The Treacherous Mage

by PolarDivinity

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The heavens have long been something that humans believe to exist. There is not evidence nothing to support the claim, but even then people would never deny it's existence.

Babel- a word that means confusion. When used people remember the tale of Babel's Great tower which was meant to reach the heavens. Thwarted by God through creating languages that caused haos and confusion between the humans. 

But all myths were created based on something that really occured, a fantastical story based on a fact. But is the story of the grand tower really a myth? Or was it real?

Walter Babel, a 16 year old youth who went through various troubles has recieved the inheritance of his ancestor giving the reason as to the origin of his Family name, Babel. Does the myth have more to it than just what is known? What is the reason for his name "Babel"?

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