A marvel rise

by Willox84

Fan Fiction HIATUS Action Comedy Fantasy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Magic Martial Arts Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Alexandre Grey was reborn in the marvel universe, only he didn't get any cheats. No almighty system, no super badass power, nor any transmigration into a powerfull marvel character. To add salt to injury he is far back in time to any good origine story line, and hes not friends or a close relative to any futur super power individual. He just a normal human, the only edge he has is a vast knowledge of the comic books world of marvel. So he come up with a plan, the setting is basically on nightmare mode to achieve. But if he succeed he has a chance, a small  slime chance to reach the ranks of most powerful being in the marvel universe.

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Den18
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I'm not going to rate lower then two stars because I could not get past the first couple paragraphs which is not enough to get a sense of the story. That said, are you guys kidding me here? In what world is this a five star novel? I'm not going to go into detail but I am just going to post the first paragraphs as is. 

"A ten year old boy was starred down at a news paper article, he was in his house living room floor. The paper article was about an new up and coming compagnie, stark industries Alexander Grey or just Alex was stun speechless.

"How is this possible." He mumble, for the first ten years he figure that he had come back in time on earth. But the truth was right before him, he didn't come back in time he travelled into a completely different dimension.

"wah thi this is so not fair im in the fucking marvel universe and i don't get nothing, where my mutant power or system, why god why!" He was rolling on ground with tears and snot, it a good thing that for the past ten years he had show off a above level of intelligence. While he did show off, it could easy be trace back to him remembering his past life. He had grown to a 40 year old man before dying of a heart attack. So understanding his school work and having A+ on all subject was easy, since before he was living in the year 2020 when he died. And now he was in the year 1929, and so since he had show a high level of intelligence and maturity his parents didn't mind leaving him home alone for a few hours."

verycoolname
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Great story, terrible grammar.

If you hate bad grammar and spelling, this won't be the story for you. On the other hand, if you get past those flaws there is a surprisingly good self insert fanfic. The writer has a lot of love for the characters of the marvel universe and the characters, story lines, and scenes they created are very well done. Of course, the bad grammar and spelling makes that really hard to appreciate.

Goddeth
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one of the best stories i've read, but the grammar was pretty bad

I feel like this is one of the more thought out stories that i've read and the way it feels to read keeps me wanting to read more I hope you dont plan on stopping this anytime soon

also, maor please

JaGeen
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LOVE IT EVEN THO I STRUGGLED WITH THE GRAMMAR

Essentially it was a rough ride from the start to the end , but there is a noticeable improvement in terms of grammar albeit not as perfect as i wish it to be . 

For me the idea of a marvel reincarnation is a first for me that's why i find it fresh and i know most of you will drop it cause of the bad grammar and i don't blame you for that . we will just have to see if the author is serious about what he is writing and try to mend the grammar , you can add this novel to your follow list who knows you might come to love it after the rework ( if it does happen )

as for the story , hmm it feels rushed as if the author picked the meat of the story and forgot the salad it's yummy but also unhealthy in the long term . for me personally i gave it 5 stars just cause it helped me with a night where i could not sleep and for that i wanna thank you mister Author . 

 

my review is messy since it's the first time i wrote one anyways i just love this novel .

Vantila
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Very good. All those complains about English can be resolved by later editing. 

I don't know what, but something catches my attention in this novel. I want to know whats next.

To author: don't mind complains to much, just do what you do.

And my score is just to even out situation a little.

Dragonarrow16
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It is clear that the author isn’t native to English due to the bad grammar. If you can look past that you will find an amazing storyline that could be adapted into the comics. In fact the author has started to have someone proof read his chapters now making th grammar much better.

The story knows what it is and always keeps a wall from the source material. Even when the MC is interacting with the canon the interactions never change the ‘fate’ of Marvel Universe. 

happynslappy
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Could not give a flying crap about the grammar. It's easily understandable and if you want a good story that is a very small price to pay. I love reading about the struggles of this ninja man

Fortunis Mortis
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The story has a interesting premise. Where it runs in to problems is the atrocious grammatical errors, I'm guessing not a native English speaker.

Add to that chapters 3 through 17 are basically just plagiarized knock off scenes of Captain Americas movie damn near word for word with the MC inserted in to the story as a 3rd party and it becomes mediocre at most. It picks back up at the following chapters with the MC going back to his life. We'll see how it goes.

Lord of a Thousand Blades
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What in the nine hells mutilated your English?

The horrifying thing laying before me can not daserve the 4 star rating it curnetly holds, the reasoning for this is as follows (follow carefully now): it . . . is . . . painful . . . to read. I strugled throughout two chapers and may safely say you need to hire an editor. You may have a dimond in the rough and it may get better, however I am reviewing a book--not it's best chapters--two parts matter in any writting the most: the beginning and end. Your begining is an abomination, burn it with fucking fire, this may seem harsh--it is.

Mighty Moushie
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Fair warning:  I only read the prologue.  Then skipped ahead and read the first paragraph of chapter 12.

That's all it took.  The grammer is some of the worst I have seen.  It doesn't improve judging by what little I could force myself to read.  How this made it to the trending section, I'll never know.  Save yourself the trouble, and find something else.