This is a story about Agnes.
Story has been dropped. A rewrite is in progress.
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It’s an ok story. If your a choosy reader like me maybe you will like this. I have this something intriguing feeling I can’t point out that keeps me read this story. I like female protagonist I read lots of story most of them I can guess what’s possible next scene but in this case, I can’t.
I’m not a grammar Nazi so I don’t have comment on that. As long as I understand the story and its well deliver I give 5.
Preliminary rating of 4.5, as the story is still very much in it's infancy at the time of this review. The grammar and spelling are pretty good. The setting was a bit surprising, I did not expect the story to be set where it is. The main-character shows promise and so far not much is known about the side characters, but I have a feeling that this will change.
+1 imaginary star for female protagonist, there are way too few stories with a female main character.
This story is a bit different from the other stories on here. The setting is in a modern world, but it is not about virtual reality. The mc is a female, but it is not gender bender.
The story seems well thought out. It is still early, so the story is focusing on developing the main character. The story hints at more fighting scenes in the future, and the reactions made by the characters are realistic. Grammar wise, I didn’t notice anything wrong with it.