favoring his brothers over him. Consequently, he has no time for pointless distractions or paying attention to other people's problems.

As it happens, time is something he is about to get plenty of. On the eve of the Cyoria's annual summer festival, he is killed and brought back to the beginning of the month, just before he was about to take a train to Cyoria. Suddenly trapped in a time loop with no clear end or exit, Zorian will have to look both within and without to unravel the mystery before him. And he does have to unravel it, for the time loop hadn't been made for his sake and dangers lurk everywhere...

Repetition is the mother of learning, but Zorian will have to first make sure he survives to try again - in a world of magic, even a time traveler isn't safe from those who wish him ill.

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As some of you may know, this story has already been posted to fictionpress for a while now. It's a story about a teenage mage living in a fantasy world, albeit one with guns and trains, trying to make sense of his world after being stuck in a Groundhog Day style time loop. After a number of people suggested I post the story here as well, I have decided to do just that. The story was pretty well received by the readers so far - more than I ever dared to hope when I first started writing this - so I hope the Royal Road community will enjoy it too.

I plan to post the first 8 chapters in quick succession and then slowly start updating the story at a rate of 1 chapter per day, until all 91 finished chapters are up.

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The cover you see on the side has been made by a fellow RoyalRoad user Sydorow. Thank you for your time and art skills.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Good Morning Brother ago
2. Life’s Little Problems ago
3. The Bitter Truth ago
4. Stars Fell ago
5. Start Over ago
6. Concentrate and Try Again ago
7. Of Gaps And Pretending ago
8. Perspective ago
9. Cheaters ago
10. Overlooked Details ago
11. Limiters ago
12. Soul Web ago
13. Any Second Now ago
14. The Sister Effect ago
15. Busy Friday ago
16. We Need To Talk ago
17. Sympathy for the Spider ago
18. The Pact is Sealed ago
19. Tangled Webs ago
20. A Matter of Faith ago
21. Wheel of Fortune ago
22. Complications ago
23. Lighting the Fuse ago
24. Smoke and Mirrors ago
25. The Unexpected ago
26. Soulkill ago
27. Cast Adrift ago
28. Cauldron ago
29. The Hunters and the Hunted ago
30. A Game of Shops ago
31. Marked ago
32. Alternatives ago
33. Gateways ago
34. Unreasonable Things ago
35. Mistakes Have Been Made ago
36. A Battle of Minds ago
37. Slow Burn ago
38. Return to Cyoria ago
39. Suspicious Coincidences ago
40. Shifting Tracks ago
41. Myriad Clashing Motives ago
42. Sum of its Parts ago
43. Overwhelmed ago
44. A Show of Trust ago
45. Fine Structures ago
46. The Other Side ago
47. Politics ago
48. Well of Souls ago
49. Substitution ago
50. Containment ago
51. Out of Control ago
52. Things Fall Apart ago
53. Phantoms ago
54. The Gate Is Barred ago
55. Threshold ago
56. Obscure ago
57. Unwanted ago
58. Questions and Answers ago
59. One Step Forward ago
60. Into the Abyss ago
61. Anthills ago
62. Improperly Used ago
63. The March of Days ago
64. Distance ago
65. Dangerous Ground ago
66. Marred Perfection ago
67. Convergence ago
68. Green Hell ago
69. Ruin ago
70. Carried Away ago
71. Shadows of the Past ago
72. Crossroads ago
73. Plodding Ahead ago
74. The Return ago
75. Soul Stealer ago
76. Critical Blunder ago
77. Testing ago
78. Grinding Stone ago
79. Crime and Evading Punishment ago
80. Enemies ago
81. A Civil Conversation ago
82. Ancient Circles ago
83. Scorpion ago
84. Powerless ago
85. Critical Mass ago
86. A New World ago
87. Agents of the Crown ago
88. Mysterious Ways ago
89. Victory ago
90. Change of Plans ago
91. A Path Paid in Blood ago
92. The Scramble ago
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Apul
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I've been reading this story for years. I would count nobody103 up there with Wildbow for quality and story. The characters are fully fleshed out with actual character development. Read it. You won't be disapointed. 

LordMars9873
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One of the best I have ever read. I swear the only reason I am not giving 5 stars is that I went to the orginal version and it is so close to finishing but has not ended yet. As soon as it ends full review with 5 stars. 

ReadingGod
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Lots of reviews. But i'll give a review anyway!

One of the best reads in RoyalRoad so far! Glad author decided to share the story to us in here. Anyways most reviews already discussed what the story is. All I can say is Good Job!

Le Blanc
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Other Dimensional view

I thought that im an expert and experience reader... but then this gem slap mah face off and shove onto mah head what it is really... this is an over all other worldy novel that can tople the mind of a 190 iQ level and experience reader thought im no 190 iQ mah experience and knowledge can flop thise numbers ... ay ay 5 star is the true level upon u that i bestow !!!!

Archdale
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I have to say this was a great read. I really look forward to reading the rest as it comes out.

kao
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Groundhog's Day : But with Magic!

If you found the idea of watching a magical version of Bill Murray in Groundhog's Day or just a keen idea of how magic and time travel works. 

You may just love this series. 

I read it when the writer published on anothr site. Glad he came over here to share his love.

Oddly enough...I do have this story on my browser favorite...been holding off reading to let the writer bank as much as possible. It's such a good read that I can easily binge it to the end. Gah!

 

So give this a read if you want to try out magic and time travel repeating days...good stuff!!

Czarny Arek
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You know that this story is translated to polish ? only few chapters and its on hiatus but still xd

https://novelki.pl/projekty/mother-of-learning#pills-comments  

TrueASDFMan
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Great World, Great Characters, Great Story

What I like most about this story, is the world building and character development. Not just for the MC, though of course it's most obvious for him, but for all characters. There actions seem believable and fluid. There has not been a single moment where I thought, "Wait, that's a weird reaction." Those two things combined and you really get immersed in the story. It's simple great.

Adam C.
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This is one of the best online novels I have ever read! Now please hurry up & finish the next chapter so I can sate my addiction. 🤤

moira
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Lovely, awesome surprise

Bloody hell, the thing that really blew my mind is - MC is really progressing. Really. Progressing. You can see character development so pretty nicely it’s just insane. So many legit books don’t have this kind of development. My respect. Can't say anything about grammar because it's not my native language, but beside that - the story is very well paced, have great balance between worldbuilding, action, plot or whatever else you want to get out of great story. I actually think of it as the story on the same level as some of my favourite dead tree books I like a great deal.

(Oh my. How many times I wrote great? So far the mighty fallen.)

Anyway, I am speaking Mr Brandon Sanderson, duo Ilona Andrews, Sergei Lukyanenko, David Weber or Michelle Sagara like. Kick-ass story and big surprise. Lovely, awesome surprise if you like this kind of stories.