Prophesy of the Elven King

by Protocol

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Psychological LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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My name was Rick Evets at least it was before I died. I spent most of my life studying the human soul. A mistake was made and I reincarnated in a world of magic. The strange thing is they knew I was coming.

 

Story also contains traces of "Romance".

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KitarakDarcon
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I found the story very interesting and I like the directions that you are going. My only complaint is that everything seems to happen real fast and the reader seems like they are just being told about it from someone at a bar and not actually there for the story. I would suggest slowing down and fleshing out the activities that are happening. Don't tell us that everyone was feeling a certain way, show us that they feel that way. Aside from that one aspect I really like it.

ObscureReference
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Shows Promise of a deep magic system and uses plenty of tables. Not too much though!

Benny_Fantastic
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I’m really looking forward to this story