Ero Dungeon Evolution (RR Edition)

by ace arriande

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Harem LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Disclaimer: This story is intended for adult audiences. You should not read this if you are under the age of eighteen.

There are those who enjoy a more vanilla side of life, and then there are those who are so utterly addicted to the strange and perverse that every day is a chore because they are simply human. Damian Fletcher is one such man. Ever since he was a teenager and was visiting sites much too mature for his age, he has been obsessed with all things non-human. However, there is a problem.

Damian not only has many bizarre tastes, but he prioritizes consensual versions of his interests above all else. Alas, very little of such content is available.

But, now he has the chance to change all of that – to become what he has always wanted to become: a monster. Taken from Earth and given the chance to live a new life in a world of fantasy obeying the laws of an RPG-esque system, it is Damian's goal to truly become a monster and to leave his boringly-human body behind. He wants to have lots of consensual fun as a monster, too.


Author's Note: Please read the post-chapter note on the first chapter for further content warnings and information.

Cover art illustrated by @ehrrr_ and the full-sized image may be viewed here.

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Chapter Name Release Date
[Vol. 1 pt. 1] #NotAllTentacles ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 2] A human’s body is a boring body. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 3] A human’s body is a boring body. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 4] A human’s body is a boring body. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 5] A human’s body is a boring body. (Mature) ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 6] A human’s body is a boring body. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 7] A human’s body is a boring body. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 8] So, what was that about dungeons again? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 9] So, what was that about dungeons again? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 10] So, what was that about dungeons again? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 11] So, what was that about dungeons again? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 12] So, what was that about dungeons again? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 13] And I said, “Let there be dungeon.” ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 14] And I said, “Let there be dungeon.” ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 15] And I said, “Let there be dungeon.” ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 16] And I said, “Let there be dungeon.” ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 17] Every dungeon needs to have staff meetings. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 18] Every dungeon needs to have staff meetings. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 19 + 20] Every dungeon needs to have staff meetings. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 21] Every dungeon needs to have staff meetings. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 22] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 23] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 24] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 25] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 26] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 27] Knowledge is power. Strength is power, too. Let’s get both. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 28 + 29 + 30] I’m beginning to feel like a S** God.
[Vol. 1 pt. 31] I'm beginning to feel like a S** God.
[Vol. 1 pt. 32] This town ain’t big enough for the both of us… nor the three of us. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 33] This town ain’t big enough for the both of us… nor the three of us. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 34] This town ain’t big enough for the both of us… nor the three of us. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 35] This town ain’t big enough for the both of us… nor the three of us. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 36] This town ain’t big enough for the both of us… nor the three of us. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 37] I mean, it’s a tail. How could I pass up some literal tail? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 38 + 39 + 40] I mean, it’s a tail. How could I pass up some literal tail? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 41] I mean, it’s a tail. How could I pass up some literal tail? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 42] I really hate being patient. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 43] I really hate being patient. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 44] I really hate being patient. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 45] I really hate being patient. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 46] I really hate being patient. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 47] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 48] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 49] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 50 + 51] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 52] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 53] Running a dungeon is harder than I thought it would be. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 54] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 55] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 56] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 57] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 58] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 59] Do fairies count as *****? ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 60] I really am a bad guy. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 61 + 62 + 63] I really am a bad guy. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 64] I really am a bad guy. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 65] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 66] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 67] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 68] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 69] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 70] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 71] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 72 + 73] Maybe this will work out after all. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 74] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 75] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 76] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 77] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 78] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 79] A new day, a new trick. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 80] Of course there’s something else. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 81] Of course there’s something else. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 82] Of course there’s something else. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 83] Of course there’s something else. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 84] Of course there’s something else. ago
[Vol. 1 pt. 85] Of course there’s something else. ago
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Aihnman
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Style: It's written in a first person perspective, almost exclusively from the main character. He's not omniscient, and the readers get to explore the world with him. No infodumps here. The character interactions are well done, and fluid, organic dialogue is probably the authors strongest skill.

Story: A dungeon story that escapes the trappings of dungeon stories. There's no stagnation, sitting around waiting to respond to outside stimuli. Goals are presented, beyond simple survival. Evolutions as well; they're objectives to strive for, rather than an aribtrary system of dues ex machina.

