The Outer Sphere

by Macronomicon

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi LitRPG Magic Male Lead Strategy
Warning This fiction contains:
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Garth Daniels is down on his luck, running from his life in a quiet little town in the middle of America when our universe is co-opted into a war between an unstoppable race of reality-hopping monsters that feeds on the flesh of living creatures, and a conglomeration of thousands of realities, nested inside each other like a matroska doll.

We're the new layer.

These monsters, the Kipling, can only be defeated in a reality with very specific physics, otherwise they are unstoppable, and so Earth's universe has been assimilated to give us a fighting chance.

Garth must set aside everything that he knows, and think fast to adapt to the new laws of nature if he wants to survive.

Cover by Asera, a cool, helpful dude, who doesn't get enough props. Go check him out!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Welcome to the War ago
Chapter 2: Leanne ago
Chapter 3: Abstinance and the other thing ago
Chapter 4: Sphere Postal Service ago
Chapter 5: Takin' 'em back to School ago
Chapter 6: Confrontation ago
Chapter 7: Gunfight at the Library ago
Chapter 8: Obligatory Grinding and Harold's day. ago
Chapter 9: Peas and Carrots ago
Chapter 10: Nubile Warrior Princess ago
Chapter 11: Wet Dreams may Come ago
Chapter 12: Asshole Tiger ago
Chapter 13: Seedling Lockpicking ago
Chapter 14: Overdose ago
Chapter 15: Butter Race ago
Chapter 16: Have Some Class ago
Chapter 17: A Date With Sandi ago
Chapter 18: Good God Greg ago
Chapter 19: Venture Capital ago
Chapter 20: Familiar Treats ago
Chapter 21: Round Two ago
Chapter 22: The birds and the Succubees ago
Chapter 23: insults and Injuries ago
Chapter 24: Plant Drill Sergeant ago
Chapter 25: Performance Review ago
Chapter 26: Succubi in Foxholes ago
Chapter 27: For Safekeeping ago
Chapter 28: Slap-Chop ago
Chapter 29: Culture Shock ago
Chapter 30: Fire Solves Problems ago
Chapter 31: Never Interrupt me When I'm Rich! ago
Chapter 32: Opera makes Pot Fancy and Expensive ago
Chapter 33: Working hard at Looking Chill ago
Chapter 34: Spell Theory ago
Chapter 35: Under Siege Too ago
Chapter 36: Purple Heart ago
The Road so Far ago
Chapter 37: A Real Bad Guy ago
Chapter 38: Throw the Wizard a Bone ago
Chapter 39: Bad Business Partners ago
Chapter 40: The Speech ago
Chapter 41: Letters ago
Chapter 42: Orders ago
Chapter 43: The Home Field Advantage ago
Chapter 44: A Victimless Crime ago
Chapter 45: That'll wake you up in the Morning! ago
Chapter 46: Powdered Courage ago
Chapter 47: A Real Bad Vacation ago
Chapter 48: The hero of Outpost 8901 ago
Chapter 49: Consequences ago
Chapter 50: Appearances can be Deceiving ago
Chapter 51: When the Student is Ready, the Master Appears ago
Chapter 52: Personal Hygene ago
Chapter 53: The Heist ago
Chapter 54: Homecoming ago
Chapter 55: Give me a Hand ago
Chapter 56: The First Lesson ago
Chapter 57: A real bad First Impression ago
