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Bullets meet magic in an alternate-history wild west. Near Butcher Hills is a mine where magical ink grows. Monsters spawn from the deadly depths.

Chase Craig's only goal is to do right by his dead daddy and earn enough money to get momma away from this dangerous area. The best pay means mining the upper levels for ink, and the Rangers who police The Mountain have their own plans for the young man.

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angryfan
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The first part of the book was so confusing. I don't think the author had a plan. I also feel like the main character didn't do anything. Everything that happened to the MC was the result of other peoples decisions, actions, and orders with the MC doing very little of his own accord. This made for a very weird read. I feel like this story should have been written from another character perpective since the MC has so little say in what he does.

Chillingbear
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 This is a decent fic but overall I'm not a fan.

The MC has been through some shit, but at the same moment it is like every other paragraph you are reminded that he is a little bitch in some way. The way he interacts with women, the constant self pity, all the whimpering he does. It killed off a lot of interest in this novel for me.

I struggle to find interest in a story with such an MC. 

hsteinvall
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It's a joke that this isn't among the best rated

I have zero bad things to say about this fiction. I don't know what it is doing on this site, it ought to be published properly. It is exciting and original, and is polished and worked over in a way that is seldomly seen here. Read or it's your loss.

Rfae
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This story has so much going for it and it just works the characters are awesome the premise is interesting and it’s written sooo well I loved it and can’t wait to read more I highly recommend