Grammar: Even the early release chapters on Patreon get well edited before they see the light of the internet; by the time anything is publicly released, the grammar's been picked clean.

Character: Lily is perfect. Need I say more? Okay I will. The characters aren't cardboard cutouts or convenient plot devices. People are who they are because of an entire lifetime of events, and it shows through.

Kronos Tizilious
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Amazingly safe for consumption lewd

I'm ahead of the RR chapters because of patreon.

I'll be the first to say that this isn't a story meant for everyone because of the sexual content in it and its story aspect of it. For those of you who do like sexual content in a fantasy world then you'll enjoy this immensely. The author has plenty of ideas for lots of kinky shenanigans and situations. For those of you who are on the edge, you should know that it isn't entirely "sex sex sex" with the rewrite although you'll definitely be getting some spicey stuff.

If we're talking about the grammar and style it's very well crafted. The grammar doesn't need much said and the only thing I can say about style is that unlike some stories there are tables but there isn't a fixation on them.

Characters are entertaining and aren't your classic isekai carboard cutouts so that's a simple start. Characters can be stereotypes but when they are it's always the good and fun ones in my opinion.


Overall, it's a solid read for those who are looking for a fantasy with a bit of kinky action. ;)

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monoliith
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At first I was afraid, I was petrified...
Kept thinkin I could never live without EDE by my side....
But then I found Hentai Foundry, and about how RR done did me wrong...

AND I GREW STRONG

And I learned how to get along!

And so you're back!
From other space!
I just opened my email to fidn you here with that happy look upon your face!
I shoulda never given up, never let RR take away the key
If i'd known for just one second you'd be back to pleasure me!
Go on now go! Back into my inbox!
Just come around now,
Cause you're always welcome here!
Weren't you the one who tried to save me from goodbye?
Do you think I'd crumble,
Did you think I'd lay down and die?

Oh no, not I! I WILL SURVIVE!
Oh, as long as I know how to love EDE I know I'll stay alive!
I've got all my life to live
I've got all my fetishes to give, and I will survive!
I will survive

Winged Thing
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WELL. Its not banned yet and i hope it stays that way since it was damn good reading the first time round.

Rodney James Whited
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Everything this writer writes is gold, I enjoy the litrpg aspects, the characterization and the story.  Even without the actual sex scenes (which i mostly skimmed anyway) it is great.  I love the concept of his classes, which are very unique as far as i've actually seen in litrpg.  Usual it's all 'i was reincarnated, guess i'm stuch this way'  or  'i was always a monster'  i've never seen another character go 'i want to be a able to become a monster.'  I badly want to find a roleplaying system with a class like this but it seems like the only fix i'm gonna get is EDE. 

Akylas
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I know that I'm not supposed to spam review, but I've heard hype about the original from several people on RR. Regardless of how much it had to be toned down due to the new rules, I'm sure it's gonna be awesome.

 

Metaldagon
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Pretty darn good but not the best there was. I suggest if you can stomach it to read the whole unedited version.

Archiveous
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Great work with pacing and kinks

A well developed world with distinct individuals. The sex and kinks are great and diverse while staying within great limits of consent and legality. I just want to keep seeing more with more new people and even more with the current people.

Folkensedai
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this story got censored, i'm just posting this in order to protest.

beside, it's stupidly fun to read !

munch
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Poor writing, bogus characters, anemic plot.

The mc is a an unintentional mockery of what he's supposed to be. Most off puttingly a 'good dom who cares about consent'. Which isn't the case, looking at the plethora of evidence right from the start. He's dumb, thoughtless, and without redeeming qualities.

The plot is forced, in order that the mc actual has things go his way despite his brainlessness. It also introduces several characters who are two dimensional, out of place with the world building/statistical likelihood, and go along with the mc's obvious foolishness(e.g., the spider-woman).

The plotline is poorly paced and predictable.

For those reading for the sexual themes: the author has genuinely lamented he can't incorporate cuckolding mainstream into the story, in the comments of the previous time this story was posted. Yet corresponding themes are still strong. Displayed from the start.

The ideal audience (though not exclusively so) are those comfortable with cuckolding who don't mind a cascade of internal inconsistencies and contrived coincidences so long as the insipid plotline is fulfilled.