Chapter 58: Keep your Friends Close ago
Chapter 59: And your Enemies Crucified ago
Chapter 60: Getting Ready for a Visit ago
Chapter 61: The In-Laws ago
Chapter 62: Gate Tag ago
Chapter 63: The Other Shoe ago
Chapter 64: Mad Scientist's Anonymous ago
Chapter 65: Clear Smarter, not Harder ago
Chapter 66: Punching Up ago
Chapter 67: Aggressive Cuddles ago
Chapter 68: Look Toward the Future ago
Chapter 69: A real bad Day ago
Chapter 70: Bell's Breed and Feed ago
Chapter 71: Obligatory Quest ago
Chapter 72: Run, Forest, Run! ago
Chapter 73: I don't Recall the Rest. ago
Chapter 74: Next Tier ago
Chapter 75: A Moment's Peace ago
Chapter 76: A long Day ago
Chapter 77: Hold My Baby ago
Chapter 78: What WOULD your Mother Say? ago
Chapter 79: Ms. Banyan (AKA the gang solves the baby Problem) ago
Chapter 80: A Tangled Web ago
Chapter 81: Experiments ago
Chapter 82: Queen ago
Chapter 83: Date Night ago
Chapter 84: Job Interview ago
Chapter 85: Stay Classy ago
Chapter 86: Twelve heads are better than six ago
Chapter 87: Rubbing his nose in It ago
Chapter 88: A New Breed ago
Chapter 89: Fleshweaver ago
Chapter 90: Offshoots ago
Chapter 91: He Started It ago
Chapter 92: Molesting a Dragon ago
Chapter 93: Looking as Dangerous as possible ago
Chapter 94: Doppleganger Faux Pas ago
Chapter 95: Intermission #1: Outskirts with Jamal ago
Chapter 96: Intermission #2: Bad Behavior ago
Chapter 97: Shit hits the Fan ago
Chapter 98: Thy list of Crimes ago
Chapter 99: Eight Thousand Tons of Muscle. ago
Chapter 100: Best laid Plants ago
Chapter 101: Garthspawn ago
The Road so Far ago
Chapter 102: Fugitives ago
Chapter 103: Car Troubles ago
Chapter 104: Chairman Mao ago
Chapter 105: Children's Fables ago
Chapter 106: Sibling Rivalry ago
Chapter 107: Collision Course ago
Chapter 108: Slugmatch in the Alley ago
Chapter 109: Cat and Mouse ago
Chapter 110: New day, new Opportunities. ago
Chapter 111: Hardball ago
Chapter 112: Disastrous Second Impression ago
Chapter 113: Playing with the Rules ago
Chapter 114: Stepping on Landmines ago
Chapter 115: Throwing the fight. ago
Chapter 116: Secret’s out ago
Chapter 117: Putting it all out There ago
Chapter 118: Dangers of Pissing in the Dark ago
Chapter 119: Overdose Pt. 2 ago
Chapter 120: A whole new world ago
Chapter 121 : Treasure Hunt ago
Chapter 122: Sleep Talking ago
Chapter 123: The Fire ago
Chapter 124: The Exodus ago
Chapter 125: No Excuse for Ignorance ago
Chapter 126: Negotiations Break Down ago
Chapter 127: Priorities ago
Chapter 128: Now Hiring! ago
Chapter 129: Taking care of Business (and working overtime) ago
Chapter 130: Doodles & Plans ago
Chapter 131: Meeting the Competition ago
Chapter 132: Eskapeh Mushroom ago
Chapter 133: Gold Digger ago
Chapter 134: Old Acquaintances ago
Chapter 135: Complete with Treasure ago
Chapter 136: Laser Spiders ago
Chapter 137: Bucket List ago
Chapter 138: Exit Stratege-r-y ago
Chapter 139: First Volley ago
Chapter 140: Never Start a war of Attrition Against a lich ago
Chapter 141: Wingman ago
Chapter 142: Downtime ago
Chapter 143: Wrestling’s fake ago
