Transmigrating Upgrade Specialist

by yungsern87

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Male Lead Martial Arts Reincarnation Slice of Life Strategy Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content

After transmigration, Zhang Wu Ji is reincarnated into a youngster body with the same name.

Their differences?

Before reincarnated, he was a poor librarian that have to sleep in the library because he can't afford to rent a room. After reincarnated, he was a poor bastard that was despised by his two elder brothers because he was born with a worthless Martial Constitution.

But as a Transmigrator, he possessed a special System, [Upgrade] that allows him to strengthen anything in this world. How would he fare when he will need to earn, create, upgrade, and upgrade even more to reach the peak of the world?

 

Author Note:
This is a new attempt of mine for a serious piece of work. Grammarly already in used, but not the premium version one (it cost me a hundred pounds for a year subscription), I occasionally check my works and read the comments, so I hope more productive comment thanks.
English is not my main language, I am merely a graduate that came out to work, live, married, and write. I hope the mistakes that were done in the chapters can be accepted if it could, amended if I can, and advised if I get.

Thanks!

Very!

Much!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - A Weird World! (Re-Edited) ago
Chapter 2 - Worthless Pills! (Re-Edited) ago
Chapter 3 - Lack of Cultivation (Re-Edited) ago
Chapter 4 - Cultivating Differently! ago
Chapter 5 - Wielding a Sword Without a Skill ago
Chapter 6 - Making an Iron Ruler (Re-edited) ago
Chapter 7 - Qing Spirit Woods (Re-edited) ago
Chapter 8 - unknown Secret (Re-edited) ago
Chapter 9 - Disciple ago
Chapter 10 - Torturing Demon ago
Chapter 11 - Passing the Test ago
Chapter 12 - Tang Yuan and Merchant ago
Chapter 13 - Bone Strengthening Art! ago
Chapter 14 - Crystal Surgeon Knife +5 ago
Chapter 15 - Yi-Jia Swords. ago
Chapter 16 - Rumor of Four Phases ago
Chapter 17 - Double Xuan Paper. ago
Chapter 18 - Auction! ago
Chapter 19 - Killing Elder Yang! ago
Chapter 20 - Inner Qi Fighter ago
Chapter 21 - Bronze Grade Nourishment Art! ago
Chapter 22 - Sun Facing Fruit Tree! ago
Chapter 23 - Seven Star Apprentice Hall (1) ago
Chapter 24 - Seven Star Apprentice Hall (2) ago
Chapter 25 - Medicine and Metallurgy (1) ago
Chapter 26 - Medicine and Metallurgy (2) ago
Chapter 27 - Taking in 3 Disciples. ago
Chapter 28 - Roasted Mulberry Tea Leaves ago
Chapter 29 - Remembering Something ago
Chapter 30 - Begin Concocting ago
Chapter 31 - Trouble Come at Unexpected Time (1) ago
Chapter 32 - Trouble Come at Unexpected Time (2) ago
Chapter 33 - Rebuilding Wen Wu City (1) ago
Chapter 34 - Rebuilding Wen Wu City (2) ago
Chapter 35 - Zhang Wu Ji's First Treasure (1) ago
Chapter 36 - Zhang Wu Ji's First Treasure (2) ago
Chapter 37 - Zhang Wu Ji's First Treasure (3) ago
Chapter 38 - Zhang Wu Ji's First Treasure (4) ago
Chapter 39 - Longfeng Jade Ruler! ago
Chapter 40 - Outstanding (1) ago
chapter 41 - Outstanding (2) ago
Chapter 42 - Outstanding (3) ago
Chapter 43 - Martial Body ago
Chapter 44 - Accepting a Task to Purge ago
Chapter 45 - Finding Allies ago
Chapter 46 - Preparation Begins (1) ago
Chapter 47 - Preparation Begins (2) ago
Chapter 48 - Preparation Begins (3) ago
Chapter 49 - Blueprint Option (1) ago
Chapter 50 - Blueprint Option (2) ago
Chapter 51 - Counties Gathering Competition Starts (1) ago
Chapter 52 - Counties Gathering Competition Starts (2) ago
Chapter 53 - Counties Gathering Competition Starts (3) ago
Chapter 54 - Counties Gathering Competition Starts (4) ago
Chapter 55 - How to House a Spirit Zhang Wu Ji Style (1) ago
Chapter 56 - How to House a Spirit Zhang Wu Ji Style (2) ago
Chapter 57 - Inner Demon Slaughtering Wine ago
Chapter 58 - Rebellion (1) ago
Chapter 59 - Rebellion (2) ago
Chapter 60 - Rebellion (3) ago
Chapter 61 - Start From Metal (1) ago
Chapter 62 - Start From Metal (2) ago
Chapter 63 - Second Progress - Blueprints (1) ago
Chapter 64 - Second Progress - Blueprints (2) ago
Chapter 65 - Second Progress - Blueprints (3) ago
Chapter 66 - Peony Flower City (1) ago
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Oliver Cromwell 111
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Author, do you read Upgrade Specialist in Another World?

Temur
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Great work! I love story and it's pace. And Mc who isn't too of or a terminator 

Elfendrago
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Sorry to see you end this

The story may have a few grammar issues but I found it easy to read and understand.  And don't listen to haters who don't realise that no author starts off good and there is no such thing as perfect it's all preference. I enjoyed the story if you would like to continue I could proofread for you if you would like. Anyway ididnt mind the fast pace and development. Was it meant as a serious story or an enjoyable hour by. In my opinion the system genre is all fast paced and most are enjoyable

Jknott
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You should work on your sentence structure and word use. Exchange some words or phrases to make it flow better, Or find someone to edit the book for you. I like the concept of the book though and id love to read more. I didnt see any spelling errors and thats always a plus. You should also flesh out your character more. He suddenly finds himself in the woods after being hit by a car and he doesnt freak out even a little bit? New body and hes just fine? Then he manages to create healing/mending pills in an hour. Could sort of see that if he was a chemist in his previous life but none of his previous life is mentioned. Please Please PLEASE get an editor or proofreader. This book is vety hard to read because i have to read a sentence 2 or 3 times think up better wording before i can continue to the next sentence

Waytocool
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Work on your grammer!!!

 Huge improvements have been made!

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TheAdventurer
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Interesting enough and the author has shown great improvements compared to his earlier chapters, I gave five stars since I have high expectations regarding the story!

Jekyll
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I had enough after four paragraphs

I was expecting poor grammar, but it discouraged me from reading after four paraghraps. It may be good story wise, but I am no native english speeker and don't want to learn bad habits.

If you want more readers, please get a proofreader and maybe I will give it another chance.

Inbetweenaction
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The story seems OK. Very inspired by upgrade specialist, but seems OK.

 

But the grammar... Mate, even your edited version is horrible. I can read most things, and my own grammar is not super good, but this was painful 

 

Get a proof reader, or the story is unreadable. And it really does have potential to be fairly decent

 

Couldn't get long enough to comment on characters due to the grammar

Labeeb Waqar
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Plz don't abandon this story I love your story and you have improved a lot plzzcrysealed

Parsia
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Absolute virus for my eyes

 I would invest in Grammarly. 

 

Even your synopsis raped my eyes.

 

the first few sentences violated my brain functions.

 

But the concept is okay I guess. I read for like 30 seconds before I slammed the return key.