Empress of Blue Flower Mountain

by Queenofthefuzzybugs

Original COMPLETED Comedy Fantasy Historical Romance Female Lead Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Slice of Life Supernatural Wuxia Xianxia

Once upon a time, there lived two great and mighty spirits on the mountain. One loved humans, the other hated them. When their differences could not be reconciled, they came to blows, and the human loving spirit was chased out.

The banished spirit wandered the world. Rather than an exile, the spirit viewed her situation as an extended vacation. She saw all the sights and people she'd only ever heard about on the mountain.

But it was a little lonely. No one could see her or hear her. She was a rootless spirit with no place to call home.

And then, one day, she found a friend.

When anger and jealousy take everything, only love can create something new. This is the story of perseverance, sacrifice, and forgiveness.

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Book 1:
Empress of Blue Flower Mountain - Complete

Book 2:
Emperor of Blue Flower Mountain - In Progress

Book 3:
Princes of Blue Flower Mountain - N/A

Cover drawn by me, the Author!

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Amethyst Saphire
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This story is beautiful and short, the time skips aren't random and they feel well thought out.

The characters are all likeable...well except for o e but you'll know who once you read. The story itself is really good depicted a long lived life very vivedly yet precise. 

As the story is short there isn't much world building except for where the story itself takes place. The Grammer was so good I didn't spot any mistakes but still take this lightly as English is my second language so I might have just autocorrect ed it in my brain.

The story will allow you to have a few silent tears while at the end being happy

 

I highly recommend you try!

kracken1009
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 To be honest this sort of short story and xiaxian style is normaly not my cup of tea.

However from the very firts chapter, I am more than willing to say that I was captured.

Whether it was the writing style, the people, or the flow of the story itself it just sort of draws you into it and makes you fall in love with everything.

I have been with Royal Roads for a very long time and there are few first time stories that have the ability to draw me in, this is one of them.

Saturness
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On to the sequel fellow humans

 I just love every bit of this. The characters especially Jing resonate with me so much. Just wonderful job QueenFuzzy. I will start reading the sequel now i guess. I bet i will love that even more. Yay :>

Ajax_flameborn
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If ya read my review on the second book before coming here then *high fives self*  I did a good.  Now this book.... hot damn this book is good your dental bill will go up from the sweetness within.  read well, then go on to the next one and experience sublime glee when you see how much longer that one is.

SanicStrafe
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Hidden Gem, wish more people could enjoy this

This story is some of the best RRL has to offer and it’s a damn tragedy that this and it’s sequel have almost no recognition. I don’t wanna spoil anything but please I beg of you just read this if you come across it. You won’t be disappointed 🙂

AprilChan
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Got Recommended to this story. Was blown away.

One of my friends recommended me this story that they recently came across as well as this site as a whole because we love books, especially romance. (as well as it’s sequel) and well, my expectations were shattered in a good way. I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I created an account just to review it. The grammar which is the only thing I feel qualified to give a analysis on is top notch. This is the stuff you find in published novels. Kudos to you. I will now go and read the sequel after I eat some dinner. 

Claud
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will capture your soul

A very brief but touching story of a mountain spirit and a king's rise to power. The writing style and the plot had me enraptured from the very beginning. It wasn't just a piece of writing but a piece of art, chinese art to be more precise😉. It's also very intriguing how different the writing style in this story is as compared to its sequel and yet both have a touch of novel beauty. I loved them! Don't hesitate to give it a chance. 

ImperialProcrastinator
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Beautiful

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

TheFirstBlade
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Former Lurker With a first time review

This story made me want to register and all I gotta say is you earned my first review. TheFirstBlade approves. Great work author person 🤗. Going into detail I couldn’t find any mistakes with your grammar and your characters are flawless. I loved the bittersweet ending and I’m glad you chose that over the sad one