Chapter 144: Von Neumann Probing ago
Chapter 145: Denial is not a river in Egypt ago
Chapter 146: Sorting shit Out ago
Chapter 147: Working Hard, or Hardly Working ago
Chapter 148: Dry-humping a Fossil ago
Chapter 149: Dirty Operating System ago
Chapter 150: What is your type, Anyway? ago
Chapter 151: Secrets ago
Chapter 152: The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Ethical Kidnapping ago
Chapter 153: Hold my Liver ago
Chapter 154: The last Morning ago
Chapter 155: You Break her, you buy Her ago
Chapter 156: Exponential Growth ago
Chapter 157: Dirty Deeds ago
Chapter 158: Done dirt Cheap! ago
Chapter 159: Soul sumo Wrestling ago
Chapter 160: Jelly Bean, The Goblin Queen ago
Chapter 161: Soda & Mascara ago
Chapter 162: It’s got Electrolytes ago
Chapter 163: The safe word Is Pequod ago
Chapter 164: drop a loaf ago
Chapter 165: Old Friends ago
Chapter 166: Tell me About the Bad Guy ago
Chapter 167: Paul's Night Out ago
Chapter 168: BBQ ago
Chapter 169: Something Hardass this way comes ago
Chapter 170: Pit-Stop ago
Chapter 171: The day after Tomorrow ago
Chapter 172: Operational Security ago
Chapter 173: Hypocrisy, Schmipocrisy ago
Chapter 174: The Wheel Turns. ago
Chapter 175: Everybody loves the Parade ago
Chapter 176: The Enemy has Landed. ago
Chapter 177: So you want to Start Touching Yourself ago
Chapter 178: Died with his Pants On ago
Chapter 179: The Double fake out ago
Chapter 180: Surveillance ago
Chapter 181: The Training he was Talking About. ago
Chapter 182: Eye of the Tiger ago
Chapter 183: Mommy Mode ago
Chapter 184: Munasei, Leave me Be ago
Chapter 185: Omnipresent Supergalactic Oneness! ago
Chapter 186: Thoughts on Body Modification ago
Chapter 187: Midlife Crisis ago
Chapter 188: Motivation ago
Chapter 189: Instant communication ago
Chapter 190: It’s all coming together ago
Chapter 191: Marker ago
Chapter 192: Gimmie a minute ago
Chapter 193: Subpoena is hard to spell ago
Chapter 194: Jailhouse rock (Explicit) ago
Chapter 195: Miss Trial ago
Chapter 196: 1 Night of Rehabilitation ago
Chapter 197: Forward Progress ago
198: Facets ago
Chapter 199: The Practice Effect ago
Chapter 200: Scientists with Benefits ago
Chapter 201: Jean-O-Cide ago
Chapter 202: Side Effects Include Ninja Lawnmower Rocks ago
Chapter 203: Watch what you Think ago
Chapter 204: Backlash ago
Chapter 205: U.S.S Fertility ago
Chapter 206: Beam me, Scotty ago
Chapter 207: Deep-space Mining for Dummies ago
Chapter 208: Pit Stop ago
Chapter 209: Intergalactic, Planetary ago
Chapter 210: Planetary, intergalactic ago
Chapter 211: Pow, Right in the Cultural Identity ago
Chapter 212: The Mire ago
Chapter 213: Captivated ago
Chapter 214: Caitlyn Vs Privacy ago
Chapter 215: The Surge ago
Chapter 216: Tasty Book Trade ago
Chapter 217: Have a nice Trip ago
Chapter 218: Mantra ago
Chapter 219: Bel gets a Date ago
Chapter 220: Tier 3: Lucid Death ago
Chapter 221: The Hand Job ago
Chapter 222: Bid High ago
Chapter 223: Rigorous Negotiations ago
Chapter 224: Veneer ago
Chapter 225: War Pigs ago
Chapter 226: The Clone Wars. ago

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Vitanima
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Like a train wreck. It's bad, yet you keep reading

It was an average 3/5 stars before chapter 100, I was just reading it to pass time till then, but after that it dropped to 1 star and ruined any remaining enjoyment I had. Chapter 100 is the absolute epitome of lazy writing I will 100% use this novel in the future for examples of very lazy writing. It does not matter if it was an interesting idea, or if it recieved a lot of praise in the comments, chapter 100 was horrible. and I'll expalin why.

Spoiler: Why chapter 100 is bad

 

zigman2021
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Good writing cold-cocked me

I have read a lot of fiction on RR. I rarely feel the need to comment on a story. So far I only bother when I come across a trending story that wastes my time by being some of the worst garbage I've ever read; hoping to save other, poor souls from sharing my fate.

Then I came across The Outer Sphere. Handful of reviews, not very popular, never heard of the author. I go in not expecting much. Starts off with an interesting (new) take on the "system hits earth" genre and then it really takes off with impressive world building and good writing. The writing starts off alright. But later chapters have had me literally laughing out loud. Fairly rare thing for a story to manage.

Don't let the lack of reviews mislead you. Not perfect but pretty entertaining. This one is worth giving a shot.

Robert Obiekwe
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From the beginning till chapter 99 you get a story of a man with a below average life.  Douchebag brother, corrupt politician parents that through him under the bus to save their own asses. You see this man raise from the ashes, make a name for himself, find a girl, LITERALLY F*CK A GODDESS, make a family, create a city, not kill his doppelgänger and instead becoming best buddies, and learn magic.

It was all going great till we hit ch100 and the author decided to bash the reset button destroying 99% of what makes this story great and turning it into a grim dark.

I did not like it and based off of the other reviews I’m not alone and will read a few more chapters. If it don’t pick up and leave the grimdark genre soon then I’m dropping.

Other than that the novel is great.

WayAheadOfYou
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 I don't get it. I just don't understand!!! Why would you write a story, build up characters, a world, a narrative - and then just kill everything off out of nowhere and start over!

It may as well be a different story altogether after that chapter, everything that came before is just backstory now.

Geneticfreak
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Two different stories but both are great

Reviewed at: Chapter 158: Done dirt Cheap!

Very well written, the story is great, the mc is great, the author has some great ideas and implements them well.

like others have said everything changes at chapter 100. It’s honestly a completely different story. I can see why the author did it and I can understand why people are mad about it. 

Personally, I don’t mind it. It could have been executed better, maybe giving a bit more closure to what was essentially the end of one story but I can also see why you would want it to stay open ended, it let’s then readers feel the frustration of the MC to some extent. 

I still enjoy the story and I look forward to continue reading it, even if it is a very different one to the one I started reading. Keep up the good work! 

thejadmaster
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For me, it was the way he tossed aside relationships and then had the character act like they barely mattered.

Spoiler: Spoiler

If the switch hadn't destroyed or postponed basically all the significant relationships in the MC's life for so many chapters, all the chapters I skimmed through, I think I could have hacked it. As it is, I can only say that I am vastly disappointed and I won't hang on this author's whims any longer. Too painful, too heartless, so I'm done.

RagnarBlackmane
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It was pretty good until the Author decides to flip the board. Then it's just a sunk cost.

OllieZ
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I didn't drop the story in chapter 100.

Reviewed at: Chapter 167: Paul's Night Out

*sigh* I thought everyone was being overdramatic about post-chapter100 being horrible. But they weren't.

The novel went from light fast-paced to political slow-paced. I don't mind the reset, but the world-building is taking too long.

I don't really know if the MC is acting retard or if he really is retarded. The only thing I'm certain is that the novel is stressing me out with all the mistakes the MC makes.

Rhadamanthine
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The story starts out well enough. Decent characters, progression, and writing quality.

However, the story is a bit aimless, and there is a huge, glaring problem with the conflict (and fights) in the story.

Wizard fights are usually won by who manages to draw all the mana in the area into their "lantern", thus rendering their opponent impotent (if they're also a mage.) However, I guess the author realized that if the MC actually did this, fights would be boring, so he chose an even worse option.

Virtually every conflict starts out with the MC seeing a slaver, serial killer, or someone who has tried to kill him multiple times, and his go to move nearly EVERY TIME is to try to negotiate with them, rather than form a lantern and nuke them. They predicatably form a lantern, then he gets beat up, nearly dies, and someone rescues him or a Deus Ex Machina saves him.

He's allegedly a genius due to stats, and the author keeps saying how self centered and morally grey he is, but the only people he ever kills are punch clock villains or people he needs to silence. Any time there's an actual dangerous scum bag, he has to give them an absurd number of chances to kill him and his friends before dealing with them.

It renders all progression meaningless in the story, and is absurdly ham-fisted and frustrating to read.

On top of that, after 100 chapters, the author basically hits the reset button, and virtually everyone is gone, and every character in the world seems to get even dumber, especially garth.

sincron
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its not perfect but it is one of my favorite novels on the site. hopefully the author decided to come back and continue this story sometime in the future